Anh Am ơi, là em đây...

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bonjour

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anh giúp em sửa mấy bài luận nhé:


My workingday:
My name’s Hằng.I’m seventeen years old. I’m a student of Hai Phong University.
My workingday is start early. I often get up at 5.30 a.m. I have a shower and get dressed . After clean my teeth I have breakfast with my family. I leave my house at six o’clock and go to the my school by bycicle. I work at it from 6.30 to 11.30 in the morning. I come back home at 12 o’clock and have lunch. In the afternoon, I’m at home and do my homework. I often sleep at about 1 o’clock to 2.30 p.m. After that, I tidy up my house with my mother. I cook dinner at 5.0 p.m. But on Monday, Wednesday and Friday, I have to go to the langues centre from 4.30 p.m to 6.30 a.m and learn the English. I often have dinner at 7 o’clock. I wash up and at 8 o’clock, I do my exercises. Sometimes I watch T.V with my parents. I go to bed at about 10.0 p.m.
That is my workingday. I’m very like my life now and I shall have new plans for self
 
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bonjour

My house:
My name is Hằng. I’m 17 years old and I live with my family in our house☺.
My house is in the Phương Lưu Street of Hải Phòng City. It’s not very big. There is a living room , a kitchen , a warehouse and a terrace. There are three bedrooms and two bathrooms. In the living room , there is a table, a T.V, a shelf , there are 4 chairs. In the kitchen there is a fridge, a cupboard under the sink and there aren’t any tables or chairs. Upstaire, in the bedroom, there is a bed, there are 2 desks . On the desk , there is a lamp, a computer and there some books next to the telephone. In the bathroom, there is a shower , a toilet , a washbasin under mirror.
My house is in the city centre. So that can be facile for shopping, amused… I’m very love it
 
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bonjour

Your self :
My name is Hằng. I’m 17 years old. I’m a student of Haiphong University.
I’m quite tall. I’m slim. I’m not very pretty. I’ve got a long hair. My hair is dark. I have got the glasses. I often put white shirt and blue jean.
My family have got my father, my mother , me and my young sister. My father is 50 years old. He’s quite good-looking. He isn’t quite tall. He’s got short hair. And his eyes are brown. My mother is 49 years old. She’s good-looking. She isn’t very fat. And my sister is quite pretty. She is 14 years old. She learns at the QuangTrung hight school. I’m very love my family.
I learn at the Haiphong University. I’m a student of “kế toán” class. My class’s got 84 students. We are very “vui vẻ”
I like learning the English, playing the badminton, the organist. I like watch the film of Korea. I like shopping, walking, listening the Young music. And I can sing.
I’m “cảm thấy” happy and love the my life
 
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bonjour

một số phần của em nó cứ thế nào ấy
anh xem hộ em rồi bảo cho em phải làm gì , anh nhé
_________________________bé Gà_______________
thank anh nhiều lắm________vì tất cả
 
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vietdreamerz

Kế toán: accountant
Ngành: department
Vui vẻ: funny
Cảm thấy: feel (v)
Đọc qua thấy đầy chỗ sai. :)) Cố đọc lại mà sửa đi.

Bon là bé gà? Am là mẹ gà? Zin là con gà?
Lộn tùng phèo. =))

Sư cũng phải làm cái này. Tất cả là 10 topic.
Thi vấn đáp. Đc 8 đ. Điểm quá trình cũng 8.
Môn này đc 8,0. Sướng. :))
 
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amaranth

bonjour said:
My workingday:
My name’s Hằng.I’m seventeen years old. I’m a student of Hai Phong University.
My workingday starts early. I often get up at 5.30 a.m., then have a shower and get dressed. After cleaning my teeth, I have breakfast with my family. I leave my house at six o’clock and go to -t-h-e-m-y- school by bycicle. I work there from 6.30 to 11.30 in the morning. I return home at 12 o’clock and have lunch. In the afternoon, I stay home doing my homework. I often take a nap from about 1 o’clock to 2.30 p.m. After that, I help my mother tidy up my house. I often cook dinner at 5.0 p.m. except for Monday, Wednesday and Friday when I have to go to the language centre from 4.30 p.m to 6.30 a.m to learn -t-h-e- English. I often have dinner at 7 o’clock. I wash up and at 8 o’clock, and then do my exercices. Sometimes I watch T.V with my parents. I go to bed at about 10.0 p.m.
This is my working day. I very much enjoy my life at the time and I will have new plans for myself.
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amaranth

vietdreamerz said:
Kế toán: accountant
Ngành: department
Vui vẻ: funny
Cảm thấy: feel (v)
Đọc qua thấy đầy chỗ sai. :)) Cố đọc lại mà sửa đi.

Bon là bé gà? Am là mẹ gà? Zin là con gà?
Lộn tùng phèo. =))

Sư cũng phải làm cái này. Tất cả là 10 topic.
Thi vấn đáp. Đc 8 đ. Điểm quá trình cũng 8.
Môn này đc 8,0. Sướng. :))
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Chúng tôi sống rất vui vẻ (với nhau). => happy
Anh ta là một con người vui vẻ. => jolly
Đó là một trong số hiếm hoi những buổi tiệc vui vẻ mà chúng tôi tham dự cùng nhau. => joyful
Anh ta rất hay kể những câu chuyện vui vẻ. => funny

Gia đình Am là trại gia cầm mà ;))
 
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vietdreamerz

amaranth said:


Chúng tôi sống rất vui vẻ (với nhau). => happy
Anh ta là một con người vui vẻ. => jolly
Đó là một trong số hiếm hoi những buổi tiệc vui vẻ mà chúng tôi tham dự cùng nhau. => joyful
Anh ta rất hay kể những câu chuyện vui vẻ. => funny
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Sợ

amaranth said:
Gia đình Am là trại gia cầm mà ;))
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Sợ hơn.
 
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amaranth

bonjour said:
My house:
My name is Hằng. I’m 17 years old and I live with my family in a house on Phương Lưu Street of Hải Phòng City. It’s not very big. There is a living room , a kitchen , a warehouse and a terrace. There are three bedrooms and two bathrooms. In the living room, there is a table, a T.V, a shelf , and 4 chairs. In the kitchen there is a fridge, a cupboard under the sink and hardly any tables or chairs. Upstairs, in the bedroom, there is a bed and 2 desks . On the desk , there is a lamp, a computer with several books next to the telephone. In the bathroom, there is a shower , a toilet , and a washbasin under the hanging mirror.
My house is in the city centre, so it's convenient whenever we like to go for shopping, amusements… I love it very much.
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