Chữa bài (Hobby)

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Hello everyone!
Today, I will tell you about my hobby!
My hobby is playing football. I very enjoy playing football. I stared this hobby for three year ago, my hobby is playing football because playing football is good for my health and make me fun. I usually playing football with my friend and my brother at the free time or play it singlely. I always do this hobby in the stadium. I thinks this hobby is very funny, exciting and interesting. Certainly, in the future i will continue the hobby.
That on!
Thanks for your listening!
 

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Hello everyone!
Today, I will tell you about my hobby!
My hobby is playing football. I very enjoy playing football. I stared this hobby for three year ago, my hobby is playing football because playing football is good for my health and make me fun. I usually playing football with my friend and my brother at the free time or play it singlely. I always do this hobby in the stadium. I thinks this hobby is very funny, exciting and interesting. Certainly, in the future i will continue the hobby.
That on!
Thanks for your listening!
Hello everyone!
Today, I am going to tell you about my hobby!
My hobby is playing football. I enjoy playing football very much. I started this hobby for three year ago, my hobby is playing football because playing football is good for my health and make me fun. I usually playing football with my friend and my brother in our free time or play it by myself in the stadium. I think this hobby is very funny, exciting and interesting. Certainly, in the future i will continue the hobby.
That on! (???)
Thank you for listening
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https://diendan.hocmai.vn/threads/talking-about-your-hobbies-in-english.628460/
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