Line Graph Task 1 IELTS

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The presented line graph illustrates four different countries, namely the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal in terms of the amount of CO2 discharged per capital over a period of 40 years from 1967 to 2007. Units are measured in metric tons.
Overall, the CO2 output per person in the UK fell gradually, whereas Italy and Portugal significant rise in the CO2 emissions per capital over the examined period. Simultaneously, the figure for Sweden indicated a fluctuation of the volume of CO2 emitted per person. However, it should be noted that the UK was the highest by 2007.
In 1967, around 11 tons of CO2 per capital in the UK, followed by Sweden with 9 tons. The amount of CO2 per head in Italy is just above 4 tons, while ones in Portugal produced approximately 1 ton. Regarding to 2007, the UK and Sweden witnessed a considerable reduction of 2 and 3 tons in the volumes of CO2 per citizen respectively, while Italy and Portugal escalated steadily 4 and 5 tons respectively.

Looking forward to everyone's comments.
Thank you so much.^^

 

[Bella Dodo]

Bạn tham khảo

The presented line graph illustrates four different countries, namely the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal in terms of the amount of CO2 discharged per capital (over a period of 40 years) Bella nghĩ bạn có thể nói thời điểm luôn from 1967 to 2007. Units are measured in metric tonnes.

Overall, the CO2 output per person in the UK fell gradually, whereas Italy and Portugal significantly rise rose in the CO2 emissions per capital over the examined period. Simultaneously, the figure for Sweden indicated a downward fluctuation (of 3 tonnes). the volume of CO2 emitted per person Bella thấy, chúng ta không cần lặp lại cụm từ này. However, it should be noted that the UK was the highest by 2007 Ta có thể ghi: In comparison, the United Kingdom still emitted the most Carbon Dioxide. (with the result of approximately 8,5 tonnes in 2007)

In 1967, around 11 tonnes of CO2 per capita in the UK emitted into the atmosphere, followed by Sweden with 9 tons. The amount of CO2 per head in Italy is just above 4 tons, while ones in Portugal produced approximately 1 ton. Regarding to 2007, the UK and Sweden witnessed a considerable experienced the reduction of 2 and 3 tons in the volumes of CO2 per citizen respectively, while Italy and Portugal escalated steadily 4 and 5 tons respectively.

Bella góp ý hơi nhiều, mong là sẽ giúp được bạn phần nào. Nếu có phản hồi, bạn nhắn Bella nhé.
Bella

 

[Nguyenthuong2k1]

Bạn tham khảo

The presented line graph illustrates four different countries, namely the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal in terms of the amount of CO2 discharged per capital (over a period of 40 years) Bella nghĩ bạn có thể nói thời điểm luôn from 1967 to 2007. Units are measured in metric tonnes.

Overall, the CO2 output per person in the UK fell gradually, whereas Italy and Portugal significantly rise rose in the CO2 emissions per capital over the examined period. Simultaneously, the figure for Sweden indicated a downward fluctuation of 3 tonnes. the volume of CO2 emitted per person Bella thấy, chúng ta không cần lặp lại cụm từ này. However, it should be noted that the UK was the highest by 2007 Ta có thể ghi: In comparison, the United Kingdom still emitted the most Carbon Dioxide with the result of approximately 8,5 tonnes in 2007.

In 1967, around 11 tonnes of CO2 per capita in the UK emitted into the atmosphere, followed by Sweden with 9 tons. The amount of CO2 per head in Italy is just above 4 tons, while ones in Portugal produced approximately 1 ton. Regarding to 2007, the UK and Sweden witnessed a considerable experienced the reduction of 2 and 3 tons in the volumes of CO2 per citizen respectively, while Italy and Portugal escalated steadily 4 and 5 tons respectively.

Bella góp ý hơi nhiều, mong là sẽ giúp được bạn phần nào. Nếu có phản hồi, bạn nhắn Bella nhé.
Bella

Mk cảm ơn bạn rất nhiều về phần góp ý nha.
Tuy nhiên phần overall ko dc phép ghi số liệu đâu bạn ạ. Chỉ nói qua về lớn nhất, nhỏ nhất hay biến động thôi. Phần body mk cảm ơn bạn nhiều về phần này nha. Bạn cho mk nhiều gợi ý để đổi câu từ hơn.
Thank you so much. ^^