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đề bài:
Write a letter.
This is part of a letter you receive from an English friend.
"... I know you often go to the cinema. Tell me about the last film you saw and whether you enjoyed it...."
bài làm
Hồ Chí Minh city, 9/5/2019
Dear Sarah:
How are you? What about your study? Thank for your letter? What do you in your free time?. I often go to the cinema to watch new films. The latest fime I watch is CORGY-CHU CHO HOANG GIA. I enjoyed it very much. I will tell you about this film.
This film is a short fim, was directed by Ben Stassen. It talks about Rex, the most beloved royal corgi, has left the palace and strayed. he has to go a long and challenging journey to find my queen in the castle. This film is moving, meaningful and must-see. It has a happy ending: Corgi came back to the Queen and live happily in the castle. The special effects, visuals, and music are also incredible.
In conclusion, this film is good and you should go to the cinema to enjoy it right now
Best wishes
Fiona Fung
em có nhu cầu thi b1 (chứng chỉ pet), đây là 1 trong những đề writing em tìm online trên mạng. các anh chị check hộ em với, @Phạm Dương @Tuấn Anh Phan Nguyễn help me

 
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Dear Sarah:
How are you? What about your study? Thank for your letter? What do you in your free time?. I often go to the cinema to watch new films. The latest fime I watch is CORGY-CHU CHO HOANG GIA. I enjoyed it very much. I will tell you about this film.
This film is a short fim, was directed by Ben Stassen. It talks about Rex, the most beloved royal corgi, has left the palace and strayed. he has to go a long and challenging journey to find my queen in the castle. This film is moving, meaningful and must-see. It has a happy ending: Corgi came back to the Queen and live happily in the castle. The special effects, visuals, and music are also incredible.
In conclusion, this film is good and you should go to the cinema to enjoy it right now
Best wishes
Fiona Fung

đề bài:
Write a letter.
This is part of a letter you receive from an English friend.


"... I know you often go to the cinema. Tell me about the last film you saw and whether you enjoyed it...."
bài làm
Hồ Chí Minh city, 9/5/2019
Dear Sarah:
How are you? What about your study? Thank for your letter? What do you in your free time?. I often go to the cinema to watch new films. The latest fime I watch is CORGY-CHU CHO HOANG GIA. I enjoyed it very much. I will tell you about this film.
This film is a short fim, was directed by Ben Stassen. It talks about Rex, the most beloved royal corgi, has left the palace and strayed. he has to go a long and challenging journey to find my queen in the castle. This film is moving, meaningful and must-see. It has a happy ending: Corgi came back to the Queen and live happily in the castle. The special effects, visuals, and the music are also incredible.
In conclusion, this film is good and you should go to the cinema to enjoy it right now
Best wishes
Fiona Fung
em có nhu cầu thi b1 (chứng chỉ pet), đây là 1 trong những đề writing em tìm online trên mạng. các anh chị check hộ em với, @Phạm Dương @Tuấn Anh Phan Nguyễn help me





What do you do in your free time
to find his queen
to go on a long
lived

to nghi cau can luyen nhieu ! co ve con sai o tense cau a, nhung bai cung co nhung tu vung khong pho bien nhu :The latest fime I watch,he most beloved royal corgi, day la mot diem tot !,cau co gang phat huy nhe ! (xin loi,to bi liet ban phim)
 

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đề bài:
Write a letter.
This is part of a letter you receive from an English friend.
"... I know you often go to the cinema. Tell me about the last film you saw and whether you enjoyed it...."
bài làm
Hồ Chí Minh city, 9/5/2019
Dear Sarah:
How are you? What about your study? Thank for your letter? What do you in your free time?. I often go to the cinema to watch new films. The latest fime I watch is CORGY-CHU CHO HOANG GIA. I enjoyed it very much. I will tell you about this film.
This film is a short fim, was directed by Ben Stassen. It talks about Rex, the most beloved royal corgi, has left the palace and strayed. he has to go a long and challenging journey to find my queen in the castle. This film is moving, meaningful and must-see. It has a happy ending: Corgi came back to the Queen and live happily in the castle. The special effects, visuals, and music are also incredible.
In conclusion, this film is good and you should go to the cinema to enjoy it right now
Best wishes
Fiona Fung
em có nhu cầu thi b1 (chứng chỉ pet), đây là 1 trong những đề writing em tìm online trên mạng. các anh chị check hộ em với, @Phạm Dương @Tuấn Anh Phan Nguyễn help me
Hồ Chí Minh city,( đừng ghi dấu nha bạn, tiếng anh mà) 9/5/2019
Dear Sarah
How are you? What about your study? Thank for your letter?(bỏ dấu chấm hỏi đi bạn nhé) What do you do (thêm do nha)in your free time?. In my free time, I often go to the cinema to watch new films. The latest fime(film mới đúng chứ) I watch is CORGY-CHU CHO HOANG GIA. I enjoyed it very much. I will tell you about this film.
This film is a short fim, it was directed by Ben Stassen. It talks about Rex, the most beloved royal corgi, has left the palace and strayed. he has to go a long and challenging journey to find my (thay my bằng his nhé) queen in the castle. This film is moving, meaningful and must-see. It has a happy ending: Corgi came back to the Queen and live happily in the castle. The special effects, visuals, and music are also incredible.
In conclusion, I think this film is good and you should go to the cinema to enjoy it right now
Best wishes
Fiona Fung
(mình sửa chưa chắc đúng hết ,có gì thông cảm nha)
 

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Ho Chi Minh City, 9/5/2019
Dear Sarah
How are you? What about your study? Thank for your letter. What do you do in your free time? (sao vừa vào đầu thư đã hỏi lắm thế em???) In my free time, I often go to the cinema to watch new films. The latest film I watch is CORGY-CHU CHO HOANG GIA (where?). I enjoyed it very much so I will tell you about this film.
This film is a short film, it was directed by Ben Stassen. It talks about Rex, the most beloved royal corgi, has left the palace and strayed. he had to go along and challenging journey to find his queen in the castle. (theo cảm nhận của tôi thì ...)This film is moving, meaningful and must-see. It has a happy ending: Corgi came back to the Queen and live happily in the castle. The special effects, visuals, and music are also incredible.
In conclusion, I think this film is good and you should go to the cinema to enjoy it right now (vội bắt người ta đi xem thế em?) (nên chuyển sang câu wish nha)
Best wishes
Fiona Fung
 
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