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vanhaipro

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Every family has its own rules. Mine has a few. First, I have to prepare my breakfast because my parents work hard during the day and go to bed very late at night, so they can’t get up early in the morning. Next, I’m permited to play computer games or watch TV after I have finished my homework. In my family, my mother is very busy so I and my father have to do our share of the household chores.My parents let me talk on the phone with my friends but don’t use it too long. I’m allowed to going out with friends in holidays and don’t come home after 11 p.m. My parents don’t want me to use the family motorbike because of my age.Despite a lot of rules, I feel comfortable and safe because I know that my parents want best things for me.
Nhờ mọi ngưòi sửa lỗi bài này cho mình vơi. Mình xin cám ơn
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Ai có lòng tốt giúp cho mình phần mở đầu của 1 bức thư(đây là bức thư gửi cho 1 pen pal) để hoàn thiện luôn.
 
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binhpham_04

Mình nghĩ là
First.........> firstly( trạng ngữ mà)
during the day...........> all day
permited ...........> allowed to V( không phải Ving đâu)
I have finished my homework........> after finishing my homework
best things>>>>>>> the best things
mình thấy vậy cso gì sai cả nhà bào vơi nha
 
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binhpham_04

Mình nghĩ là
First.........> firstly( trạng ngữ mà)
during the day...........> all day
permited ...........> allowed to V( không phải Ving đâu)
I have finished my homework........> after finishing my homework
best things>>>>>>> the best things
mình thấy vậy cso gì sai cả nhà bào vơi nha
 
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kitty286

Every family has its own rules. Mine has a few. First, I have to prepare my breakfast because my parents work hard during the day and go to bed very late at night, so they can’t get up early in the morning. Next, I’m permited to play computer games or watch TV after I have finished my homework. In my family, my mother is very busy so I and my father have to do our share of the household chores.My parents let me talk on the phone with my friends but don’t use it too long. I’m allowed to going out with friends in holidays and don’t come home after 11 p.m. My parents don’t want me to use the family motorbike because of my age.Despite a lot of rules, I feel comfortable and safe because I know that my parents want best things for me.
Nhờ mọi ngưòi sửa lỗi bài này cho mình vơi. Mình xin cám ơn
21_002.gif

Ai có lòng tốt giúp cho mình phần mở đầu của 1 bức thư(đây là bức thư gửi cho 1 pen pal) để hoàn thiện luôn.
don't \Rightarrow not to
going \Rightarrow go
and don't \Rightarrow but not to
best things \Rightarrow the best things
 
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