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There are 4 seasons in a year in Ha Noi: The spring, the summer, the autumn and the winter, a season has a special weather type.
The spring make people fell the most comfortable. It is fine and dull, the wind is gentle that glide by my cheek. It’s the season that is warmer than the winter and cooler than the summer. The tree is look like full of vitality , many the green leafs, many young buds. Everybody send the best wishes to people that we love in the new year, at that time, having many festival is hold. But, this season is usually appear the drizzle, so the road is dirty and the air in our home is wet.
The summer make people imagine the sea holidays. The temperature is the highest in year, every morning when we get up, the sun‘s come out and in the midday, the sun’s shining ( there’re not a cloud in the sky) , may be in the afternoon: when the sun ‘s just gone in, it raining cats and dog. The weather in this season is the same kinky girl. So, people will escape it by the way: finding the tourist attraction is near the sea, see the white sand in a beach, fell the cool air under the heat wave. However, many terrible storm in this time.
The autumn is a romantic season. The yellow leaf is full of the road, everyone wear the simple clothes. Having couples are married, they take a album wedding in the old street. But, in the morning, it have many foggy- will be difficult to see the road, it’s dry- easy to fire. Sometimes, it had a heavy rain, sometimes it haven’t had any rain for a fortnight .
The winter is very cool. In Ha Noi hasn’t the snow, the sleet or the ice but we feel the chilly. We have to wear many clothes to go out. Whenever we also want to sleep, eat the hot food, not touch the water. So, we often busy in the end of the year to complete the work and come back home with our family.
Now, the weather is starting cool, we can live lazier.
 

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There are 4 seasons in a year in Ha Noi: The spring, the summer, the autumn and the winter, a season has a special weather type.
The spring make people fell the most comfortable. It is fine and dull, the wind is gentle that glide by my cheek. It’s the season that is warmer than the winter and cooler than the summer. The tree is look like full of vitality, many the green leafs, many young buds. Everybody send the best wishes to people that we love in the new year, at that time, having many festival is hold. But, this season is usually appear the drizzle, so the road is dirty and the air in our home is wet.
The summer make people imagine the sea holidays. The temperature is the highest in year, every morning when we get up, the sun‘s come out and in the midday, the sun’s shining ( there’re not a cloud in the sky) , may be in the afternoon: when the sun ‘s just gone in, it raining cats and dog. The weather in this season is the same kinky girl. So, people will escape it by the way: finding the tourist attraction is near the sea, see the white sand in a beach, fell the cool air under the heat wave. However, many terrible storm in this time.
The autumn is a romantic season. The yellow leaf is full of the road, everyone wear the simple clothes. Having couples are married, they take a album wedding in the old street. But, in the morning, it have many foggy- will be difficult to see the road, it’s dry- easy to fire. Sometimes, it had a heavy rain, sometimes it haven’t had any rain for a fortnight.
The winter is very cool. In Ha Noi hasn’t the snow, the sleet or the ice but we feel the chilly. We have to wear many clothes to go out. Whenever we also want to sleep, eat the hot food, not touch the water. So, we often busy in the end of the year to complete the work and come back home with our family.
Now, the weather is starting cool, we can live lazier.
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There are 4 seasons in a year in Ha Noi: The spring, the summer, the autumn and the winter, a season has a special weather type.
The spring make people fell the most comfortable. It is fine and dull, the wind is gentle that glide by my cheek. It’s the season that is warmer than the winter and cooler than the summer. The tree is look like full of vitality , many the green leafs, many young buds. Everybody send the best wishes to people that we love in the new year, at that time, having many festival is hold. But, this season is usually appear the drizzle, so the road is dirty and the air in our home is wet.
The summer make people imagine the sea holidays. The temperature is the highest in year, every morning when we get up, the sun‘s come out and in the midday, the sun’s shining ( there’re not a cloud in the sky) , may be in the afternoon: when the sun ‘s just gone in, it raining cats and dog. The weather in this season is the same kinky girl. So, people will escape it by the way: finding the tourist attraction is near the sea, see the white sand in a beach, fell the cool air under the heat wave. However, many terrible storm in this time.
The autumn is a romantic season. The yellow leaf is full of the road, everyone wear the simple clothes. Having couples are married, they take a album wedding in the old street. But, in the morning, it have many foggy- will be difficult to see the road, it’s dry- easy to fire. Sometimes, it had a heavy rain, sometimes it haven’t had any rain for a fortnight .
The winter is very cool. In Ha Noi hasn’t the snow, the sleet or the ice but we feel the chilly. We have to wear many clothes to go out. Whenever we also want to sleep, eat the hot food, not touch the water. So, we often busy in the end of the year to complete the work and come back home with our family.
Now, the weather is starting cool, we can live lazier.
There are 4 seasons in a year in Ha Noi: The spring, the summer, the autumn, and the winter, a season has a special weather type.
The spring makes people feel the most comfortable. It is fine and dull, the wind is gentle that glide by my cheek. It’s the season that is warmer than the winter and cooler than the summer. The tree looks like full of vitality, many the green leaves, many young buds. Everybody send the best wishes to people that we love in the new year, at that time, having many festivals is hold. But, this season usually appears the drizzle, so the road is dirty and the air in our home is wet.
The summer makes people imagine the sea holidays. The temperature is the highest in the year, every morning when we get up, the sun‘s come out and in the midday, the sun’s shining ( there’re not a cloud in the sky), maybe in the afternoon: when the sun ‘s just gone in, it raining cats and dog. The weather in this season is the same kinky girl. So, people will escape it by the way: finding the tourist attraction is near the sea, see the white sand on a beach, fell the cool air under the heatwave. However, many terrible storms at this time.
The autumn is a romantic season. The yellow leaf is full of the road, everyone wears simple clothes. Having couples are married, they take an album wedding in the old street. But, in the morning, it has many foggy- it will be difficult to see the road, it’s dry- easy to fire. Sometimes, it had a heavy rain, sometimes it hasn’t had any rain for a fortnight.
The winter is very cool. In Ha Noi hasn’t the snow, the sleet or the ice but we feel the chilly. We have to wear many clothes to go out. Whenever we also want to sleep, eat the hot food, not touch the water. So, we often busy at the end of the year to complete the work and come back home with our family.
Now, the weather is starting cool, we can live lazier.
Gạch chân bên dưới là bỏ bạn nhé, sai khá nhiều đó
Những lối nhỏ như "a album" thì phải khắc phục nhé
 
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