Có ai cã thể giúp em lập dàn ý cho đề Write này không

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tranthuha93

loveu_becauseyouhateme said:
Write a short pasage about the changes in your hometown during the past few years (Hometown is country)
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I have left my hometown for 15 years when I was 10 years old. Yesterday I had an occasion to turn back my hometown .I was really surprised at the change of my hometown. The roads in my memory was small, rough, and have many pothole, but nowadays, it was widened,. It is large and the two roadsides they plant a lot of trees. The house was made of brick, which was small in the past but nowadays it have changed a lot. The building prings up like mush rooms. It is very beautiful and spacious. I went to my old school. OW, I seemed incredible. It has been changed completely. It was upgraded and spacious. At the center of the hometown there is a big superment, in the past there was a small shop. The change of the hometown made me surprised a lot.
 
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billy9797

i can give you some idea:
_you can say that you left your hometown for a long time(maybe a few year),and now,you returned to there,and you saw many different thing in your hometown u did't ever see them before you leave your hometown
_you say about those different thing:roads,rivers,houses,.........................
_you say what is your thinking about them(like,hate,......) and why you like/hate/.........
 
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