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Topic: Hobby
In my our live, I have only one hobby. Yes, it is reading. When I have free time I always spend almost of the time to read comic books, textbooks, books of life, etc. I started this this hobby five years ago. I enjoy reading to relax after many lesson at school. Moreover, reading book can help me improve my knowledge. I can learn new information about life skills in some books. For a day, I spend about two to three hours for this hobby. I often share it with my brother. Sometimes, I can borrow books from my brother. I think that hobby is very useful in our life and interesting. In the future, I will continue this hobby.

 

[Tzuyu-chan]

When I have free time I always spend almost of the time to read comic books, textbooks, books of life, etc. I started this this hobby five years ago.

=> reading

 

[God of dragon]

Topic: Hobby
In my our live, I have only one hobby. Yes, it is reading. When I have free time I always spend almost of the time to read comic books, textbooks, books of life, etc. I started this this hobby five years ago. I enjoy reading to relax after many lesson at school. Moreover, reading book can help me improve my knowledge. I can learn new information about life skills in some books. For a day, I spend about two to three hours for this hobby. I often share it with my brother. Sometimes, I can borrow books from my brother. I think that hobby is very useful in our life and interesting. In the future, I will continue this hobby.

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[jehinguyen]

Chị có vài góp ý thế này ^^
Hobby is one of the most important things we should have in our life. Of all hobbies in the world, I like reading most.
In my our live => my life, I have only one hobby. Yes, it is reading [*]. When I have free time I always spend almost => most of the time to read => reading comic books, textbooks, books of life => novels/ self-help books/ life-changing books/ .., etc. I started this this hobby five years ago. I enjoy reading to relax after many lessons at school. Moreover, reading book can help [**] me improve my knowledge. I can learn => acquire new information about life skills in some books. For a day => Everyday I spend from two to three hours for => on this hobby. I often share it with my brother. Sometimes, I can borrow books from my brother => him [tránh lặp từ]. I think this hobby is very useful in our life and interesting [***]. In the future, I will continue this hobby.

[*] Cả 2 câu đó nghe khá gượng và giống như văn nói. Em có thể tham khảo câu này : Hobby is one of the most important things we should have in our life. Of all hobbies in the world, I like reading most.
[**] Có thể tham khảo cấu trúc : enable sb to do sth : giúp ai làm gì, hỗ trợ ai làm gì.
[***] Nên tham khảo câu này : I think this hobby is one of the most interesting and useful indoor activities.
Có gì thắc mắc hãy hỏi lại nhe ^^ Chúc em học tốt.

 

[Lê Uyên Nhii]

Topic: Hobby
In my our live -> my life
live (v): sống
life (n) cuộc sống
TTSH + N/Ving

I have only one hobby. Yes, it is reading. When I have free time I always spend almost of the time to read comic books, textbooks, books of life, etc.
Theo mình thì câu như thế này sẽ hay hơn
Everyone has their own hobbies, and my hobby is reading useful books. In my free time, I usually read many book such as comic books, science books , .... hoặc là I usually spend most of my free time reading ny book such as comic books, science books , ....
I started this this hobby five years ago.
I started having this hobby 5 years ago or I have had this hobby for 5 years

I enjoy reading to relax after many lesson at school.
After many lessons at school, I often relax by reading interesting pages of comic books

Moreover, reading book can help me improve my knowledge.

phân biệt help sb to do sth và help sb do sth
+ help sb do sth: giúp đỡ ai đó nhưng tự bản thân người được giúp đỡ cũng tham gia vào quá trình hành động (giúp đỡ 1 phần).
+ help sb to do sth: giúp ai đó làm toàn bộ công việc, người được giúp đỡ không tham gia vào quá trình hành động.

I can learn new information about life skills in some books. For a day -> everyday, I spend about two to -> or three hours for this hobby. I often share it with my brother (And) Sometimes, I can borrow books from my brother -> He sometimes lends me his books .

I think that -> this hobby is very useful in our life and interesting. In the future, I will continue this hobby.

Do lười nên mình mới sửa vậy thoyy
Đây là ý kiến riêng of me nên có sai sót gì mong bỏ qua nhee, có chỗ nào thắc mắc cứ hỏi lại nhé
Mình cũng có nhiều tài liệu về hobby lắm nè ^^ nếu cần thì ib với mình nha
Good Luck !