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Since the birth of economics, particularly goods and services exchange activities such as markets, people can buy and make purchase everything in the world by money. Moreover, we are now living in a technologically advanced world in which most of the people have to work hard in order to earn incomes for making a living, and dual-income families has become the norm in the majority of nations. However, while all of these efforts are for making more money, some people believe that there are some crucial things that are free of cost and cannot be purchased by money. Additionally, these essential elements are not only indispensable, but also hard to achieve.
One of the most important things in life is happiness. Some groups of people argue that happiness or joyfulness is found only on rich people. However, it is obviously untrue because it is reported that not the high-income countries, but the medium, and even low-income ones have shown the high rates of happiness as well as rank on top of happy nations charts, such as Vietnam, Nepal, etc. People in these countries do not find their pleasure in the state of having much money, but in other kinds of activities related to emotional and mental satisfactions. For instance, Vietnamese always get back to their hometown in every Tet Holiday because they find it happier and more enjoyable when they gather around their family than when they work and make money.
Another thing which is seen as priceless is health. It is said that people can use money to buy medications and health treatment services when they are sick or ill. The saying is obviously not correct. When one gets sick, it definitely means that his or her health is getting weaker and not as good as its original state anymore though it is just minor illnesses. The harder people work in order to earn more money and the more hours they work overtime, the weaker and worse health they will get.
Buddhism teaches that life is impermanent, and people usually do not know on which day they have to leave the life. Therefore, it is important to know that money is just a tool to buy temporary demands, people must try their best to find their own happiness and keep their body and mind always healthy in order to do whatever they want, so they never regret anything when passing away.
 
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Since the birth of economics, particularly goods and services exchange activities such as markets, people can buy and make purchases everything in the world by money. Moreover, we are now living in a technologically advanced world in which most of the (mình nghĩ không cần dùng the đâu) people have to work hard in order to earn incomes for making a living, and dual-income families has => have become the norm in the majority of nations. However, while all of these efforts are for making more money, some people believe that there are some crucial things that are free of cost and cannot be purchased by money. Additionally, these essential elements are not only indispensable, but also hard to achieve.
One of the most important things in life is happiness. Some groups of people argue that happiness or joyfulness is found only on rich people. However, it is obviously untrue because it is reported that not the high-income countries, but the medium, and even low-income ones have shown the high rates of happiness as well as rank on top of happy nations charts, such as Vietnam, Nepal, etc. People in these countries do not find their pleasure in the state of having much money, but in other kinds of activities related to emotional and mental satisfaction (cái này không đếm được). For instance, Vietnamese always get back to their hometown in every Tet Holiday because they find it happier and more enjoyable when they gather around their family than when they work and make money.
Another thing which is seen as priceless is health. It is said that people can use money to buy medications and health treatment services when they are sick or ill. The saying is obviously not correct. When one gets sick, it definitely means that his or her health is getting weaker and not as good as its original state anymore though it is just minor illnesses. The harder people work in order to earn more money and the more hours they work overtime, the weaker and worse health they will get.
Buddhism teaches that life is impermanent, and people usually do not know on which day they have to leave the life. Therefore, it is important to know that money is just a tool to buy temporary demands, people must try their best to find their own happiness and keep their body and mind always healthy in order to do whatever they want, so they never regret anything when passing away.
 
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Since the birth of economics, particularly goods and services exchange activities such as markets, people can buy and make purchase ⇒purchases everything in the world by money. Moreover, we are now living in a technologically advanced world in which most of people have to work hard in order to earn incomes for making a living, and dual-income families has ⇒have become the norm in the majority of nations. However, while all of these efforts are for making more money, some people believe that there are some crucial things that are free of cost and cannot be purchased by money. Additionally, these essential elements are not only indispensable , ⇒ gạch dấu phẩy but also hard to achieve.
One of the most important things in life is happiness. Some groups of people argue that happiness or joyfulness is found only on rich people. However, it is obviously untrue because it is reported that not the high-income countries, but the medium, and even low-income ones have shown the high rates of happiness as well as rank on top of happy nations charts, such as Vietnam, Nepal, etc. People in these countries do not find their pleasure in the state of having much money , ⇒ gạch dấu phẩy but in other kinds of activities related to emotional and mental satisfactions ⇒ satisfaction. For instance, Vietnamese always get back to their hometown in every Tet Holiday because they find it happier and more enjoyable when they gather around their family than when they work and make money.
Another thing which is seen as priceless is health. It is said that people can use money to buy medications and health treatment services when they are sick or ill. The saying is obviously not correct. When one gets sick, it definitely means that his or her health is getting weaker and not as good as its original state anymore though it is just minor illnesses. The harder people work in order to earn more money and the more hours they work overtime, the weaker and worse health they will get.
Buddhism teaches that life is impermanent, and people usually do not know on which day they have to leave the life. Therefore, it is important to know that money is just a tool to buy temporary demands, people must try their best to find their own happiness and keep their body and mind always healthy in order to do whatever they want, so they never regret anything when passing away.
 
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Since the birth of economics, particularly goods and services exchange activities such as markets, people can buy and make purchases everything in the world by money. Moreover, we are now living in a technologically advanced world in which most of the people have to work hard to earn incomes for making a living, and dual-income families have become the norm in the majority of nations. However, while all of these efforts are for making more money, some people believe that some crucial things are free of cost and cannot be purchased by money. Additionally, these essential elements are not only indispensable but also hard to achieve.
One of the most important things in life is happiness. Some groups of people argue that happiness or joyfulness is found only on rich people. However, it is obviously untrue because it is reported that not the high-income countries, but the medium, and even low-income ones have shown the high rates of happiness as well as rank on top of happy nations charts, such as Vietnam, Nepal, etc. People in these countries do not find their pleasure in the state of having much money but in other kinds of activities related to emotional and mental satisfaction. For instance, Vietnamese always get back to their hometown in every Tet Holiday because they find it happier and more enjoyable when they gather around their family than when they work and make money.
Another thing which is seen as priceless is health. It is said that people can use the money to buy medications and health treatment services when they are sick or ill. The saying is obviously not correct. When one gets sick, it definitely means that his or her health is getting weaker and not as good as its original state anymore though it is just minor illnesses. The harder people work to earn more money and the more hours they work overtime, the weaker and worse health they will get.
Buddhism teaches that life is impermanent, and people usually do not know on which day they have to leave the life. Therefore, it is important to know that money is just a tool to buy temporary demands, people must try their best to find their own happiness and keep their body and mind always healthy to do whatever they want, so they never regret anything when passing away.
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