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1/ English is the most useful language that people should learn to get good at. First, English is an international language. Therefore, it helps to communicate with people from other countries easily. that's great experience if you have some foreign friends and understand about many different cultures in the world. Imagine that how amazing if you can travel wherever you want with English. Second, most of important documents were written by english. Studying this language can help you open your mind. you read famous original books, watch US-UK films without translation... so you can improve your knowledge effectively. last, a fluently spoken english candidate is always received high recommendation from employers. more working oppotunities are offered which require english skills. if you are master in english, you'll get a good job, earn a lot of money and get more promotion. I really think that english is a best choice to study.

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Nowadays, English is used in many country and recognized the main language. Each person has different way to study English. To study English well, I often do grammar exercises in grammar books anytime, listen to the program on the radio and E tapes to improve my listening and sometimes I also listen E songs and sing them. In addition, I always write E as much as possible and learn by heart all newwords anhd texts to be able to remember more words. To improve my speaking, I speak E with my friends anywhere and anytime. Beside, I sometime watch E ( enghlish) program on TV, read short stories or newpapers in E, use a distionaty for reading to study English effectively.
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Spending time in an English-speaking country is a really essential experience for the English-learners as well as the best way to study the language. However, I believe that there are many other strategies for learning English, which are useful enough.
Firstly, studying in an English-speaking country such as Australia gives you a variety of opportunities to improve your speaking and listening skills. Moreover, you practice your English while doing ordinary things, for instance, shopping. Consequently, you become more self-confident. Being overseas is the best way to learn the language effectively. Secondly, providing that the learner is hard-working enough, they can learn English even in their own country. The English Language Schools provide their students with a wide range of opportunities to master the language. Furthermore, there are different methods to practice your skills such as watching English television, reading English books, magazines, etc. The combination of some of these methods might be a really useful strategy. In conclusion, there are many advantages of living in an English-speaking country as this is the best strategy to learn the language. Nevertheless, if the student is responsible and works hard, they can achieve success in studying English not only in a country where the language is widely spoken.
 

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1/ English is the most useful language that people should learn to get good at. First ( firstly) , English is an international language. Therefore, it helps you (to) communicate with people from other countries (in the world) easily. (Of course) That's great experience if you have some foreign friends and understand about (bỏ) many different cultures in the world. Imagine that how amazing if you can travel wherever you want with (using) English. Second (secondly), most of important documents were (are) written by english. Studying this language can help you open your mind. you can read a lot of famous original books, watch US-UK films without translation... so (it's clear that) you can improve your knowledge effectively. Last (finally), a fluently spoken english candidate is always received high recommendation from employers. more working oppotunities are offered which require english skills. if you are master in (nên dùng good at) english, you'll get a good job, earn a lot of money and get more promotion. In conclusion, I really think that english is a (the) best choice to study.
 
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2/ Nowadays, English is used in many country and recognized as the main language. Each person has different ways to study English. In order To study English well, I often do grammar exercises in grammar books anytime ( when i have free time), listen to the program on the radio and E tapes to improve my listening and sometimes I also listen to E songs and sing them. In addition, I always write E as much as possible and learn by heart all the new words and texts to be able to remember more words. (So as )To improve my speaking, I speak E with my friends anywhere and anytime. Beside, I sometimes watch E ( english) programes on TV, read short stories or newpapers in E, use a distionaty(dictionary) for reading to study(and studying) English effectively.
- bạn thiếu kết luận rồi bạn nhé
- khi viết kết luận thì chỉ cần viết thật ngắn gọn thôi bạn nhé
- dùng In short, in conclusion vào đầu câu để hay hơn bạn nhé
 

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Spending time in an English-speaking country is a really essential experience for the English-learners as well as the best way to study the language. However, I believe that there are many other strategies for learning English, which are useful enough.
Firstly, studying in an English-speaking country such as Australia gives you a variety of opportunities to improve your speaking and listening skills. Moreover, you practice your English while doing ordinary things, for instance, shopping. Consequently, you become more self-confident. Being overseas is the best way to learn the language effectively. Secondly, providing that the learner is hard-working enough, they can learn English even in their own country. The English Language Schools provide their students with a wide range of opportunities to master the language. Furthermore, there are different methods to practice your skills such as watching English television, reading English books, magazines, etc. The combination of some of these methods might be a really useful strategy. In conclusion, there are many advantages of living in an English-speaking country as this is the best strategy to learn the language. Nevertheless, if the student is responsible and works hard, they can achieve success in studying English not only in a country where the language is widely spoken.
- câu chủ đề bạn nên viết ngắn gọn lại chút để không bị sai ngữ pháp nhiều nhé
- khi bạn đã kết luận lại với in conclusion thì đừng viết thêm 1 câu đằng sau nữa nhé
- bạn có thể sắp xếp câu này vào 1 chỗ hợp lí trong đoạn văn nhé
- chúc bạn học tốt :)
 

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Spending time in an English-speaking country is a really essential experience => the most wonderful experience để hòa hợp với vế sau có the best for the English-learners as well as the best way to study the language. However, I believe that there are many other strategies for learning English, which are useful enough to help you learn English more easily
Firstly, studying in an English-speaking country such as Australia gives you a variety of opportunities to improve your speaking and listening skills. Moreover, you practice your English while doing ordinary things, for instance, shopping. Consequently, you become more self-confident. Being overseas is the best way to learn the language effectively. Secondly, providing that the learner is hard-working enough, they can learn English even in their own country. The English Language Schools provide their students with a wide range of opportunities to master the language. Furthermore, there are different methods to practice your skills such as watching English television, reading English books, magazines, etc. The combination of some of these methods might be a really useful strategy. In conclusion, there are many advantages of living in an English-speaking country as this is the best strategy to learn the language. Nevertheless, if the student is responsible and works hard, they can achieve success in studying English not only in a country where the language is widely spoken.
 
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