[lớp9] should wear ao dai....

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nucuoi_nhungnguoidocthan_810

uh! tiếng anh or tiếng việt vây fuong bạn thân************************************************************************************???
 
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thienthanlove20

Mình có các ý như thế này, ko biết có đúng ko nữa, chỉ có một ít thui, tự thêm vào nữa nha

I think it is necessary for secondary school students to wear ao dai when they are at school.

Wearing ao dai makes students fell comfortable and become more feminine

Ao dai is the uniform of the school

wearing uniforms is practical . You don't have to think of what to wear every day
 
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kira_l

I think it is necessary for secondary school students to wear ao dai when they are at school.

Wearing ao dai makes students fell comfortable and become more feminine

Ao dai is the uniform of the school

wearing uniforms is practical . You don't have to think of what to wear every day

ai bảo cấp 3 là ko thể mặc ;;)

mình thấy chẳng comfortable chỗ nào cả ý :(
 
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thienthanlove20

Có ai nói trường cấp 3 ko đc mặc đâu chứ, đây chỉ nói đến là cấp 2 cũng nên mặc thôi mà!!!!
Công nhận là ko thoải mái thật nhưng kệ, cứ ghi vào :)) =))
 
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trang_pooh

Nowaday,many casual clothes makes students comfortable and fashionable.But,I thinks it is necessary for seconddary school students to wear uniforms when they are at school.
Firstly,wearing uniforms encourages students to be pround of being students of their school because they are wearing the uniforms with labels bearing their school's name.
Secondly,wearing uniforms help students feel equal in many way,whether they are rich or poor.
Finally,wearing it is practical.You don't have to think of what to wear everyday.
There fore,students in secondary school should wear uniform.
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nh0c_bee_95

Nowaday,many casual clothes makes students comfortable and fashionable.But,I thinks it is necessary for seconddary school students to wear uniforms when they are at school.
Firstly,wearing uniforms encourages students to be pround of being students of their school because they are wearing the uniforms with labels bearing their school's name.
Secondly,wearing uniforms help students feel equal in many way,whether they are rich or poor.
Finally,wearing it is practical.You don't have to think of what to wear everyday.
There fore,students in secondary school should wear uniform.
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Chưa rõ ý bạn uniform là áo dài.
Và với các bài trên mình nghĩ hok nên cho ý thoải mái vào ( vì chả đúng sự thật tí nào ) mà có thể thay thay bằng ý :
Vietnamese students should wear ao dai when they are at school because ao dai is the traditional dress of Vietnamese.
It respect the beauty of Vietnamese.
:)
 
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trang_pooh

nh0c_bee_95 said:
Chưa rõ ý bạn uniform là áo dài.
Và với các bài trên mình nghĩ hok nên cho ý thoải mái vào ( vì chả đúng sự thật tí nào ) mà có thể thay thay bằng ý :
Vietnamese students should wear ao dai when they are at school because ao dai is the traditional dress of Vietnamese.
It respect the beauty of Vietnamese.
:)
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Hả....nhầm 0y.........tớ tưởng đồng phục,,,,,,,,đọc nhầm...............thì thay áo dài vào rồi bỏ comfortable đy như bạn nói.............;)
 
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hinhacon_ha

trang_pooh said:
Nowaday,many casual clothes makes students comfortable and fashionable.But,I thinks it is necessary for seconddary school students to wear uniforms when they are at school.
Firstly,wearing uniforms encourages students to be pround of being students of their school because they are wearing the uniforms with labels bearing their school's name.
Secondly,wearing uniforms help students feel equal in many way,whether they are rich or poor.
Finally,wearing it is practical.You don't have to think of what to wear everyday.
There fore,students in secondary school should wear uniform.
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tại sao sau BUT lại có dấu phẩy....hình như ko có chứ nhi?...mà hình như bạn Trang chưa đọc kĩ đề ...bạn ý làm về uniforms....cái bài Write....của unit: clothing...ý
 
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kira_l

trang_pooh said:
Nowaday,many casual clothes makes students comfortable and fashionable.But,I thinks it is necessary for seconddary school students to wear uniforms when they are at school.
Firstly,wearing uniforms encourages students to be pround of being students of their school because they are wearing the uniforms with labels bearing their school's name.
Secondly,wearing uniforms help students feel equal in many way,whether they are rich or poor.
Finally,wearing it is practical.You don't have to think of what to wear everyday.
There fore,students in secondary school should wear uniform.
------------------------The end------------------------------------------------------
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thứ nhất : bài này nên gạch các ý là ok nhất

thứ 2 : cách trình bày bài thế này , mình chẳng muốn đọc huống chj cô giáo ;))

thứ 3 : sao thấy giông giống ý trong sách thế nhở ;;)

thứ 4 : đọc qua đọc lại chả thấy chữ nào là "ao dai " cả trong khi đề là nói về nó

mà ?

==>ko đạt chuẩn :))




 
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hinhacon_ha

nói chung là bài này các bạn nên tham khảo cách viết...chứ nói như bạn trên là gạch đầu dòng thì ko đc....trong sách dạy thế...firstly, secondly...., finally. còn nội dung thì các bạn tự sửa nha!
 
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o0honeybaby0o

Mình sẽ cho ý! CÁi bạn chỉnh lại vá víêt thành bài hòan chỉnh nhá:
1/ It's Vietnam's traditional dress
2/ It's very beautiful and make who wears it look nicer
3/ it is one of the Vietnameses' pride
4/ (cái cúi này mình đúi rồi, bạn nói đạii đi) Because most girl students like it (măc75 dù là hok đúng) =.="
 
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