tham khao
My home-town is very nice(.) IT has lots of people, a large shopping center, beautiful parks and food courts. There IS no problem IN living THERE, it IS very good place to stay, and I will choose my home-town AS A PLACE to live after retirement. However, if I have to change one thing about my home-town, I would build more leisure centRES because sports HELPS people train THEIR bodies, AND can THEM teach what teamwork is and bond THEIR family.
Firstly, if more public sports centRES WERE TO BE BUILT, there will be an increase IN THE NUMBERS of number of people who goes to play sports or exercise. Sports do not only make people healthier but also mentally, they can personally be more confident. Many studies showed that people who exercise can more likely be gentle than others who do not. This is because sports let people to release their aggressiveness; hence, they are more moderate, and then less criminal ACTIVITIES will occur in society.
Secondly, there are individual sports but there are many team sports, such as soccer, rugby, basketball, water polo. These team sports deepen relationshipS between team-mates. By learning teamwork, people can be TAUGHT a way to be closer to other people and they acquire to devote, sacrifice and help others and work together. Every team cannot win by acting alone. If they are playing soccer and just one person KEEPS POSSESSION OF THE ball, then they can be defeated easily because that person cannot play WITH the others. Hence, a person will learn to cooperate WITH OTHERS. Also, sports make people challenge. If a person is not about average, then s/he will be gloomy because s/he has been an obstacle.
Thirdly, as people work in A busy AND SOCIAL LIFE , then they can be a little careless toWARD their families. However, as leisure centRES ARE available, activity WITH THE family can occur more frequently(,) then relationshipS WITHIN THE familY will rehabilitate and there will be more communication in THE family with THEIR playing sports together. RelationshipS between friends also develops. As they exercise together, then they will have more consensuses between them and THIS can reduce discord.
I love my home-town and I think there is nothing to change, but if I have to change, I WOULD want to build more leisure centRES in order to encourage people to train themselves, HELP them to learn team work and create deeper relationshipS between people.