Đọc và check giúp e với... It's About the Health

[bababa246]

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We all know that health is the most important for us. If we have good health, we can do everything we want: spend time on studying or working, play sport, play games. We can enjoy many means of entertainment that the modern life offers us. In good health we can enjoy our mael with many kinds of food and drinkS... Pp with good health can devote their contribution to society do develope it. If we are always sick or weak, how can we get sucessful in studying or working? However, our relatives must lokk after us everyday, or we must pend money on our health.

For those reasons, we must keep our health. How can we keep our health always good ???

In my opinion, we should
-eat a moderate diet and study or work in a raesonable timetable
- play sport and do excersise everyday.
- go to hospital to have a generral test regularly..

E honk bjk kết bài như thế nào kả, giúp e với !!!

 

[vision_96]

We all know that our health (is the most important thing for us) play an important part our life. If we have good health, we can do everything we want such as: spend time studying, working, playing sports or playing games,..so on. We can enjoy many means of entertainment ???that the modern life offers us. In good health we can (enjoy our meal with many kinds of food and drinkS)eat well, drink well... Pp??? with good health can devote their contribution to society do ???develope it. If we are always sick or weak, how can we get sucessful in studying or working? However, our relatives mustso heavy (have to) look after us everyday, or we must spend money on our health.

For those reasons, we must keep our health good. How can we keep our health always good ???

In my opinion, we should
-eat a moderate diet and study or work in a raesonable timetable
- play sport and do excersise everyday.
- go to hospital to have a generral test regularly..

your ideas are interesting but there are some mistakes and the way you used to express your ideas are not OK!!!

 

[shinichi_kudo]

Follow my ideas so that we can have a good health to enjoy this beautiful life. (conclusion)

u don't need to make the conclusion so long and complex!!!