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[FONT=&quot]Last summer, I went to Vung Tau with my brother to visit my grandmother. In there, I had wonderful vacation. But I met a complex evert when I went to beach. I could not swim. I was curiais about sea water. I wanted to swim. I swimming in the sea was very glad. I was very interesting. But I was unlucky, I didn’t take notice of high tide. The high tide took me away from seaside. I tried to strive. I thought I drowed at sea, Everyone shouted. Luckily a man helped me escape death. I was sufe . That day was very awful.[/FONT]

 

[mouse_vip]

Mình nghĩ câu này In there, I had wonderful vacation phải thêm mạo từ a vào trước wonderful và I went to beach thêm "the" vao trước beach

 

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Còn câu này nữa: I swimming in the sea was very glad.Sửa lại là:Swimming in the sea was very glad

 

[vampire_knight_1710]

I thought I drowned at sea.Thêm mạo từ "the" vào.I was sufe.Bạn viết sai từ sufe rồi phải là suffer chứ

 

[proechcom]

Last summer, I went to Vung Tau with my brother to visit my grandmother. In there, I had wonderful vacation. But I met a complex evert (lỗi chính tả )when I went to beach. I could not swim. I was curiais (lỗi chính tả )about sea water. I wanted to swim. I swimming in the sea was very glad. I was very interesting. But I was unlucky, I didn’t take notice of high tide. The high tide took me away from seaside. I tried to strive. I thought I drowned (bị động )in the sea, Everyone shouted. Luckily a man helped me escape death. I was suffer . That day was very awful.

 

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[FONT=&quot]Last summer, I went to Vung Tau with my brother to visit my grandmother. In there, I had a wonderful vacation. But I met a complex evert when I went to beach. I could not swim. I was curiais about sea water. I wanted to swim. swimming in the sea was very glad. I was very interested in this. But unlucky, I didn’t take notice of high tide. The high tide took me away from seaside. I tried to strive. I thought I drowed at sea, Everyone shouted. Luckily a man helped me escape death. I was sufe . That day was very awful.[/FONT]

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