I live in Pho Ninh, a small village in north of Duc Pho District, Quang Ngai province. My neighborhood is very great. There are many good things I likes about it. Firstly, it;s great for outdoor activities because it has beautiful beaches, fine weather and fresh air. There is almost everythings I need here: shops, restautant and markets. It has many flowers gardens. Besides it also has mordern cinemas, beautiful park and big supermarkets with everythings people need. There're some café where everyone can relax and enjoy diferent kinds of drink they like. Every house has a front yard. Secondly, the traffic here is also great because the road are wide and the people follow the traffic lights very well. Thirdly, my neighborhood are friendly and helpful. You can make friends with them and ask them for help easily. However, there is one thing I dislike about it. Now, there are many modern buildings and offices, so the street are very busy and crowded during the day. In conclusion, my neighborhood is very great place to live. There isn't a lot of noise, it is secure, and most of all, the food is very delicious, the sights are very beautiful, the people are friendly and helpful. In a world, I love my neighborhood very much.
mình sửa hộ bạn 1 chút nhé
Vì có lỗi sai ^^
I live in Pho Ninh, a small village in
the north of Duc Pho District, Quang Ngai province. My neighborhood is very great. There are many good things I
like about it. Firstly,
it's great for outdoor activities because it has beautiful beaches, fine weather
, and fresh air. There is almost
everything I need here: shops,
restaurants, and markets. It has many flowers gardens. Besides it also has
modern cinemas,
a beautiful park and big supermarkets with
everything people need.
There's a café where everyone can relax and enjoy
different kinds of
drinks they like. Every house has a front yard. Secondly, the traffic here is also great because the road
is wide and the people follow the traffic lights very well. Thirdly, my
neighbors are friendly and helpful. You can make friends with them and ask them for help easily. However, there is one thing I dislike about it. Now, there are many modern buildings and offices, so the street
is very busy and crowded during the day. In conclusion, my neighborhood is
a very great place to
live in. There isn't a lot of noise, it is secure, and most of all, the food is very delicious, the sights are very beautiful, the people are friendly and helpful. In
the world, I love my neighborhood very much.
Bạn sai khá nhiều lỗi chính tả nhé, từ vựng bạn chưa thuộc nên viết sai