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[Lacy Jogu]

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hello , everyone . My name is ......I'M 12 year old. I'm study class 6E at Le Binh secondary school . Do you know?TV is very important to everyone . When we sit in front of the TV with the remote in hand , we can easily connect to the world through the screen . it's very convenient . You definitely like watching TV , right? . That's right , because TV has so many useful programs . Many people tell me that watching TV is not good , but TV also has great benefits . Sau đây tôi sẽ giới thiệu cho các bạn một số chương trình . VTV1 gives us more knowledge about daily news . This is a news . On VTV2 and VTV3 there are often entertaining programs. You always remember that watch time is the most important and you should spend more time outdoors. You can learn alot of different knowledge through thematicTV channels like cooking, maths , shopping,...Beside,watching TV much will be harmful tho health.
nhờ mọi người nhận xét giúp mình ạ
có chỗ nào sai sót sửa cho mình lun
rồi viết thêm cho mình về tác hại khi xem nhiều TV luôn , viết ngắn thôi nha

 

[Hazu No No Money]

hello , everyone . My name is ......I'M 12 year old. I'm study class 6E at Le Binh secondary school . Do you know that TV is very important to everyone . When we watch tv , we can easily connect to the world through the screen . it's very convenient . You definitely like watching TV , right? . That's right , because TV has so many useful programs . Many people told me that watching TV is not good , but in my opinion TV also has great benefits . Sau đây tôi sẽ giới thiệu cho các bạn một số chương trình . VTV1 gives us more knowledge about daily news . This is a news(?) . VTV2 and VTV3 often have entertaining programs.However, You should remember that the time you spend to watch TV should be balanced with the time for outdoor activities. Although You can learn alot of different knowledge through thematicTV channels like cooking, maths , shopping,watching TV too much will be harmful tho health.

 

[Lacy Jogu]

mấy chỗ bạn sử có chính xác 100% ko

 

[Hazu No No Money]

mấy chỗ bạn sử có chính xác 100% ko

Mình có sửa lại rồi.Bạn xem lại nha !
Còn về đúng mình chắc khoảng 95%.

 

[anbinhf]

hello , everyone . My name is ......I'M 12 year old. I'm study class 6E at Le Binh secondary school . Do you know?TV is very important to everyone . When we sit in front of the TV with the remote in hand , we can easily connect to the world through the screen . it's very convenient . You definitely like watching TV , right? . That's right , because TV has so many useful programs . Many people tell me that watching TV is not good , but TV also has great benefits . Sau đây tôi sẽ giới thiệu cho các bạn một số chương trình . VTV1 gives us more knowledge about daily news . This is a news . On VTV2 and VTV3 there are often entertaining programs. You always remember that watch time is the most important and you should spend more time outdoors. You can learn alot of different knowledge through thematicTV channels like cooking, maths , shopping,...Beside,watching TV much will be harmful tho health.
nhờ mọi người nhận xét giúp mình ạ
có chỗ nào sai sót sửa cho mình lun
rồi viết thêm cho mình về tác hại khi xem nhiều TV luôn , viết ngắn thôi nha

Hello, everyone. My name is ...... I'm 12 years old. I study class 6E at Le Binh secondary school. Do you know?TV is very important to everyone. When we sit in front of the TV with the remote in hand, we can easily connect to the world through the screen. It's very convenient. You definitely like watching TV, right? That's right because the TV has so many useful programs. Many people tell me that watching TV is not good, but TV also has great benefits. Sau đây tôi sẽ giới thiệu cho các bạn một số chương trình. VTV1 gives us more knowledge about the daily news. This is news. On VTV2 and VTV3 there are often entertaining programs. You always remember that watch time is the most important and you should spend more time outdoors. You can learn a lot of different knowledge through thematicTV channels like cooking, maths, shopping,... watching TV much will be harmful to health.
em dùng gg dịch và dịch sót 1 câu, chưa chuyển sang tiếng anh e nhé
sau từ right em cũng bỏ dấu phẩy nha
à..a lot of em k được viết liền alot nha

 

[LLunaa]

I'm study class 6E at Le Binh secondary school

I study class 6E at Le Binh secondary school

I study in class 6E at Le Binh secondary school

Do you know?TV is very important to everyone

Do you know?TV is very important to everyone.

Do you know that TV is very important to everyone . (câu này mình đồng ý như bạn @ngoxuanthanh1977@gmail.com)

That's right because the TV has so many useful programs

theo mình thì không cần thiết phải thêm the trước TV đâu

Many people tell me that watching TV is not good , but TV also has great benefits

Many people tell me that watching TV is not good , but in my opinion TV also has great benefits (sửa câu này như @ngoxuanthanh1977@gmail.com nha)

Sau đây tôi sẽ giới thiệu cho các bạn một số chương trình

And here I will introduce you some programs

VTV1 gives us more knowledge about daily news . This is a news

câu "this is a news cho vào đoạn là sao nhỉ mình không hiểu lắm. Theo mình thì bỏ câu "This is a news" đi

VTV1 gives us more knowledge about daily news

thêm "the" phía trước "daily news" như @Trần Hoàng Hạ Đan đã sửa

You always remember that watch time is the most important and you should spend more time outdoors.

.However,You should remember that the time you spend to watch TV should be balanced with the time for outdoor activities (đồng ý với @ngoxuanthanh1977@gmail.com )

You can learn alot of different knowledge through thematicTV channels like cooking, maths , shopping,...Beside,watching TV much will be harmful tho health.

You can learn a lot of different knowledge through thematicTV channels like cooking, maths , shopping,...But watching TV too much will be harmful for your healt[TEX][/TEX]h

hoàn chỉnh:
Hello, everyone. My name is ...... I'm 12 years old. I study in class 6E at Le Binh secondary school.Do you know that TV is very important to everyone .When we sit in front of the TV with the remote in hand , we can easily connect to the world through the screen . it's very convenient . You definitely like watching TV , right? . That's right , because TV has so many useful programs .Many people tell me that watching TV is not good , but in my opinion TV also has great benefits .And here, I will introduce you some programs. VTV1 gives us more knowledge about the daily news.On VTV2 and VTV3 there are often entertaining programs.However,You should remember that the time you spend to watch TV should be balanced with the time for outdoor activities.You can learn a lot of different knowledge through thematicTV channels like cooking, maths , shopping,...But watching TV too much will be harmful to your health

 

[Empe_Tchanz]

câu "this is a news cho vào đoạn là sao nhỉ mình không hiểu lắm. Theo mình thì bỏ câu "This is a news" đi

mình nghĩ chắc là ý bạn ấy muốn nói kiểu :" VTV1 cho chúng ta thêm nhiều kiến thức về tin tức hàng ngày. Đó là thời sự" Mình cũng chỉ đoán vậy thôi còn không biết bạn kia ntn :3