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[Jennifer Lu]

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Dear Jerry,
I’m writing this letter to say that I can’t go for a football match at the weekend.
Because there was something trouble in my aunt house, I have to take a flight to France with my family to visit her. This is the reason why I refuse and write this letter.
To make up for that, when I come home, I will give a present that I bought in France. Also, I will call Jane to go with you to the stadium. She will like it a lots. I’ll sure that.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Jennifer

 

[Cindy Phạm_2007]

Dear Jerry,
I’m writing this letter to say that I can’t go for a football match at the weekend.
Because there was something trouble in my aunt house, I have to take a flight to France with my family to visit her. This is the reason why I refuse and write this letter.
To make up for that, when I come home, I will give a present that I bought in France. Also, I will call Jane to go with you to the stadium. She will like it a lots. I’ll sure that.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Jennifer

Dear Jerry,
I’m writing this letter to say that I can’t go for -> to a football match at the weekend.
Because there was something -> some trouble in my aunt -> aunt's (tính từ sở hữu) house, I have to take a flight to France with my family to visit her. This is the reason why I refuse and write this letter.
To make up for that, when I come home, I will give a present that I bought in France. Also, I will call Jane to go with you to the stadium. She will like it a lots -> lot (chỉ có lots of mới thêm s thôi). I’ll sure that.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Jennifer
Không biết có sai sót gì, mong được góp ý ^^

 

[0858734456]

This is the reason why I refuse and write this letter.

Mình thấy câu này khi viết thư K đc hay lắm bạn có thể bỏ đi hoặc thay bằng cấu khác ạ.

 

[ohyeah97]

I’m writing this letter to say that I can’t go for a football match at the weekend.

Câu này mình nghĩ nên để là The football match thay cho A football match vì cả hai đều biết về trận bóng rồi, nó cụ thể

This is the reason why I refuse and write this letter

còn câu này thì mình nghĩ là That's why i write this letters cho nó ngắn gọn

 

[Nguyễn Linh_2006]

Dear Jerry,
I’m writing this letter to say that I can’t go for a football match at the weekend.
Because there was something trouble in my aunt house, I have to take a flight to France with my family to visit her. This is the reason why I refuse and write this letter.
To make up for that, when I come home, I will give a present that I bought in France. Also, I will call Jane to go with you to the stadium. She will like it a lots. I’ll sure that.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Jennifer

Dear Jerry,
I’m writing this letter to say that I can’t go ==> sorry for not going to a football match at the weekend.
Because there was something ==> some trouble ==> problems in my aunt's house, I have to take a flight to France with my family to visit her. This is the reason why I refuse and write this letter. ==> refuse your invitation.
To make up for that, when I come home, I will give a present that I bought in France. Also, I will call to Jane to go with you to the stadium ==> go to the stadium with you. She will like it a lots. I’ll sure that. ==> I sure that she will like it a lot.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Jennifer

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Theo ý kiến của mình như này ^^ Bạn có thể tham khảo
Bonus: Tại sao ở trên lại dùng "problem" mà không dùng "trouble"?

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