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I and my friends often take part in childrens program. This is a program which help orphans, street children, and mentally/physically disabled children in our town to have better life. We often visit them on sunday at house of gratitude. We give them presents such as fruit, candy, cakes, old clothes and so on. We teach them to learn about many things in life, tell them funny and meaningful stories,..etc ..so that they can fall in line with society without any complex. They're very happy and like us. I thinhk it's really a useful activity. I as well as my friends contribute to making the world better.

 

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I and my friends often take part in childrens program. This is a program which help orphans, street children, and mentally/physically disabled children in our town to have better life. We often visit them on sunday at house of gratitude. We give them presents such as fruit, candy, cakes, old clothes and so on. We teach them to learn about many things in life, tell them funny and meaningful stories,..etc ..so that they can fall in line with society without any complex. They're very happy and like us. I thinhk it's really a useful activity. I as well as my friends contribute to making the world better.

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I and my friends often take part in childrens program. This is a program which help orphans, street children, and mentally/physically disabled children in our town to have better life. We often visit them on sunday at house of gratitude. We give them presents such as fruit, candy, cakes, old clothes and so on. We teach them to learn about many things in life, tell them funny and meaningful stories,..etc ..so that they can fall in line with society without any complex. They're very happy and like us. I thinhk it's really a useful activity. I as well as my friends contribute to making the world better.

Lỗi ngữ pháp thì hầu như khoog có nhưng về từ vựng thì cậu có sai một số chỗ như này:
I and my friends often take part in childrens => children program. This is a program which help => helps orphans, street children, and mentally/physically disabled children in our town to have better => a better life. We often visit them on Sunday at house => the house of gratitude. We give them presents such as fruit, candy, cakes, old clothes and so on. We teach them to learn about many things in life, tell them funny and meaningful stories,..etc ..so that they can fall in line with society without any complex => complexity. They're very happy and like us. I thinhk => think it's really a useful activity. I as well as my friends contribute to making the world better.

 

[Jennifer Lu]

I and my friends often take part in childrens program. This is a program which help orphans, street children, and mentally/physically disabled children in our town to have better life. We often visit them on sunday at house of gratitude. We give them presents such as fruit, candy, cakes, old clothes and so on. We teach them to learn about many things in life, tell them funny and meaningful stories,..etc ..so that they can fall in line with society without any complex. They're very happy and like us. I thinhk it's really a useful activity. I as well as my friends contribute to making the world better.

Bạn không được viết là I and my friends đâu, đúng chuẩn là phải viết my friends and I đấy, kể cả nói đúng chuẩn cũng phải nói như thế bạn ak