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Dear Mom and Dad,
I arrived in Nha Trang about 4 o'clock on Friday . My aunt met me at train station and took me home by taxi.

I have many to experience interesting things during 3 days there. On the first day, I went to visited my grandma then went to oceanographer institute. On the second day, I went to the beach Nha Trang with my aunt's family and spent a day swimming and playing games as throw water balloon, build sand castle, volleyball. The beach is very beautiful with colorwater blue water and white sand. And on the third day, I am going to Tri Nguyen Aquarium see life underwater of creatures. I can see colorful fishes, turtles, crabs. I've also met a lot of friendly, humorous and helpful people. I've ate fish and crab. It really fresh and delicious but it wasn't cheap. I bought some souvenirs for Mom and Dad, my team.

I feel so happy, really enjoy in here. The people here are so friendly, the food are so delicious, and the sights are so beautiful.and I wish I could return when I have occasion.

I will leave Nha Trang at night Sunday and come home at noon Monday.
You daughter
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Dear Mom and Dad,
I arrived in Nha Trang at about 4 o'clock on Friday . My aunt met me at train station and took me home by taxi.

I have many interesting experiences during 3 days there. On the first day, I visited my grandma then went to oceanographer institute. On the second day, I went to the beach in Nha Trang with my aunt's family and spent a day swimming and playing games such as throwed water balloon, built sand castle and played volleyball. The beach is very beautiful with blue water and white sand. And on the third day, I went to Tri Nguyen Aquarium to see life underwater of creatures. I could see colorful fishes, turtles, crabs. I've also met a lot of friendly, humorous and helpful people. I've ate fish and crab. It really fresh and delicious but it wasn't cheap. I bought some souvenirs for my Mom Dad and my team.

I feel so happy, really enjoy in here. The people here are so friendly, the food are so delicious, and the sights are so beautiful.and I wish I could return when I have occasion.

I will leave Nha Trang on Sunday night and come home on Monday afternoon
Your daughter,
Your name(Ex:Hoa)

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