Ngoại ngữ Luyện tập dạng đề tìm lỗi sai trong đoạn văn

[tuananh982]

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Các bài tập tìm lỗi sai trong đoạn văn trong những đề thi HSG.
Lịch đăng bài: không có lịch cụ thể.
Và đây là một topic mở nha mọi người :v
#1FM10. Find 10 mistakes and correct them.
Air pollution are => is a cause of ill- health in human beings. In a lot of countries there are laws limiting the amount of smoke which factories can produce. Despite there isn’t enough informations on the effects of smoke in atmosphere, doctors have proved that air pollution cause lung diseases. The gases from the exhausts of cars have also increasing air pollution in most cities. The lead in petrol products produces a poisonous gas which often collets in busy streets surrounding by high buildings. Children who live in areas that there is a lot of lead at atmosphere cannot think as quickly as other child and a clumsy when they use them hands. There are other long-term affects of pollution. If the gases in the atmosphere continue to increase, the earth’s climate may become warmest. A lot of the ice near the Poles may melt and may cause serious floods.

 

[Diệp Ngọc Tuyên]

Air pollution are a cause of ill- health in human beings. In a lot of countries there are laws limiting the amount of smoke which factories can produce. Despite there isn’t enough informations on the effects of smoke in atmosphere, doctors have proved that air pollution cause lung diseases. The gases from the exhausts of cars have also increasing air pollution in most cities. The lead in petrol products produces a poisonous gas which often collets in busy streets surrounding by high buildings. Children who live in areas that there is a lot of lead at atmosphere cannot think as quickly as other child and a clumsy when they use them hands. There are other long-term affects of pollution. If the gases in the atmosphere continue to increase, the earth’s climate may become warmest. A lot of the ice near the Poles may melt and may cause serious floods.
are -> is
despite -> although
informations -> information
atmosphere -> the atmosphere
increasing -> increased
them -> their
warmest -> warmer
the -> bỏ
Tui chỉ tìm được 8 lỗi.

 

[Thanh Trúc Đỗ]

Các bạn lưu ý mình có điều chỉnh lịch đăng bài với mật độ dày hơn (3 bài một tuần) thay vì 2 bài một tuần, các bạn nhớ theo dõi kĩ nha ^^
#2. Depending on what?
Are some people born clever and others born (1) ............? Or is intelligence developed by our environment and our experience? Strangely enough, the answer to (2) ............ these questions is ‘ yes’. To some extent, our intelligence is given at birth, and no amount of special education can make a genius out of a (3) ............ born with low intelligence less than (4)............ who lives in rich and varied surrounding. Thus the limits of a person’s intelligence are fixed at birth but (5)............ or not he reaches those limits depend (6)............ his environment. This view, now held by most experts, can be supported in a number of ways. It’s easy to show that intelligence is something we are born with (7)............ we take two unrelated people at random from the population. It’s likely that (8)............ degrees of intelligence will be completely different. If, on the other hand, we take children- identical twins, they will very likely be (9)............ intelligent as other. This clearly suggests that (10)............ depends on birth.

Are some people born clever and others born (1) stupid ? Or is intelligence developed by our environment and our experience? Strangely enough, the answer to (2) solve these questions is ‘ yes’. To some extent, our intelligence is given at birth, and no amount of special education can make a genius out of a (3) person born with low intelligence less than (4)person who lives in rich and varied surrounding. Thus the limits of a person’s intelligence are fixed at birth but (5) have or not he reaches those limits depend (6)on his environment. This view, now held by most experts, can be supported in a number of ways. It’s easy to show that intelligence is something we are born with (7) explaination we take two unrelated people at random from the population. It’s likely that (8) in degrees of intelligence will be completely different. If, on the other hand, we take children- identical twins, they will very likely be (9) as intelligent as other. This clearly suggests that (10) intelligence depends on birth.
P/s: Điền vậy thôi chứ không biết có sai toàn tập không nữa? TT

 

[tuananh982]

Air pollution are a cause of ill- health in human beings. In a lot of countries there are laws limiting the amount of smoke which factories can produce. Despite there isn’t enough informations on the effects of smoke in atmosphere, doctors have proved that air pollution cause lung diseases. The gases from the exhausts of cars have also increasing air pollution in most cities. The lead in petrol products produces a poisonous gas which often collets in busy streets surrounding by high buildings. Children who live in areas that there is a lot of lead at atmosphere cannot think as quickly as other child and a clumsy when they use them hands. There are other long-term affects of pollution. If the gases in the atmosphere continue to increase, the earth’s climate may become warmest. A lot of the ice near the Poles may melt and may cause serious floods.
are -> is
despite -> although
informations -> information
atmosphere -> the atmosphere
increasing -> increased
them -> their
warmest -> warmer
the -> bỏ
Tui chỉ tìm được 8 lỗi.

chết quên mất are -> is là một ví dụ cho trước :vv Mà bác thấy 8 lỗi là giỏi rồi, tỉ lệ đúng cũng rất cao ^^
KEY #1
Air pollution are => is a cause of ill- health in human beings. In a lot of countries there are laws limiting the amount of smoke which factories can produce. Despite there isn’t enough informations on the effects of smoke in atmosphere, doctors have proved that air pollution cause lung diseases. The gases from the exhausts of cars have also increasing air pollution in most cities. The lead in petrol products produces a poisonous gas which often collects in busy streets surrounding by high buildings. Children who live in areas that there is a lot of lead at atmosphere cannot think as quickly as other child and a clumsy when they use them hands. There are other long-term affects of pollution. If the gases in the atmosphere continue to increase, the earth’s climate may become warmest. A lot of the ice near the Poles may melt and may cause serious floods.

1. Despite → Although/though Đằng sau có mệnh đề	2. informations → information	3. increasing → increased Thì HTHT (có have không thể + V_ing)	4. products → produces ...petrol produces (cụm N) produces (V)...	5. surrounding → surrounded (được bao quanh) surrounding (adj) lân cận
6. that → where	7. child → children	8. them → their TTSH + N	9. affects (v) → effects (n) long-term effects: ảnh hưởng lâu dài	10. warmest → warmer

[TBODY] [/TBODY]

Về in the atmosphere thì trong đáp án họ không đưa ra lỗi sai này (cũng đã đủ 10 lỗi sai). Khi làm bài các bạn phải tùy cơ ứng biến thôi ~ Tuy vậy mình nghĩ ở đây phải thêm "the" vào mới hợp nghĩa, nên các bạn cũng có thể ghi chú lại cái này nha

 

[tuananh982]

#2FM15. There are 15 lines in this paragraph, find mistakes in these lines, but some lines don't include any mistake, so be careful :v
I’m really a keen on going to the cinema, so I’ve got lots of favorite 1.________
films. But the best one as I’ve seen lately is called Pressure. In some 2.________
ways, I suppose that you could regard it as a detective film but it’s 3.________
different from most films of that one kind because the characters are 4.________
they such unusual people. The detective in it, for example, is a computer 5. _______
expert who solves crimes on her computer using information given to 6.________
her by her assistants, who go out and interview to people. The case in the film 7.________
concerns about the wife of a millionaire, who has gone missing. 8.________
Sometimes the plot gets a bit complicated but it isn’t too hard to keep 9.________
up with it. There are a lot of strange characters in it, such as a man 10._______
who always wears two hat on, and some of the scenes really made me 11. ______
laugh. Also there is a big surprise at the end but I won’t say you what 12. ______
that is in the case you go to see it. It’s very well-acted and I also like the music 13._______
in it. But what do I really like about the film is that it’s so 14. ______
original – I’ve never seen another film quite like that. 15._______

 

[Asuna Yuuki]

Are some people born clever and others born (1) .....stupid.......? Or is intelligence developed by our environment and our experience? Strangely enough, the answer to (2) ......both...... these questions is ‘ yes’. To some extent, our intelligence is given at birth, and no amount of special education can make a genius out of a (3) ....child........ born with low intelligence less than (4)......child...... who lives in rich and varied surrounding. Thus the limits of a person’s intelligence are fixed at birth but (5).....whether....... or not he reaches those limits depend (6).......on..... his environment. This view, now held by most experts, can be supported in a number of ways. It’s easy to show that intelligence is something we are born with (7)......if...... we take two unrelated people at random from the population. It’s likely that (8)......their...... degrees of intelligence will be completely different. If, on the other hand, we take children- identical twins, they will very likely be (9).......as..... intelligent as other. This clearly suggests that (10)......intelligence...... depends on birth.

 

[tuananh982]

Are some people born clever and others born (1) stupid ? Or is intelligence developed by our environment and our experience? Strangely enough, the answer to (2) solve these questions is ‘ yes’. To some extent, our intelligence is given at birth, and no amount of special education can make a genius out of a (3) person born with low intelligence less than (4)person who lives in rich and varied surrounding. Thus the limits of a person’s intelligence are fixed at birth but (5) have or not he reaches those limits depend (6)on his environment. This view, now held by most experts, can be supported in a number of ways. It’s easy to show that intelligence is something we are born with (7) explaination we take two unrelated people at random from the population. It’s likely that (8) in degrees of intelligence will be completely different. If, on the other hand, we take children- identical twins, they will very likely be (9) as intelligent as other. This clearly suggests that (10) intelligence depends on birth.
P/s: Điền vậy thôi chứ không biết có sai toàn tập không nữa? TT

Đúng một nửa bác ha
Câu 7 lưu ý chữ "explain" khi chuyển thành danh từ sẽ là "explanation" (vứt "i" đi nhé)

Are some people born clever and others born (1) .....stupid.......? Or is intelligence developed by our environment and our experience? Strangely enough, the answer to (2) ......both...... these questions is ‘ yes’. To some extent, our intelligence is given at birth, and no amount of special education can make a genius out of a (3) ....child........ born with low intelligence less than (4)......child...... who lives in rich and varied surrounding. Thus the limits of a person’s intelligence are fixed at birth but (5).....whether....... or not he reaches those limits depend (6).......on..... his environment. This view, now held by most experts, can be supported in a number of ways. It’s easy to show that intelligence is something we are born with (7)......if...... we take two unrelated people at random from the population. It’s likely that (8)......their...... degrees of intelligence will be completely different. If, on the other hand, we take children- identical twins, they will very likely be (9).......as..... intelligent as other. This clearly suggests that (10)......intelligence...... depends on birth.

Đúng hết rồi ~
Đ/c: câu 4 chỗ trống thực ra cần điền "who", chữ "who" ở sau bị thừa mất.
KEY #2
Are some people born clever and others born (1) stupid? Or is intelligence developed by our environment and our experience? Strangely enough, the answer to (2) both these questions is ‘ yes’. To some extent, our intelligence is given at birth, and no amount of special education can make a genius out of a (3) child born with low intelligence less than (4) who lives in rich and varied surrounding. Thus the limits of a person’s intelligence are fixed at birth but (5) whether or not he reaches those limits depend (6) on his environment. This view, now held by most experts, can be supported in a number of ways. It’s easy to show that intelligence is something we are born with (7) if we take two unrelated people at random from the population. It’s likely that (8) their degrees of intelligence will be completely different. If, on the other hand, we take children- identical twins, they will very likely be (9) as intelligent as other. This clearly suggests that (10) intelligence depends on birth.

(1) stupid intelligent >< stupid	(2) both	(3) child	(4) who	(5) whether whether (+ MĐ) or not: dù có... hay không (hai vế trái nhau)
(6) on depend on: phụ thuộc vào	(7) if	(8) their	(9) as Ở sau có as => trước cũng có as (để có so sánh bằng)	(10) intelligence

[TBODY] [/TBODY]

 

[Asuna Yuuki]

I’m really a keen on going to the cinema, so I’ve got lots of favorite 1.__keen on______
films. But the best one as I’ve seen lately is called Pressure. In some 2.____bỏ____
ways, I suppose that you could regard it as a detective film but it’s 3.________
different from most films of that one kind because the characters are 4.__bỏ______
they such unusual people. The detective in it, for example, is a computer 5. __bỏ_____
expert who solves crimes on her computer using information given to 6.________
her by her assistants, who go out and interview to people. The case in the film 7.__bỏ______
concerns about the wife of a millionaire, who has gone missing. 8.____bỏ____
Sometimes the plot gets a bit complicated but it isn’t too hard to keep 9.________
up with it. There are a lot of strange characters in it, such as a man 10._______
who always wears two hat on, and some of the scenes really made me 11. ___hats___
laugh. Also there is a big surprise at the end but I won’t say you what 12. __bỏ____
that is in the case you go to see it. It’s very well-acted and I also like the music 13.__in case_____
in it. But what do I really like about the film is that it’s so 14. _bỏ_____
original – I’ve never seen another film quite like that. 15._______

 

[tuananh982]

Thirteen-year-olds not spend as much money as their parents suspect - at least not according to the findings of a recent survey, Money and Charge.
The survey included three hundred teenagers, 13-17 years old, from all over British.
By the time they reach their teens, most children see its weekly allowance rise dramatically to an amazing national average of ₤5.14.
Two thirds think they get enough money, but most expect doing something to get it.
Although they have more cash, worry about debt is increasing between teenagers.
Therefore, the majority of children do an effort to save for the future.
Greater access to cash among teenagers does not, however, mean that they are more irresponsible as result.
The economic recession seems to have encouraged cautious attitudes to money, even in the case of children in these ages.
Instead of wasting what pocket money they have on sweets or magazines, the 13-year-olds took part in the survey seem to respond to the situation by saving more than half of their cash.
1. not spend => do not spend (thiếu trợ động từ)
2. British (người Anh) => Britian (nước Anh)
3. its => their (children là số nhiều)
4. doing => to do (trước có enough)
5. between (đi với giới từ and) => among
6. do => make
7. as result => as a result (cho nên)
8. in => at
9. took part in => who took part in

Chuẩn luôn!!!
Các bạn tham khảo ở đây luôn nha!!!

 

[tuananh982]

#3. BICYCLES
The bicycle is a cheap and clean way to for travel . The first 0/ .......for...........
Bicycle was made in about one hundred and fifty years ago. At 1/ .......................
First, bicycles were much expensive. Only rich people could 2/ .......................
buy one. These early time bicycles looked very different from 3/ .......................
the ones we have them today. Later, when bicycles became 4/.......................
cheaper, many lot people bought one. People started riding 5/ .......................
bicycles to work and in their with free time. Today, people use 6/ .......................
cars more than bicycles; cars are much more faster and you 7/ .......................
don’t get wet when it start rains! But some people still prefer to 8/ .......................
cycle to work . They say that there have are too many cars in 9/ .......................
town centers and you can't able find anywhere to park! 10/ .....................

 

[Diệp Ngọc Tuyên]

The bicycle is a cheap and clean way to for travel . The first 0/ .......for...........
Bicycle was made in about one hundred and fifty years ago. At 1/ ........bỏ...............
First, bicycles were much expensive. Only rich people could 2/ .......................
buy one. These early time bicycles looked very different from 3/ .......................
the ones we have them today. Later, when bicycles became 4/.......................
cheaper, many lot people bought one. People started riding 5/ ........bỏ...............
bicycles to work and in their with free time. Today, people use 6/ .........bỏ..............
cars more than bicycles; cars are much more faster and you 7/ ........bỏ...............
don’t get wet when it start rains! But some people still prefer to 8/ .......starts................
cycle to work . They say that there have are too many cars in 9/ .......................
town centers and you can't able find anywhere to park! 10/ .....................
p/s sorry bác hồi nãy tui ấn nhầm nút...
p/s nhìn kỹ lại tui thất từ start nó cứ sao sao ý... Liệu từ này có bỏ được không?
p/s sửa lần cuối.....

 

[ngochaad]

#3. BICYCLES
The bicycle is a cheap and clean way to for travel . The first 0/ .......for...........
Bicycle was made in about one hundred and fifty years ago. At 1/ .......................
First, bicycles were much expensive. Only rich people could 2/ .......................
buy one. These early time bicycles looked very different from 3/ .......................
the ones we have them today. Later, when bicycles became 4/.......................
cheaper, many lot people bought one. People started riding 5/ .......................
bicycles to work and in their with free time. Today, people use 6/ .......................
cars more than bicycles; cars are much more faster and you 7/ .......................
don’t get wet when it start rains! But some people still prefer to 8/ .......................
cycle to work . They say that there have are too many cars in 9/ .......................
town centers and you can't able find anywhere to park! 10/ .....................

#3. BICYCLES
The bicycle is a cheap and clean way to for travel . The first 0/ .......for...........
Bicycle was made in about one hundred and fifty years ago. At 1/ ..........in .............
First, bicycles were much expensive. Only rich people could 2/ .......................
buy one. These early time bicycles looked very different from 3/ .......................
the ones we have them today. Later, when bicycles became 4/...........them............
cheaper, many lot people bought one. People started riding 5/ ...........lot............
bicycles to work and in their with free time. Today, people use 6/ .........with..............
cars more than bicycles; cars are much more faster and you 7/ .......................
don’t get wet when it start rains! But some people still prefer to 8/ .........start..............
cycle to work . They say that there have are too many cars in 9/ .........have..............
town centers and you can't able find anywhere to park! 10/ .........able............ có can sẽ ko có able