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Normally, when I have free time, I usually play sports, watch tv, surf webs and read books. After learnt stressful hours , activities such as help me entertain and relax. And playing sport is the free time activity I like best. Firstly, I like to play sport because it is really a healthy activity . You knows, sports provides many benefits for our health. It can improve health and help us to be strong. Addition, sport help us increase in statue and have a excellent body. Secondly, I like sports. I fell as dynamic as possible. Moreover, It make me full of energy. Lastly, well, It is what I enjoy most when playing sports. That is sports can help us take up the community. We will knows a lot of people because of having the same interests in play sport. True me, I was acquainting a lot of friend when I play sports. In short, I like to play sport because it provides many benefits for me. And you? What are activities you like best in your free time?
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Normally, when I have free time, I usually play sports, watch tv, surf webs and read books. After learnt stressful hours , activities such as (cái này có cần ko nhỉ? thêm cái này vào ý bạn là gì?) help me entertain and relax. And playing sport is the free time activity I like best->I like playing sport in my free time best. Firstly, I like to play sport because it is really a healthy activity. You knows->know, sports provides->provide many benefits for our health. It can improve health and help us to be strong. in Addition, sport helps us increase in statue and have an excellent body. Secondly, I like sports. I fell as dynamic as possible. Moreover, It makes me full of energy. Lastly, well, It is what I enjoy most when playing sports. That is sport can help us take up the community. We will know a lot of people because of having the same interests in playing sport. True me, I got acquainted a lot of friends when I play sports. In short, I like to play sport because it provides many benefits for me. And you? What are activities you like best in your free time?
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