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If someone aks me :"What is the most memory you remember bets ?" I will tell that it is a party . It was Hong 's birthday. Hong is one of my group . There are 4 members in group : Nhung ,Hong, Phuong and me. In the day before , Phuong Nhung and me went to the shop to buy gift for Hong . And to be suprise , the party wuold be held in my house and Hong didn't known any thíng about the party . . We bought some candys, biscus, snacks, soft drinks and a small brithday cake.
The party would begin at 3p.m , so we decorated my house in the morning, with pink, red , green , blue baloon . In the 1. 30p.m , I phoned to Hong and said I need her now, I was in trouble . And soon , she came ealier than we think . Of couse . she was surprise with the party and she so happy. We ate cake , candy , snacks and drankand said about allthings . I think the party is small but it is the most snug, warm in the heart, about our friendship. Nơ I miss them so much. I hope they will be happy and lucky in life.
(đây là một câu chuyên có thật đó:) , làm ơn giúp mình chút nha !:p
 
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niemtin_267193

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If someone aks me :"What is the most memory you remember ?" I will tell that it is a party . It was Hong 's birthday. Hong is one of my group . There are 4 members in group : Nhung ,Hong, Phuong and me. In the day before , Phuong Nhung and me went to the shop to buy gifts for Hong . And to be suprise , the party would be held in my house and Hong didn't known any thíng about the party . . We bought some candys, biscus, snacks, soft drinks and a small brithday cake.
The party would begin at 3p.m , so we decorated my house in the morning, with pink, red , green , blue baloon . In the 1. 30p.m , I phoned to Hong and said I need her now, I was in trouble . And soon , she came ealier than we think . Of couse . she was surprise with the party and she so happy. We ate cake , candy , snacks and drankand said about allthings . I think the party was small but it was the most snug, warm in the heart, about our friendship. Now I miss them so much. I hope they will be happy and lucky in life.

bài của bạn khá hoàn chỉnh rôi, chỉ cần sửa 1 vài lỗi chính tả và thì là xong.
 
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ran.bennington

If someone asks me :"What is your most memorable memory ?" I will tell him that it is Hong's party .[him dùng chung chung để chỉ người nhé] Hong is in my group .There are 4 members in the group : Nhung ,Hong, Phuong and me. In the day before , Phuong Nhung and me went to the shop to buy a gift for Hong . And to suprised Hong,we held a secret party for Hong at my house and Hong didn't known any thing about the party . . We bought candys, biscus, snacks, soft drinks and a small brithday cake.
The party would begin at 3p.m , so we decorated my house in the morning, with pink, red , green , blue baloons. At 1. 30p.m , I phoned Hong and said that I was in trouble and i need her right then. And soon , she came ealier than we think. Of course . she was so surprised and happy when she knew that we made a party for her.We ate cake , candy , snacks and talked about everything . Although the party was small but it was so warm and memorable,its all about friends and for friends. Now I miss them so much. I hope they will be happy and lucky in life.
Có một số lỗi chính tả v..v tớ in đậm.
Còn đâu đã sửa lại câu hay lỗi ngữ pháp cho bạn rồi đấy.Tham khảo nhé ^^
(đây là một câu chuyên có thật đó , làm ơn giúp mình chút nha !
 
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