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pedung94

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My teacher give me an exercise. I think it very interesting so I would like to give for all people in this forum.

There are 28 mistakes in the folowing passage. Underline and correct them .

Jeans are the best popular kind of clothing in the world. Millions of jeans were sold each year. They are popular in Asia, Europe, North or South America, Australia, and Africa. All kinds of people wearing jeans because they come in much colorand style: blue jeans, black jeans, red jeams, embroidered jeans, faded jeans, but even short jeans. People were jeans any away they like. They can be very expensive and inexpensive. The word is thought to come from Genoa. Genoais in Italia, so jeans came from another country .
In 1847, a man name Levi Strauss moved to the USA frome Bavaria, Germany. After a few year live in New York, he decided to move to California, which many people worked in gold mines. He started a business selling good to the miners. Oneday on 1872, Levi received a letter from a man named Jacob Davis. He suggested that Levi makes strong pants for mines by putting metal rivets on the pockets. Livi liked the idea and hired the man. They founded a very strong cloth from Nimes, France and use it to make pants for the California gold miners. The clothes was called “Denim ” (from Nimes), which is known like denim nowaday. Denim was died blue with indigo, the oldest dye in the world. Denim was so a popular material in Europe in the fifteenh century. As it was so strong, it was used to making sails for ships. It was said that Christopher Columbus use denim sails when he came to America.
Why are jeans popular? In the USA, they are an only kind of traditonal American cloth. In other countries, young people wear jeans because they want to fell modern, young, and independence. Sales of jeans often go up and up.
Respond:for ex: line-…..
Chắc là có nhiều lỗi ở phần đặt câu của em. Anh, chị thông cảm
 
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ILoveNicholasTeo

My teacher give me an exercise. I think it very interesting so I would like to give for all people in this forum.

There are 28 mistakes in the folowing passage. Underline and correct them .

Jeans are the best popular kind of clothing in the world. Millions of jeans were sold each year. They are popular in Asia, Europe, North or South America, Australia, and Africa. All kinds of people wearing jeans because they come in much colorand style: blue jeans, black jeans, red jeams, embroidered jeans, faded jeans, but even short jeans. People were jeans any away they like. They can be very expensive and inexpensive. The word is thought to come from Genoa. Genoais in Italia, so jeans came from another country .
In 1847, a man name Levi Strauss moved to the USA frome Bavaria, Germany. After a few year live in New York, he decided to move to California, which many people worked in gold mines. He started a business selling good to the miners. Oneday on 1872, Levi received a letter from a man named Jacob Davis. He suggested that Levi makes strong pants for mines by putting metal rivets on the pockets. Livi liked the idea and hired the man. They founded a very strong cloth from Nimes, France and use it to make pants for the California gold miners. The clothes was called “Denim ” (from Nimes), which is known like denim nowaday. Denim was died blue with indigo, the oldest dye in the world. Denim was so a popular material in Europe in the fifteenh century. As it was so strong, it was used to making sails for ships. It was said that Christopher Columbus use denim sails when he came to America.
Why are jeans popular? In the USA, they are an only kind of traditonal American cloth. In other countries, young people wear jeans because they want to fell modern, young, and independence. Sales of jeans often go up and up.
Respond:for ex: line-…..
Chắc là có nhiều lỗi ở phần đặt câu của em. Anh, chị thông cảm

cái chỗ màu đỏ là sai đó.
chắc còn sai nữa đấy, tớ chưa tìm hết giờ đang bận
 
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pedung94

Bạn ơi ko sai cả câu như thế đâu chỉ một từ thôi còn khúc đầu là mình thêm vào đấy còn từ chỗ"Jeans are the best ....go up and up " mới có sai
EX:line(1)best- most
vậy mới đúng
 
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pedung94

Chán thế!
Mình đã có lòng hảo tâm muốn mọi người cùng làm cho vui vậy mà ko có ai vào ủng hộ mình một câu buồn thế.......
 
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