write about covid 19

bphania said:

Maybe to state that for some individuals 2020 is an exceptional year, truly, we will invite another infection called Covid 19. Talking about the Covid plague, there are numerous results and advantages. In any case, sicknesses or elements that obliterate our every day lives will regularly have far more noteworthy outcomes. To begin with, it abandons incredibly weighty sequelae in all parts of human existence, for example, economy, schooling, society, culture, ... just as global relations. We can obviously see that nations in Europe are contaminated a great deal and a ton of them disdain Asian nations. Second, numerous organizations or little organizations fail. Numerous individuals lose their karma short-term, carrying with them the malicious sickness. Schools have to be shut for understudies to keep away from infection. We have known through the battles, as of now, Covid as a foe that the entire world should restrict for an enormous scope. It has been nearly 12 months since Covid began to spread however numerous nations have not recuperated at this point, luckily Vietnam has a decent system and the nation has gotten away from this ungraceful Covid. Concerning the advantages, we see every family has a ton of time to get together and get together. Every nation, however intensely influenced, is the energetic energy of the individuals. so join to confront comparative challenges this opportunity to devastate this interminable foe together. "If you don't mind wear a cover to ensure the world"

Mình mới viết được bài này mong mọi người góp ý cho mình những lỗi chưa được hoàn thiện ạ! Về mặt hình thức lẫn nội dung thì càng tốt <3 mình cảm ơn

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bphania said:

Maybe to state that for some individuals 2020 is an exceptional year, truly, we will invite another infection called Covid 19. Talking about the Covid plague, there are numerous results and advantages. In any case, sicknesses or elements that obliterate our every day lives will regularly have far more noteworthy outcomes. To begin with, it abandons incredibly weighty sequelae in all parts of human existence, for example, economy, schooling, society, culture, ... just as global relations. We can obviously see that nations in Europe are contaminated a great deal and a ton of them disdain Asian nations. Second, numerous organizations or little organizations fail. Numerous individuals lose their karma short-term, carrying with them the malicious sickness. Schools have to be shut for understudies to keep away from infection. We have known through the battles, as of now, Covid as a foe that the entire world should restrict for an enormous scope. It has been nearly 12 months since Covid began to spread however numerous nations have not recuperated at this point, luckily Vietnam has a decent system and the nation has gotten away from this ungraceful Covid. Concerning the advantages, we see every family has a ton of time to get together and get together. Every nation, however intensely influenced, is the energetic energy of the individuals. so join to confront comparative challenges this opportunity to devastate this interminable foe together. "If you don't mind wear a cover to ensure the world"

Mình mới viết được bài này mong mọi người góp ý cho mình những lỗi chưa được hoàn thiện ạ! Về mặt hình thức lẫn nội dung thì càng tốt <3 mình cảm ơn

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Trịnh Thị Mai Linh said:

Mình chỉ sửa mấy chỗ này hoy nha, cậu thử kham thảo nè!
Về hình thức: ( Theo ý kiến mỗi khi viết văn của mk hoy)
- Chia làm 3 phần * mở bài, thân bài, kết bài*
- Mục đích để mọi người khi nhìn vào sẽ thấy rõ ràng hơn á
Về nội dung:
-To begin with -> Firstly ( vì ở dưới cậu dùng Second á)
- We can obviously see that nations in Europe are contaminated a great deal and a ton of them disdain Asian nations.- mình thấy đoạn này chưa được rõ ràng lắm á, cậu có thể viết thêm một vài ý nữa để làm rõ hơn về vấn đề này nha.
Có gì cậu cứ hỏi lại mình nha

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