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[meomeo16021998]

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Ms. Wendy có thể sửa giúp em bài này đc k
MY name's Hoang . I'm twelve years old . I live in Kim town and this is my first year at Thanh Kim secondary school . I like to watch livestream games in my free time. another hobby is cooking with my mom
. finally I'm big fan of games and I like gamer mithy and viruss but I want to be a chef in the future

 

[Tzuyu-chan]

Ms. Wendy có thể sửa giúp em bài này đc k
MY name's Hoang . I'm twelve years old . I live in Kim town and this is my first year at Thanh Kim secondary school . I like to watch livestream games in my free time. another hobby is cooking with my mom
. finally I'm big fan of games and I like gamer mithy and viruss but I want to be a chef in the future

Gamers like : misthy ...

 

[triệu thị giang]

Ms. Wendy có thể sửa giúp em bài này đc k
MY name's Hoang . I'm twelve years old . I live in Kim town and this is my first year at Thanh Kim secondary school . I like to watch livestream games in my free time. another hobby is cooking with my mom
. finally I'm big fan of games and I like gamer mithy and viruss but I want to be a chef in the future

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Ms. Wendy có thể sửa giúp em bài này đc k
MY name's Hoang . I'm twelve years old . I live in Kim town and this is my first year at Thanh Kim secondary school . I like to watch livestream games in my free time. another hobby is cooking with my mom
. finally I'm big fan of games and I like gamer mithy and viruss but I want to be a chef in the future

Theo mình thì mình nghĩ là bạn nên sửa đoạn cuối 1 chút vì mình thấy nó không được mạch lạc lắm. Bạn có thể tham khảo nhé sau "... school. I'm a big fan of game so I spend almost my free time watching livestream games. My favorite gamers are Misthy and Viruss. They are very famous. I also like to cook with my mom when I'm not busy too. Although i prefer game to cooking, I want to be a chef in the future. It's my dream job. "

 

[Trịnh Phú Quỳnh]

I like to watch => watching livestream games

like + V-ing: thích làm gì
like + to V: mong muốn làm gì
Em phân biệt nha :Đ