[Grade 8] Write a paragraph

Sư tử lạnh lùng · 4 Tháng một 2019

Write a short paragraph to describe your house.
Translate: Viết 1 đoạn văn miêu tả ngôi nhà của bạn.
Gợi ý: Bước 1: Nêu địa điểm
Bước 2: Nêu vẻ bề ngoài
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Mình chịu thôi, nên mới hỏi mọi người, mọi người làm ơn giúp em với!!!

Diệm Linh Cơ · 4 Tháng một 2019

My house is on Hon Chong Street, about 1 kilometer from Nha Trang center. My house is very small but it's very beautiful and convenient. There are five rooms in my house: a living room, a kitchen, a bathroom and two bedrooms. My bedroom is very nice. There are two desks, three chairs, three closets, some books, a bookshelf and a computer. The kitchen has a refrigerator, a stove and a sink. Next to the kitchen is the bathroom. It has a shower, a washing machine and a tub. I love my house very much.
Đây là bài mình làm,bạn tham khảo xem thử nhé.

Hiro Genius · 5 Tháng một 2019

buingocbao76@gmail.com said:
Write a short paragraph to describe your house.
Translate: Viết 1 đoạn văn miêu tả ngôi nhà của bạn.
Gợi ý: Bước 1: Nêu địa điểm
Bước 2: Nêu vẻ bề ngoài
..................
..................
Mình chịu thôi, nên mới hỏi mọi người, mọi người làm ơn giúp em với!!!

bài này mình DIM(Do it Myself )
My house is on Thang Long street.My house is very big with 6 rooms: a Beautiful living room,two bedroom,a kitchen,a dining room and a bathroom.I like my bedroom most.it has a small bed,a desk with an armchair.There is a beautiful garden outside the house is a big garden.It has many trees with flowers such as:rose.tulip,violet,...Me and my brother often play around here so that i love the our garden very much.That's why i love my house very much!!!

Hồ Bảo Trâm · 5 Tháng một 2019

Hiro Genius said:
bài này mình DIM(Do it Myself )
My house is on Thang Long street.My house is very big with 6 rooms: a Beautiful living room,two bedroom,a kitchen,a dining room and a bathroom.I like my bedroom most.it has a small bed,a desk with an armchair.There is a beautiful garden outside the house is a big garden.It has many trees with flowers such as:rose.tulip,violet,...Me and my brother often play around here so that i love the our garden very much.That's why i love my house very much!!!

Mk cs chút nhận xét về bài này của bn tí:
Câu này: There is a beautiful garden outside the house is a big garden
Như thế này thì không phải là một câu cs 2 tobe hay sao. Mk nghĩ nên thêm which/ that
-> There is a beautiful garden outside the house which / that is a big garden.
Me and my brother -> My brother and I
Có điều này nx là so that dùng để chỉ mục đích
so that + clause = to/ in order to / so as to + V_infi
Và dùng the thì thôi our nhé vì the là mạo từ xác định còn our là sở hữu nhé.
so that i love the our garden very much -> so I love the / our garden very much.

Khánh huyền NT · 6 Tháng một 2019

I live in a flat, with my partner and a friend from England. My flat is on the second floor.
2. Body: Then describe your house using the spatial approach:
When you go in, you can find a hall. On the right, there is a kitchen. Opposite the entrance door, there is a sitting room and on the left there is a corridor to the bedrooms and the bathroom.
The kitchen is small, but it’s OK for us. In the kitchen, there is a window. Its curtains are yellow. There is a cooker (UK) / a stove (US) and a washing machine. Opposite there is a fridge and a sink. In the middle, there is a white table and two white chairs. Oh, there are some cupboards, too! for pots and pans, dishes, and so on.
Next to the kitchen, there is a sitting-room and a dining-room. On the left, you can see the dining-room. There is a glass table and four black iron chairs. There is a piece of furniture with glasses and DVDs, and there are some pictures on the walls. On the right, you can find the sitting-room. It has a burgundy sofa and two green armchairs. Opposite the sofa is the TV set. I go to sleep in front of the TV after lunch! There are some plants and there is a big window. This room has a lot of light. I love it!
The first room is my office. There is no bed / There isn’t a bed. It has three bookcases and a lot of books. There is a desk and there is a personal computer on the desk. There is a printer, too. There is a CD player and a lot of music CDs. There are a lot of pictures -- family photos and photos with friends.
Next, on the left you can find P’s office. P is my partner. He is a teacher. He loves reading, so he has a lot of books. He loves playing the guitar, too – the Spanish guitar. There is also a computer.
The third room is our bedroom. There is a double bed, an in-built closet, a long mirror, and two bedside tables with small lamps. There are no pictures on the wall. It’s very simple.
Opposite this bedroom, there is a bathroom. It doesn’t have a window / It has no window and the walls are brown. I don’t like this. So I use orange towels! There is a toilet, a wash-basin, a bath tub and a mirror. It’s OK.
At the end of this corridor you can go upstairs. There is an attic. It’s very big and it has a lot of light. There are two single beds, for friends. There is a toilet, too. There is a computer and a music equipment. There are a lot of books and music CDs. Finally, there is a cupboard for the vacuum cleaner/hoover and for my painting equipment. I love painting!
3. Finish with some comment or evaluation:
Finally, my neighbors are OK. They sometimes make a lot of noise, but they also help us.
I love my house, but it isn’t mine! I’m renting it!

Hiro Genius · 6 Tháng một 2019

Hồ Bảo Trâm said:
Mk cs chút nhận xét về bài này của bn tí:
Câu này: There is a beautiful garden outside the house is a big garden
Như thế này thì không phải là một câu cs 2 tobe hay sao. Mk nghĩ nên thêm which/ that
-> There is a beautiful garden outside the house which / that is a big garden.
Me and my brother -> My brother and I
Có điều này nx là so that dùng để chỉ mục đích
so that + clause = to/ in order to / so as to + V_infi
Và dùng the thì thôi our nhé vì the là mạo từ xác định còn our là sở hữu nhé.
so that i love the our garden very much -> so I love the / our garden very much.

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