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#Hello everybody, my name is Thanh, I have parents, brother and sister.I live in Thủ Thừa district,Long an province, it's a very quiet rural area with fresh air and people are very friendly, my father is a farmer, my mother is housewife my younger sister and younger brother is a student.I study English in Long An University, I takes about 30 minutes from my house to school I hope that after graduation I can become an English teacher contribute to the cause of education.
#I study English in Long an university that is a large school with many blocks and hall consists five series A, b, c, d, e, f, with more than 100 classrooms.Besides it’s consist of parking lot, cafeteria, sports ground with many trees, practice informatics rooms, laboratories, accounting rooms, administration rooms, computer science rooms, English rooms,medical clinic rooms,library with a lot of books ... I love my school because the teachers in this friendly, they bring knowledge and understanding to students, I love this place ..
#I live in Thủ Thừ district, Long An province which is a small town quiet, not as glamorous and exciting cities in which there are many trees, sunshine and fresh air, where I live there is a poetic river flow, the river bring a lot of fish and shrimp,It’s the main transport route linking Vam Co Dong and Vam Co Tay river so it’s has a lot of boat and canoe have lots of tourists to visit, the most beautiful rivers in the evening sunset, river has a bright yellow sun of the afternoon, people are very friendly and hospitable, they are willing to say “hello” to tourists to visit.
#In human life may have a lot of experience and lessons to learn, I felt it in my mind. Before that I used to spend money like water, I don’t want to know what to save money and effort to make it very difficult, I just know I like to spend money, that's all,One day,my mother decided sold cake. I must help mother sold cake, I don’t know one thousand of Vietnam so small but make it very difficult.Siting under the harshness of the midday summer sun more I penetrated the miserable of a working people, I understand why the money is unpleasant smell that smell of sweat and tears of people, something change my thinking I understand the value of money and spend it more savings.
#One of my possession is an Oxford advanced learner's dictionary I bought it in the Ho Chi Minh cities at Nguyen Van Cu bookstore, it is very big, thick and expensive, it’s cost about 300 thousand, but I decided to buy it to learn english because it has a lot of words, look up easily and accurately, it’s helps me expand my vocabulary and I love it a lot. I'll try to learn and keep it carefully.
:)>- Có ai sửa giúp mình mấy cái bài luận này hôn?hj chỉ ra lỗi sai dùm mình nhen.Thanks nhiều:-*
 
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Hello everybody, my name is Thanh, I have parents, brother and sister.I live in Thủ Thừa district,Long an province, it's a very quiet rural area with fresh air and people are very friendly, my father is a farmer, my mother is housewife , my younger sister and younger brother is ( are chứ) a student.I study English in Long An University, I takes about 30 minutes from my house to school. I hope that after ( thêm my)graduation I can( dùng will hay hơn can) become an English teacher (thêm and) contribute to the cause of education.
#I study English in Long an university .that is a large school with many blocks and hall consists ( thêm of- consist of) five series A, b, c, d, e, f, with more than 100 classrooms.Besides it’s consist of parking lot, cafeteria, sports ground with many trees, practice informatics rooms, laboratories, accounting rooms, administration rooms, computer science rooms, English rooms,medical clinic rooms,library with a lot of books ... I love my school because the teachers in this friendly( có đánh sai chính tả ko nhỉ), they bring knowledge and understanding to students, I love this place ..
#I live in Thủ Thừ district, Long An province which is a small town quiet, not as glamorous and exciting cities in which there are many trees, sunshine and fresh air, where I live there is a poetic river flow, the river bring a lot of fish and shrimp,It’s the main transport route linking Vam Co Dong and Vam Co Tay river so it’s has a lot of boats and canoes have lots of tourists to( sao lại có to nhỉ) visit, the most beautiful rivers in the evening sunset( coi lạu nghĩa câu), river has a bright yellow sun of the afternoon, people are very friendly and hospitable, they are willing to say “hello” to tourists to visit.

anh thêm mây cái dấu câu nữa nhé, đọc liền tù tì mà mấy dấu biến đâu mất.
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