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[hip2608]

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[Nguyễn Thị Ngọc Bảo]

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My secondary school is like a paradise with fresh air, scenic surroundings and picturesque people next door. The school is located in the countryside between large green fields. Simple design with three buildings perpendicular to each other and many shade trees and flowers give you a sense of closeness. Besides, there is a vacant lot for students to play football, jump rope in the afternoon every school. Moreover, all teachers are very dedicated and dedicated. In addition, I have close friends who are always with me and help me whenever I have difficulty. In a nutshell, the school has left a very beautiful imprint of its childhood experiences and the memory of the school will never fade in your mind.
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[hip2608]

My secondary school is like a paradise with fresh air, scenic surroundings and picturesque people next door. The school is located in the countryside between large green fields. Simple design with three buildings perpendicular to each other and many shade trees and flowers give you a sense of closeness. Besides, there is a vacant lot for students to play football, jump rope in the afternoon every school. Moreover, all teachers are very dedicated and dedicated. In addition, I have close friends who are always with me and help me whenever I have difficulty. In a nutshell, the school has left a very beautiful imprint of its childhood experiences and the memory of the school will never fade in your mind.
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bài naỳ e chỉ có 1 lỗi nhỏ thôi:

Besides, there is a vacant lot for students to play football, jump rope in the afternoon every school.

Besides, there is a vacant lot for students to play football, jump rope in the afternoon at/ of every school.
P/s: nhưng nếu e viết Writing bình thường thì GV chắc cũng ko soi kĩ vậy đâu

 

[Coco99]

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Uầy, đề ok nha, đề này chém là hay nhất. ^^
Mk chém thể nào cx quá tay, bạn lược bỏ mấy cái nó viển vông nha.
p/s Mk toàn nói sự thật ^^
So, you know, as a school where providing a good environment for students and teachers, my school, isn't the best but good enough. It is very good with great factilities and services. I am proud to be a student in my school. Our school provide with great activities and especially giving us many opportunities to work and learn. We have got a basketball court, a big hall where there are two drama rooms, we also have a hockey field, a tennis court and a soocer field but they are all in one big space which is seperated by colour lines. We have a big oval where you play softball, cricket and rugby which I am not keen on playing that. I mean, the best thing about my school is our swimming pool. It is so good, it opens all the time and next to it is a gym. I'm not really intersted in our gym because I would totally feel weird when I get in there because i am not that 'mascular' and there's like no muscle on me. So yes, I am sort of coming there to play and hang out with my friends instead of learning our core subjects ^^
@hip2608 Chế đâu nhỉ, vào đọc trường em để suýt xoa đi ^^
Sửa giùm Coco nx nha nha ^^

 

[hip2608]

So, you know, as a school where providing a good environment for students and teachers, my school, isn't the best but good enough. It is very good with great factilities and services. I am proud to be a student in my school. Our school provide with great activities and especially giving us many opportunities to work and learn. We have got a basketball court, a big hall where there are two drama rooms, we also have a hockey field, a tennis court and a soocer field but they are all in one big space which is seperated by colour lines. We have a big oval where you play softball, cricket and rugby which I am not keen on playing that. I mean, the best thing about my school is our swimming pool. It is so good, it opens all the time and next to it is a gym. I'm not really intersted in our gym because I would totally feel weird when I get in there because i am not that 'mascular' and there's like no muscle on me ^^

chế đây....
chị sửa bài cho e này:

It is very good with great factilities and services

It is very good with great facilities and services

We have got a basketball court, a big hall where there are two drama rooms, we also have a hockey field, a tennis court and a soocer field but they are all in one big space which is seperated by colour lines

We have got a basketball court, a big hall where there are two drama rooms, we also have a hockey field, a tennis court ,and a soccer field but they are all in one big space which is separated by colour lines

I'm not really intersted in our gym because I would totally feel weird when I get in there because i am not that 'mascular' and there's like no muscle on me

I'm not really interested in our gym because I would totally feel weird when I get in there because I (không bao giờ đc viết là ''i'' )am not that 'muscular' ('mascular' ???? ) and there's like no muscle on me
P/s: đánh máy cho cẩn thận vào...toàn bị lỗi chữ thế???