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[Jennifer Lu]

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Dear Mr. Dean,
My name is Jennifer. I'm currently a second year student of the English Department.

I'm writing this letter to tell you about the schedule of the speech contest at the end December.

As far as i knew, you has decided to hold a speech contest. And my classmates and I are really interested in it. However, we found that the day which be chosen to celebrate the competition is too near the final examination. So could you please help us to change the schedule of this debate contest to take place at the end of January.

How do you think about my opinion?. Please reply to me and let me know if it is possible.
Thank you very much for your time in considering this request. I'm looking foward to hearing back from you on this matter.
Sincerely,
Jennifer

 

[Cindy Phạm_2007]

Mọi người xem mình có viết đúng ko ạ, nếu sai mong góp ý, và chữa lỗi giúp mình
Dear Mr. Dean,
My name is Jennifer. I'm currently a second year student of the English Department.

I'm writing this letter to tell you about the schedule of the speech contest at the end December.

As far as i knew, you has decided to hold a speech contest. And my classmates and I are really interested in it. However, we found that the day which be chosen to celebrate the competition is too near the final examination. So could you please help us to change the schedule of this debate contest to take place at the end of January.

How do you think about my opinion?. Please reply to me and let me know if it is possible.
Thank you very much for your time in considering this request. I'm looking foward to hearing back from you on this matter.
Sincerely,
Jennifer

Dear Mr. Dean,
My name is Jennifer. I'm currently a second year student of the English Department.

I'm writing this letter to tell you about the schedule of the speech contest at the end December. -> thêm of trước December

As far as i -> Viết hoa lên nhá (I) knew, you has -> have decided to hold a speech contest. And my classmates and I are really -> bỏ really interested in it. However, we found that the day which be ->is chosen to celebrate the competition is too near the final examination. So could you please help us to change the schedule of this debate contest to take place at the end of January. -> thêm dấu hỏi chấm (?)

How do you think about my opinion?. Please reply to me and let me know if it is possible.
Thank you very much for your time in considering this request. I'm looking foward -> forward to hearing back from you on this matter.
Sincerely,
Jennifer
bạn tham khảo ^^

 

[npan_184]

Mọi người xem mình có viết đúng ko ạ, nếu sai mong góp ý, và chữa lỗi giúp mình
Dear Mr. Dean,
My name is Jennifer. I'm currently a second year student of the English Department.

I'm writing this letter to tell you about the schedule of the speech contest at the end December.

As far as i knew, you has decided to hold a speech contest. And my classmates and I are really interested in it. However, we found that the day which be chosen to celebrate the competition is too near the final examination. So could you please help us to change the schedule of this debate contest to take place at the end of January.

How do you think about my opinion?. Please reply to me and let me know if it is possible.
Thank you very much for your time in considering this request. I'm looking foward to hearing back from you on this matter.
Sincerely,
Jennifer

Dear Mr. Dean,
My name is Jennifer. I'm currently a second year student of==>in the English Department. I'm writing this letter to tell you about the schedule of the speech contest at the end of December.

As far as i==> I knew, you has==>have decided to hold a speech contest. And===>Both my classmates and I are really interested in it. However, we found that the day which be==>is chosen to celebrate the competition is too near==>close the final examination.
So could you please help us to change the schedule of this debate contest? How about taking place at the end of January?

How do you think about my opinion? Please reply to me and let me know if it is possible. Thank you very much for your time in considering this request. I'm looking forward to hearing back from you on this matter.
Sincerely,
Jennifer.
Học tốt!

 

[Phạm Tùng]

I are really -> bỏ really

theo anh nghĩ thì cái này vẫn để được nha em