bài viết tiếng anh, secondary school playing video games

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binhpham_04

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mọi người xem chữa hộ mình lỗi sai trong bài này nha!!!!!!!!!!:D:D


Many secondary school students can do all work in order to play video games.
They can not eat, not do their homework: they can lie, leave school, ..., even kill human beings. Why do they like playing video games? There are many following reasons .

Firstly, playing is a necessary demand. People need to relax before continueing to work. And game is very popular: moreover, it's easy to use it.

Seconly, video game has various type : such as : action, dramatic, entertainment, intelligence, specilly people can communicate in social game. Besides, picture's game is beautiful, likely and attractable.

Final reason, the secondary school students are too young to understand that game is imaginal, it isn't real in their life. It's imaginative world which is invented by human beings, it's used for entertainment purpose, not to control them. And they haven't understood that what the important is in their life. Therefore, the parents and the school need sit beside them to direct them to real purpose 's life

thanks a lt
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hoang_tu_thien_than198

mọi người xem chữa hộ mình lỗi sai trong bài này nha!!!!!!!!!!:D:D


Many secondary school students can do all work in order to play video games.
They don't eat, do not their homework: they can lie, leave school, ..., even kill human beings. Why do they like playing video games? There are many following reasons .

Firstly, playing is a necessary demand. People need to relax before continueing to work. And game is very popular: moreover, it's easy to use it.

Seconly, video game has various type : such as : action, dramatic, entertainment, intelligence, specilly people can communicate in social game. Besides, picture's game is beautiful, likely and attractable.

Final reason, the secondary school students are too young to understand that game is imaginal, it isn't real in their life. It's imaginative world which is invented by human beings, it's used for entertainment purpose, not to control them. And they haven't understood that what the important is in their life. Therefore, the parents and the school need sit beside them to direct them to real purpose 's life

thanks a lt
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Bài này tương đối ổn!
Có ai có thể dùng cách khác trong câu "Họ có thể Ko ăn"?
 
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binhpham_04

mọi người xem kĩ họ mình với ,bài này mình phải nộp bài chấm điểm đó
theo mọi nguòi thì có thẻ bỏ từ chỗ '' they don't eat ....why do they like playing video games?'' ko
vì cô mình đòi hỏi vào đề một cách trực tiếp
 
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hoang_tu_thien_than198

Theo mình bỏ từ đầu đến game?
Thay bằng:
Do you like playing game? I think most of us like this. Nowaday, many secondary school students can do all work in order to play video games. Why do they like playing video games? There are many following reasons .
Mình ko biết nữa, tùy bạn!
 
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kuckutkute

mọi người xem chữa hộ mình lỗi sai trong bài này nha!!!!!!!!!!:D:D


They don't eat, do not =>câu nà hoang tu sửa sai : yer can use the form "neither nor : They neither eat nor do their home work their homework: they can lie, leave school, ..., even kill human beings . Why do they like playing video games? There are many following reasons .

Firstly, playing is a necessary demand. People need to relax before continueing to work. And game is very popular: moreover, it's easy to use it.

Seconly, video game has various type(S) such as : action, dramatic, entertainment( what do yer mean bout this word? có loại game hành động kịch giải trí ư , chỗ nà mắc lối parallel :"> tớ nghĩ vậy), intelligence, specilly people can communicate in social-> bạn nên dùng online thay cho social game(S). Besides, picture's game( người ta dùng sở hữu cách 'S vs người thôi bạn) is beautiful, likely and attractable -> attractive.

Final reason, the secondary school students are too young to understand that game is imaginal, it isn't real in their life. It's imaginative world which is invented by human beings, it's used for entertainment purpose, not to control them. And they haven't understood that ->? omit what the important is in their life:"> câu nà the + N , tớ kg hiểu bạn có ý gì trong câu nà :-/ what is the importance in their life hở?. Therefore, the parents and the school need sit beside them to direct them to real purpose 's life

thanks a lt
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Bài này tương đối ổn!
Có ai có thể dùng cách khác trong câu "Họ có thể Ko ăn"?-> They may not need to eat : câu nà cần đặt trong ngữ cảnh cụ thể nhé:) dịch kg văn cảnh khó chuẩn lắm bạn à
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