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my father is a teacher.he is a jovial man.he is 50 years old.he very busy but he also spend an hour playing sports.he usually playing table-tennis,playing football and sometime he playing chess with me.
my mother is a teacher,too but her office diffirent my father's.she is 45 years old.when she is free,she often washing,cooking and doing errands.sometime,she is going shopping with us.I love my mother very much!
my sister is 18 years old.she is a student.when she's free, she often listening to her favourite music,reading books or playing sports.she is very beautifully and very nice.I love her.
we get up at 5 o'clock every morning.after breakfast my parents go to work, my sister and I go to school.we have lunch at 12 o'clock and dinner at 7p.m.In the evening, after dinner,we gather in the sitting room talking then watching TV for about 3 hours.
my family is a very happy one.we love each other very much@-)hix em k bjt đúng sai là sao kả.ai gjup em voi.pm lai ngay cho em na'
 
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lethihongtrang

ai lên tiếng 1 câu đi mừ
sao ko ai giúp em a?
em chỉ ko bit đúng hay sai thui, ai đọc rùi thì cho ý kiến voi.hix.
 
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nghagiang

lethihongtrang said:
my father is a teacher.he is a jovial man.he is 50 years old.he very busy but he also spend an hour playing sports.he usually playing table-tennis,playing football and sometime he playing chess with me.
my mother is a teacher,too but her office diffirent from my father's one.she is 45 years old.when she is free,she often washing,cooking and doing errands.sometime,she is going shopping with us.I love my mother very much!
my sister is 18 years old.she is a student.when she's free, she often listening to her favourite music,reading books or playing sports.she is very beautifully and very nice.I love her.
we get up at 5 o'clock every morning.after breakfast my parents go to work, my sister and I go to school.we have lunch at 12 o'clock and dinner at 7p.m.In the evening, after dinner,we gather in the sitting room talking then watching TV for about 3 hours.
my family is a very happy one (câu này thì không rõ là đúng hay sai).we love each other very much@-)
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ILoveNicholasTeo

lethihongtrang said:
my father is a teacher.he is a jovial man.he is 50 years old.he very busy but he also spend an hour playing sports.he usually playing table-tennis,playing football and sometime he playing chess with me.
my mother is a teacher,too but her office diffirent my father's.she is 45 years old.when she is free,she often washing,cooking and doing errands.sometime,she is going shopping with us.I love my mother very much!
my sister is 18 years old.she is a student.when she's free, she often listening to her favourite music,reading books or playing sports.she is very beautifully and very nice.I love her.
we get up at 5 o'clock every morning.after breakfast my parents go to work, my sister and I go to school.we have lunch at 12 o'clock and dinner at 7p.m.In the evening, after dinner,we gather in the sitting room talking then watching TV for about 3 hours.
my family is a very happy one.we love each other very much@-)hix em k bjt đúng sai là sao kả.ai gjup em voi.pm lai ngay cho em na'
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1. he is very busy
2. spends
3.plays
4.-plays
5.-plays
6.her office is diffirent from my father's.
7.cooks-washes
8.-does
9.-goes
10.-listens
11.-reads
12.-plays
13.-beautiful
14.-talk
15.-watch
 
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study_and_play

ILoveNicholasTeo said:
1. he is very busy
2. spends
3.plays
4.-plays
5.-plays
6.her office is diffirent from my father's.
7.cooks-washes
8.-does
9.-goes
10.-listens
11.-reads
12.-plays
13.-beautiful
14.-talk
15.-watch
Bấm để xem đầy đủ nội dung ...

To spend time in doing ST: dành thời gian để làm gì
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@hongtrang: Hình như bài của hongtrang chị thấy sai khá nhiều đấy :( toàn sai lỗi ngữ pháp vs dùng từ , cấu trúc ko à... Em xem lại các thì, cách chia chứ đừng "tiện đâu dùng đấy" thế, nguy hiểm lắm. Sắp đi ăn cơm chưa dò kĩ, chak em đang học cấp 2 hả, chứ cấp 3 thì báo động đấy :D

@ILoveNicholasTeo: lâu ko bon chen ở hocmai em vẫn còn kết box anh ah :p ở hocmai chị "ấn tượng" vs em nhất đấy, nếu có cơ hội chị sẽ kết bạn vs em...hì... thấy em chăm posst bài, mà cũng chất lượng nữa, vs lại thik eng như chị... cố gắng hén ;)
 
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lethihongtrang

khi (76)
em hoc ngu tieng anh lem'
anh chi nèo có cách học tiếng anh nèo hay dạy em với.em ko bjt bắt đầu từ đâu nữa.học và wên nó thường đi kèm với nhau mừ
 
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