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Hải Hà Trần

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Mọi người xem giúp mình bài này với ạ. Mình sợ bị sai ngữ pháp, rồi tùa này từ kia không đúng nên đăng lên đây. Mọi người giúp mình với ạ. Cảm ơn nhiều ạ!
1. What is Independence?
Independence is a virtue of the person, self-concern, making decisions for all of his work without dependence, or help from others.
Independence is an important skill for those who want more control over their lives and do not need reminder from others to accomplish their goals. Independence will bring freedom, can do what you want without paying attention to what others think.
2. How to Be Independent?
Independence is expressed in many fields, many relationships. We need to build this virtue at an early age, to create a good habit, to rely on anyone when we can do it ourselves. In each of us, independence manifests itself in the smallest, closest and most idiosyncratic actions in our daily lives.
Independence is expressed in many fields, many relationships. We need to build this virtue at an early age, to create a good habit, to rely on anyone when we can do it ourselves. In each of us, independence manifests itself in the smallest, closest and most idiosyncratic actions in our daily lives.
In order to build independence, each indiviual must think independently: accept yourself, believe in yourself, be emotionally independent, be self-motivated, accept that life is not fair,...
However, there is a sad reality right now. Modern life is growing, parents care and cover more children have created lifestyles for the younger generation. Lazy, lazy thinking and easy to give up before the work they find difficult. They become increasingly shy and weak when they only live in a safe box created by their parents.
Life is a long and difficult journey. "On the way to success, there is no trace of lazy men". So, we need to educate ourselves to become independent, independent of others from the smallest things.
Independence will help us gain respect, love from others, help us to have a stable skill, ready to face all obstacles, challenges and achieve success in life.
 
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1. What is Independence?
Independence is a virtue of the person, self-concern, making decisions for all of his work without dependence, or help from others.
Independence is an important skill for those who want more control??? over their lives and do not need reminder from others to accomplish their goals. Independence will bring freedom, do what you want without paying attention to what others think.(Ý này là sao thế nhỉ)
2. How to Be Independent?
Independence is expressed in many fields, many relationships. We need to build this virtue at an early age, to create a good habit, to rely on anyone when we can do it ourselves.((Ý này là sao thế nhỉ)) In each of us, independence manifests itself in the smallest, closest and the most idiosyncratic actions in our daily lives.
In order to build independence, each individual must think independently: accept yourself, believe in yourself, be emotionally independent, be self-motivated, accept that life is not fair,...
However, there is a sad reality right now. Modern life is growing, parents care and cover more children have created lifestyles for the younger generation. They're lazy to think and easy to give up before the work they find difficult(Ý này là sao thế nhỉ). They become increasingly shy and weak when they only live in a safe box created by their parents.
Life is a long and difficult journey. "On the way to success, there is no trace of lazy men". So, we need to educate ourselves to become independent, independent of others from the smallest things.
Independence will help us gain respect, love from others, help us to have a stable skill, ready to face all obstacles, challenges and achieve success in life.
 

Hải Hà Trần

Học sinh mới
Thành viên
22 Tháng mười 2018
5
2
6
22
Hải Dương
THPT Chí Linh
1. What is Independence?
Independence is a virtue of the person, self-concern, making decisions for all of his work without dependence, or help from others.
Independence is an important skill for those who want more control??? (chỗ này phải sửa thế nào vậy??? :( ) over their lives and do not need reminder from others to accomplish their goals. Independence will bring freedom, do what you want without paying attention to what others think.(chỗ này ý mình là "Độc lập mang lại sự tự do, không phải quan tâm đến suy nghĩ của người khác" nhưng mình không biết phải diễn đạt làm sao cho đỡ lủng củng :( )
2. How to Be Independent?
Independence is expressed in many fields, many relationships. We need to build this virtue at an early age, to create a good habit, NOT to rely on anyone when we can do it ourselves.((chỗ này mình bị thiếu chữ "not")) In each of us, independence manifests itself in the smallest, closest and the most idiosyncratic actions in our daily lives.
In order to build independence, each individual must think independently: accept yourself, believe in yourself, be emotionally independent, be self-motivated, accept that life is not fair,...
However, there is a sad reality right now. Modern life is growing, parents care and cover more children have created lifestyles for the younger generation. They're lazy to think and easy to give up before the work they find difficult(Ý mình là "Họ lười suy nghĩ và dễ dàng bỏ cuộc trước những việc mà họ thấy khó khăn" Sai chỗ nào cậu chỉ giúp mình với :(). They become increasingly shy and weak when they only live in a safe box created by their parents.
Life is a long and difficult journey. "On the way to success, there is no trace of lazy men". So, we need to educate ourselves to become independent, independent of others from the smallest things.
Independence will help us gain respect, love from others, help us to have a stable skill, ready to face all obstacles, challenges and achieve success in life.
Chỗ nào chưa được cậu sủa lại giúp mình được không? Cảm ơn cậu nhiều :Tuzki3
 

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Chỗ nào chưa được cậu sủa lại giúp mình được không? Cảm ơn cậu nhiều :Tuzki3
Thì mình đã sửa 1 số lỗi cho bạn rồi
Còn những chỗ in đậm là những chỗ mà mình hoàn toàn không hiểu bạn muốn nói gì
Chỗ "more control" có thể chấp nhận được
Còn những chỗ còn lại Chưa ổn. Bạn phải diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn
 
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22 Tháng mười 2018
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THPT Chí Linh
1. What is Independence?
Independence is a virtue of the person, self-concern, making decisions for all of his work without dependence, or help from others.
Independence is an important skill for those who want more control??? (chỗ này phải sửa thế nào vậy??? :( ) over their lives and do not need reminder from others to accomplish their goals. Independence will bring freedom, do what you want without paying attention to what others think.(chỗ này ý mình là "Độc lập mang lại sự tự do, không phải quan tâm đến suy nghĩ của người khác" nhưng mình không biết phải diễn đạt làm sao cho đỡ lủng củng :( )
2. How to Be Independent?
Independence is expressed in many fields, many relationships. We need to build this virtue at an early age, to create a good habit, NOT to rely on anyone when we can do it ourselves.((chỗ này mình bị thiếu chữ "not")) In each of us, independence manifests itself in the smallest, closest and the most idiosyncratic actions in our daily lives.
In order to build independence, each individual must think independently: accept yourself, believe in yourself, be emotionally independent, be self-motivated, accept that life is not fair,...
However, there is a sad reality right now. Modern life is growing, parents care and cover more children have created lifestyles for the younger generation. They're lazy to think and easy to give up before the work they find difficult(Ý mình là "Họ lười suy nghĩ và dễ dàng bỏ cuộc trước những việc mà họ thấy khó khăn" Sai chỗ nào cậu chỉ giúp mình với :(). They become increasingly shy and weak when they only live in a safe box created by their parents.
Life is a long and difficult journey. "On the way to success, there is no trace of lazy men". So, we need to educate ourselves to become independent, independent of others from the smallest things.
Independence will help us gain respect, love from others, help us to have a stable skill, ready to face all obstacles, challenges and achieve success in life.

Cậu xem giúp mình với! Thật sự mình không biết phải sửa lại thế nào cho đúng nghĩa mình muốn nữa :( Cảm ơn cậu nhiều!!!
 
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1. What is Independence?
Independence is a virtue of the person, self-concern, making decisions for all of his work without dependence, or help from others.
Independence is an important skill for those who want more control??? (chỗ này OK ròi ) over their lives and do not need reminder from others to accomplish their goals. Independence will bring freedom, do what you want without paying attention to what others think.(chỗ này ý mình là "Độc lập mang lại sự tự do, không phải quan tâm đến suy nghĩ của người khác" nhưng mình không biết phải diễn đạt làm sao cho đỡ lủng củng :( )
Makes you do what you.........

2. How to Be Independent?
Independence is expressed in many fields, many relationships. We need to build this virtue at an early age, to create a good habit, NOT to rely on anyone when we can do it ourselves.((chỗ này mình bị thiếu chữ "not")) In each of us, independence manifests itself in the smallest, closest and the most idiosyncratic actions in our daily lives.
In order to build independence, each individual must think independently: accept yourself, believe in yourself, be emotionally independent, be self-motivated, accept that life is not fair,...
However, there is a sad reality right now. Modern life is growing, parents care and cover more children have created lifestyles for the younger generation. They're lazy to think and easy to give up before the work they find difficult(Ý mình là "Họ lười suy nghĩ và dễ dàng bỏ cuộc trước những việc mà họ thấy khó khăn" Sai chỗ nào cậu chỉ giúp mình với :().
Before thường là prep thời gian. Với lại câu này cũng ko cần có "trước"
Give up the work (that) they find difficult
Nếu bạn muốn xài "trước" thì phải có prep tương ứng là "in front of"
They become increasingly shy and weak when they only live in a safe box created by their parents.
Life is a long and difficult journey. "On the way to success, there is no trace of lazy men". So, we need to educate ourselves to become independent, independent of others from the smallest things.
Independence will help us gain respect, love from others, help us to have a stable skill, ready to face all obstacles, challenges and achieve success in life.
 
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