Writing a paragraph in about 250 words about the following topic

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* In today's modern society, humor always brings good things to people's health and spirit, so in life's challenges, people need a sense of humor. I agree with that, but the fun was not the best way to solve the problem seriously, comfortable.
- When we laugh, it can relax us, release the stress of the day in a special way. There is a folk saying that "One smile is equal to ten tonic scales".On the other hand, in cases where we are faced with the death of a loved one, humor or laughter is not a good idea to deal with the problem...
- Sometimes humor also requires careful thought and choice of words when speaking. When talking or comforting someone, a topic I find funny, but sometimes the topic is unfortunate hurt the listener, another example is jokes that involve sensitive issues that irritate the listener...
* Using humor and smiles is a good way to solve problems, it can bring a lot of useful things. But this method should be used with caution and appropriate to the object and situation.
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