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Sửa giùm mình bài này với (cả lỗi chính tả và ngữ nghĩa nhé!!):
Đề: Write a short paragraph about the changes in your village
Over the years, my village have changed so much. It's very different from it was before. The first change is houses. No one lives in earthen houses now, they only live in brick houses, which is much stronger.Moreover, the houses are better equipped with many electricity appliances like: fan, TV, cooker, lights, especially the phones. At present, all the villagers have their own smartphone, which is very convenient and useful.Thanks to the modern technology, our life is very fun and easy. Means of transport is the second big change. Now, there have more motorbikes, bikes and may types of cars instead of buffalo-drawn cart. So we can go to everywhere easily. The most interesting change is the schools. Many years ago, just a few children go to school because they have to go a long way. But now, the schools are built nearby and many children can go to school to study. Besides, the roads have been paved, it's much cleaner and safer for villagers to go on it. As I have noted, my village is improving day by day. However, I still love it very much.

 

[Tống Huy]

Sửa giùm mình bài này với (cả lỗi chính tả và ngữ nghĩa nhé!!):
Đề: Write a short paragraph about the changes in your village
Over the years, my village have changed so much. It's very different from it was before. The first change is houses. No one lives in earthen houses now, they only live in brick houses, which is much stronger.Moreover, the houses are better equipped with many electricity appliances like: fan, TV, cooker, lights, especially the phones. At present, all the villagers have their own smartphone, which is very convenient and useful.Thanks to the modern technology, our life is very fun and easy. Means of transport is the second big change. Now, there have more motorbikes, bikes and may types of cars instead of buffalo-drawn cart. So we can go to everywhere easily. The most interesting change is the schools. Many years ago, just a few children go to school because they have to go a long way. But now, the schools are built nearby and many children can go to school to study. Besides, the roads have been paved, it's much cleaner and safer for villagers to go on it. As I have noted, my village is improving day by day. However, I still love it very much.

Over the years, my village has changed so much. It's very different from it was before. The first change houses. No one lives in earthen houses now, they only live in brick houses, which is much stronger. Moreover, the houses are better equipped with many electrical appliances like fan, TV, cooker, lights, especially the phones. At present, all the villagers have their own smartphone, which is very convenient and useful. Thanks to the modern technology, our life is very fun and easy. Means of transport is the second big change. Now, there have more motorbikes, bikes and may type of cars instead of the buffalo-drawn cart. So we can go everywhere easily. The most interesting change is the schools. Many years ago, just a few children go to school because they have to go a long way. But now, the schools are built nearby and many children can go to school to study. Besides, the roads have been paved, it's much cleaner and safer for villagers to go on it. As I have noted, my village is improving day by day. However, I still love it very much.
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Mình đã sửa nhé !
@Minh Nhí

 

[phuongdaitt1]

My village have changed so much for years. It's very different from it used to be . The first change is houses. No one lives in earthen houses now, they now live in brick houses, which is much stronger. Moreover, the houses are better equipped with many electricity appliances like fan, TV, cooker, lights, especially the phones. Nowadays, all the villagers have their own smartphone, which is very convenient and useful.Thanks to the modern technology, our life is very fun and easy. Means of transport is the second big change. Now, there have more motorbikes, bikes and many types of cars instead of buffalo-drawn cart so that we can go to everywhere easily. The most interesting change is the schools. Many years ago, just a few children go to school because they have to go a long way. But now, the schools are built nearby and many children can go to school to study. Besides, the roads have been paved, it's much cleaner and safer for villagers to go on it. As I have noted, my village is improving day by day. However, I still love it very much.
Tham khảo nhé

 

[Tam Cửu]

Sửa giùm mình bài này với (cả lỗi chính tả và ngữ nghĩa nhé!!):
Đề: Write a short paragraph about the changes in your village
Over the years, my village have changed so much. It's very different from it was before. The first change is houses. No one lives in earthen houses now, they only live in brick houses, which is much stronger.Moreover, the houses are better equipped with many electricity appliances like: fan, TV, cooker, lights, especially the phones. At present, all the villagers have their own smartphone, which is very convenient and useful.Thanks to the modern technology, our life is very fun and easy. Means of transport is the second big change. Now, there have more motorbikes, bikes and may types of cars instead of buffalo-drawn cart. So we can go to everywhere easily. The most interesting change is the schools. Many years ago, just a few children go to school because they have to go a long way. But now, the schools are built nearby and many children can go to school to study. Besides, the roads have been paved, it's much cleaner and safer for villagers to go on it. As I have noted, my village is improving day by day. However, I still love it very much.

Thanks to the development of modern technology, our life is very funnier and easier.

Besides, the roads have been paved, covered with flats blocks of stone or concrete, so that it is much cleaner, safe and suitable for walking or driving on.

 

[Lê Khánh Chi]

Besides, the roads have been paved, covered with flats blocks of stone or concrete, so that it is much cleaner, safe and suitable for walking or driving on.

Cho mình hỏi câu này có nghĩa là gì????

 

[Tam Cửu]

Cho mình hỏi câu này có nghĩa là gì????

Bên cạnh đó, các con đường đã được lát, bao phủ bằng các khối đá hoặc bê tông, do vậy nó sạch hơn, an toàn hơn và thích hợp cho việc đi bộ hoặc lái xe.

 

[Lê Khánh Chi]

"they only live in brick houses, which is much stronger"
Nếu ý mình là nhà gạch chắc chắn hơn thì viết như thế kia có đúng ko??

 

[phuongdaitt1]

"they only live in brick houses, which is much stronger"
Nếu ý mình là nhà gạch chắc chắn hơn thì viết như thế kia có đúng ko??

Ổn nhé bạn. Không có sai.

 

[Lê Khánh Chi]

Besides, the roads have been paved, covered with flats blocks of stone or concrete, so that it is much cleaner, safe and suitable for walking or driving on.

Nếu "cleaner" ở dạng so sánh hơn thì "safe" với "suitable" có ở dạng so sánh hơn được không??

 

[Tam Cửu]

Nếu "cleaner" ở dạng so sánh hơn thì "safe" với "suitable" có ở dạng so sánh hơn được không??

ĐÚNG RỒI
safer và
more suitable