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The situation is not hopeless for the all old people. But rather than relying on their families to make meaningful life for them, old people in United States on the whole have to rely on itself. Many examples of this are seen in communities for the elder in Florida or other areas of the United States. Because the entire community composed of older people, those who live there not fell out of place or disuse. They can buy for themselves with card games, classes, tennis or golf, or, of course, that favourite activity of many old folk, eating and talking about food.

 

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The situation is not hopeless for the all old people. But rather than relying on their families to make meaningful life for them, old people in United States on the whole have to rely on itself. Many examples of this are seen in communities for the elder in Florida or other areas of the United States. Because the entire community composed of older people, those who live there not fell out of place or disuse. They can buy for themselves with card games, classes, tennis or golf, or, of course, that favourite activity of many old folk, eating and talking about food.

The situation is not hopeless for the (bỏ) all old people. But rather than relying on their families to make meaningful life (life meaningful) for them, old people in (the) United States on the whole have to rely on itself (themselves). Many examples of this are seen in communities for the elder in Florida or other areas of the United States. Because the entire community composed (is composed) of older people, those who live there not fell (don't fall) out of place or disuse. They can buy for themselves with (bỏ) card games, classes, tennis or golf, or, of course, that (the) favourite activity of many old folk, eating and talking about food.