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In my opinion, the countryside is a beautiful place. I love it because it is quiet and life here is very slow and easy. We never have to queue in shops and we can drive bikes on street comfortable because there’s much heavy traffic .In the countryside,people plant vegetables and raise cattle themselves.So the food is very fresh here. In addition, the air is clean.It makes us have a good health. The people are very friendly.Everyone know everyone and if someone has a problem, there is always a person who cans help. But the countryside is too quiet. There is nothing to do. It doesn't ) have any parks or, movie theaters or entertainment centers... so many people feel bored. The city life is the opposite. There are many places for entertainment. People can relax by going to the zoo, playing games… And children in the city have more chances to learn because the education is good.T here are many kinds of food here and they are delicious. But people are unfriendly and the city is noisy and has pollution air. Each place has some benefits and limitations. Now, I live in the country and I like the life here. But I always want to live in the city because it is good for my future.

 

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In my opinion, the->X countryside is a beautiful place. I love it because it is quiet and life here is very slow and easy. We never have to queue in shops and we can drive bikes->ride a bike on the street comfortable->comfortably because there’s no much heavy traffic .In the countryside,people plant vegetables and raise cattle themselves.So the food is very fresh here. In addition, the air is clean.It makes us have good health. The people are very friendly.Everyone know->knows everyone->each other and if someone has a problem, there is always a person who cans->can help. But the countryside is too quiet. There is nothing to do. It doesn't ) have any parks or, movie theaters or entertainment centers... so many people feel bored. The city life is the opposite. There are many places for entertainment. People can relax by going to the zoo, playing games… And children in the city have more chances to learn because the->X education is good.There are many kinds of food here and they are delicious. But people are unfriendly and the city is noisy and has pollution air. Each place has some benefits and limitations. Now, I live in the country and I like the life here. But I always want to live in the city because it is good for my future.

 

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Mọi người check ngữ pháp và từ bài này giúp mình nhá:
In my opinion,(bỏ the) countryside is a beautiful place. I love it because it is quiet and life here is very slow and easy. We never have to queue in shops and we can drive bikes on street comfortable because there’s much heavy traffic .In the countryside,people plant vegetables and raise cattle themselves.So the food is very fresh here. In addition, the air is clean.It makes us have a good health. The people are very friendly.Everyone know everyone and if someone has a problem, there is always a person who cans help. But the countryside is too quiet. There is nothing to do. It doesn't ) have any parks or, movie theaters or entertainment centers... so many people feel bored. The city life is the opposite. There are many places for entertainment. People can relax by going to the zoo, playing games… And children in the city have more chances to learn because the education is good.T here are many kinds of food here and they are delicious. But people are unfriendly and the city is noisy and has pollution air. Each place has some benefits and limitations. Now, I live in the country and I like the life here. But I always want to live in the city because it is good for my future.

In my opinion, the countryside is a beautiful place. I love it because it is quiet and life here is very slow and easy. We never have to queue in shops and we can ride a bike on street comfortablely because there isn't much heavy traffic .In the countryside,people plant vegetables and raise cattle by themselves.So the food is very fresh here. In addition, the air is clean.It makes us have a good health. The people are very friendly.Everyone knows each others and if someone has a problem, there is always a person who cans help. But the countryside is too quiet. There is nothing to do. It doesn't have any parks or(bỏ dấu phẩy) movie theaters or entertainment centers... so many people feel bored. The city life is the opposite. There aren't many places for entertainment. People can go to the zoo for relaxation… And children in the city have more chances to learn because the education is good.There are many kinds of food here and they are delicious. But people are unfriendly and the city is noisy and has polluted (tính từ của pollution) air. Each place has some benefits and limitations. Now, I live in the country and I like the life here. But I always want to live in the city because it is good for my future.