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TOPIC: Talk about the library at your library:
There are many rooms in my school such as: computer room, music room, physic room. But many favourite room is library. My school library is very clean and large. It's between 2 blocks of room in my school. It's in front of my classroom. There are 2 rooms in the library. The first room is for people who read books. The second room is for the librarian. There are bookshelf in my school library. On the left of library there is also a bookshelf. There are many kind of books such as: comic books, documentaries, comedy books, text books. On the right of library, there is a big television and a mirror. Between the room, there are 10 tables and 20 chairs. There are many mineral water bottles in the table. One more thing, there is a big fan between the library. Everday, I go to this library to read books. I can come there with some friends. I want to read books because books help me get more knowledge and improve more lifeskill.

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[quân pro]

One more thing, there is a big fan between the library.

anh không hiểu nghĩa câu này

Everday, I go to this library to read books.

Sai chính tả

I want to read books because books help me get more knowledge and improve more lifeskill.

Nên viết là I like reading books ..... and improve my life skill

 

[anbinhf]

anh không hiểu nghĩa câu này

Câu đó chị ấy dùng sai , phải là One more thing, there is a big fan in the library.
Chị @Nguyễn Phan Ánh Nguyệt hiểu " there is a big fan between the library." là : có 1 cái quạt rất lớn ở giữa thư viện :">

 

[Tzuyu-chan]

There are bookshelf in my school library.

->bookshelves

 

[KhanhKhanhk7]

Khanh sửa lại giúp bạn nè:
There are many rooms in my school such as: computer room, music room, physic room...But besides those classrooms, my favorite room is the library. My school library is very clean and large. It's between 2 blocks of room in my school. It's in front of my classroom so I can go there often. There are 2 rooms in the library. The first room is for people who want to read books. The second room is for the librarian. There are bookshelves in my school library. On the left of library there is also a bookshelf. There are many kind of books such as: comic books, documentaries, comedy books, text books. On the right of library, there is a big television and a mirror. Between the room, there are 10 tables and 20 chairs. There are many mineral water bottles in the table. One more thing, there is a big fan between the library. Everday, I go to this library to read books. I can come there with some friends. I want to read books because books help me get more knowledge and improve more lifeskill.

 

[LLunaa]

TOPIC: Talk about the library at your library:
There are many rooms in my school such as: computer room, music room, physic room. But many favourite room is library. My school library is very clean and large. It's between 2 blocks of room in my school. It's in front of my classroom. There are 2 rooms in the library. The first room is for people who read books. The second room is for the librarian. There are bookshelf in my school library. On the left of library there is also a bookshelf. There are many kind of books such as: comic books, documentaries, comedy books, text books. On the right of library, there is a big television and a mirror. Between the room, there are 10 tables and 20 chairs. There are many mineral water bottles in the table. One more thing, there is a big fan between the library. Everday, I go to this library to read books. I can come there with some friends. I want to read books because books help me get more knowledge and improve more lifeskill.

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There are many rooms in my school such as: computer room, music room, physic room. But many favourite room is library. ( ý em câu này là sao nhỉ?)My school library is very clean and large. It's between 2 blocks of room in my school. It's in front of my classroom. There are 2 rooms in the library. The first room is for people who read books. The second room is for the librarian. There are bookshelf in my school library( tất nhiên trong thư viện phải có kệ sách rồi nha em. Chị nghĩ em nên ghi số lượng hay hình dáng kích thước hay được sơn có màu gì thì hay hơn đó, từ bookshelf đang ở số ít kìa em). On the left of library there is also a bookshelf ( câu trước em miêu tả có nhiều kệ sách nhưng câu này và mấy câu sau chị đọc chỉ thấy có 1 kệ thôi nè nên sửa lại ha). There are many kind of books such as: comic books, documentaries, comedy books, text books.(em đã dùng such as 1 lần rồi nên câu này dùng từ like để liệt kê thì theo chị sẽ tránh lặp từ đúng ko nhỉ?) On the right of library, there is a big television and a mirror. Between the room, there are 10 tables and 20 chairs. There are many mineral water bottles in the table. One more thing, there is a big fan between the library.(ý em ở đây chắc là quạt trần phải ko ta? ) Everday, I go to this library to read books. I can come there with some friends. I want to read books because books help me get more knowledge and improve more lifeskill.
Sửa:
There are many rooms in my school such as: computer room, music room, physic room. But besides those classrooms, my favorite room is the library .My school library is very clean and large. It's between 2 blocks of room in my school. It's in front of my classroom so I can go there often. There are 2 rooms in the library. The first room is for people who want to read books. The second room is for the librarian. There is a big (and yellow/ blue/,.....)bookshelf on the left of the school library . My school library has many kind of books like: comic books, documentaries, comedy books, text books. On the right of library, there is a big television and a mirror. Between the room, there are 10 tables and 20 chairs. There are many mineral water bottles on the table. One more thing, there is a big fan hanging in the middle of the room
Everday, I go to this library to read books. I can come there with some friends. I like to read books because books help me get more new knowledge and improve more lifeskill.
P/s: -Có một số ý @KhanhKhanhk7 làm đúng nên chị xin phép em chị đưa xuống đây để sửa cho bạn @Nguyễn Phan Ánh Nguyệt để đoạn văn hoàn thiện hơn nha
- có thể chị sửa không đúng hoàn toàn nên em tham khảo nha
@quân pro
cho mình hỏi câu Everday, I go to this library to read books. của bạn ấy sai chính tả chỗ nào vậy ạ

 

[quân pro]

@quân pro
cho mình hỏi câu Everday, I go to this library to read books. của bạn ấy sai chính tả chỗ nào vậy ạ

Ở chỗ Everday đó
Phải là everyday chứ

 

[LLunaa]

Ở chỗ Everday đó
Phải là everyday chứ

ừ nhỉ. Mình có thói quen đọc lướt khá nhanh nên không để ý chỗ đấy nữa
@Nguyễn Phan Ánh Nguyệt sửa lại chỗ đó nữa nha em

 

[Kỳ Thư]

My school library is very clean and large

Theo mình chỗ này nên là: My school's library is very clean and large .