Kiểm tra ngữ pháp

[thanhbinh73]

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Pip wanted to be a Guide Dog. One day, she went to the Canine University and started studying how to be a Guide Dog. But, there were many difficult thing for her. First, she was shorter than the other dogs, she couldn’t raise hand when studied and have the food clearly because of this problem. Second, the class was too difficult for her. Sometimes her teacher tripped and fell down. BUT, Pip didn’t give up. One day, she saw a picture of all the best Guide Dogs, she felt more confident. She thought all the ways to solve her problems. And little by little, she improved. Her teacher didn’t fell down anymore. But, she didn’t pass her final exam. She was put out of the school. She was very sad and disappointed about the result. When she cried, there was a woman in danger. She saw and ran to her to help her. She led the woman out of the building. And the dogs and the teachers saw all of her activities to help the woman. Then she became a Guide Dog. Grea job, Pip! You saved the day

 

[Tzuyu-chan]

. But, there were many difficult thing for her.

->things(many)

Grea job, Pip!

->great (sai chính tả)

 

[Khoảng lặng..]

Pip wanted to be a Guide Dog. One day, she went to the Canine University and started studying how to be a Guide Dog. But, there were many difficult thing for her. First, she was shorter than the other dogs, she couldn’t raise hand when studied and have the food clearly because of this problem. Second, the class was too difficult for her. Sometimes her teacher tripped and fell down. BUT, Pip didn’t give up. One day, she saw a picture of all the best Guide Dogs, she felt more confident. She thought all the ways to solve her problems. And little by little, she improved. Her teacher didn’t fell down anymore. But, she didn’t pass her final exam. She was put out of the school. She was very sad and disappointed about the result. When she cried, there was a woman in danger. She saw and ran to her to help her. She led the woman out of the building. And the dogs and the teachers saw all of her activities to help the woman. Then she became a Guide Dog. ! You saved the day

- Bạn viết bài này hay đấy, về phần ngữ pháp thì được đấy, nhưng chỗ: " Grea job, Pip ! " bạn thiếu chữ t trong Great, và " You saved the day " câu này có nghĩa là " Bạn đã lưu một ngày " thì nó không có ý nghĩa hay lắm, bạn có thể đổi lại: " You have a nice day " thì nó sẽ có ý nghĩa hơn nha.

 

[thanhbinh73]

cho mình hỏi ý kiến các bạn 1 tí là ở chõ But, she didn't pas the exam thì mình viết thêm là But, just because she was a little subjective in the way she finished, she didn’t pass her final exam. có đc ko

 

[Tzuyu-chan]

cho mình hỏi ý kiến các bạn 1 tí là ở chõ But, she didn't pas the exam thì mình viết thêm là But, just because she was a little subjective in the way she finished, she didn’t pass her final exam. có đc ko

đã dùng BUT thì không có BECAUSE đây nhé không nên dùng 2 trợ từ
But just she was a little subjective in the way she finished, she didn’t pass her final exam

 

[Khoảng lặng..]

cho mình hỏi ý kiến các bạn 1 tí là ở chõ But, she didn't pas the exam thì mình viết thêm là But, just because she was a little subjective in the way she finished, she didn’t pass her final exam. có đc ko

- Bạn thêm vào thì được đấy, nhưng bạn không nên dùng 2 trợ từ.
- Bạn có thể sửa lại, bỏ trợ từ " But" đi thì sẽ có: " Because she was subjective in her test, she did not complete the exam, and didn't pass her final test " ===> " Vì cô ấy chủ quan trong bài thi của mình, cô ấy đã không hoàn thành bài thi, và đã không vượt qua bài kiểm tra cuối cùng của mình."

 

[anbinhf]

Pip wanted to be a Guide Dog. One day, she went to Canine University and started studying how to be a Guide Dog. But, there were many difficult things for her. First, she was shorter than the other dogs, she couldn’t raise a hand when studied and have the food clearly because of this problem. Second, the class was too difficult for her. Sometimes her teacher tripped and fell down. BUT, Pip didn’t give up. One day, she saw a picture of all the best Guide Dogs, she felt more confident. She thought about all the ways to solve her problems. And little by little, she improved. Her teacher didn’t fell down anymore. But, she didn’t pass her final exam. She was put out of school. She was very sad and disappointed with the result. When she cried, there was a woman in danger. She saw and ran to her to help her. She led the woman out of the building. And the dogs and the teachers saw all of her activities to help the woman. Then she became a Guide Dog. Great job, Pip! You saved the day
Chữ màu đỏ có gạch chân là phần mình đã sửa cho bạn nhé ^^