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nightlady

[TẶNG BẠN] TRỌN BỘ Bí kíp học tốt 08 môn
Chắc suất Đại học top - Giữ chỗ ngay!!

ĐĂNG BÀI NGAY để cùng trao đổi với các thành viên siêu nhiệt tình & dễ thương trên diễn đàn.

mấy bạn kiểm tra và sửa lỗi bài này giúp mình nha cảm ơn các bạn nhiều
dear mom and dad,
I arrived at Hanoi railway station at 7 am on saturday. My cousin- Lien met me at the railway station and then she took me home by taxi. So you don't worry about me.
When I arrived her home, I gave your regard to them. On first day, I and Lien visited many beautiful sights in here such as: The Sword Lake, Ho Chi Minh's Mausoleum, Literature Temple and so on. Then we went to the movies and came across Lan's friends, we talked together happily. On the next day, we went to a foodstall to enjoy Hanoi noodles. It was really delicious. If possible,I would bring some to you. After that, we went to the supermarket to buy some gifts for you and my friends. I hope you'll like them.
I really feel happy today. In here, I'm impressed by the friendliness of the people and the beautiful sights. I'll return at 6 am tomorrow. Please pick me up at Quynhon train station.
I'm looking forward to seeing you.
Take care
 
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nightlady

cảm ơn bạn nha. Nhưng mình nghĩ trước home thì ko cần dùg giới từ. Hơn nữa nếu có giới từ thi nên đổi là "arrived at". Mình ko bik vậy có đúg ko mong các bạn chỉ giúp
 
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zukhar

Ôi M` Nhi`n zÔ Mu` Mắt Lun Huk bIk cái Nào
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