Ngoại ngữ Writing and Speaking-HSG

Hello, chào mọi người. Mình đã quay trở lại và đăng topic mới nè. mình xin nhắc lại những topic này là do mình tự làm hoặc sưu tầm được, ko hề chép mạng nha!!!
Mọi người tham khảo nha >:

DO YOU THINK WE VIOLENCE SHOWN IN FILMS AND ON TV INFLUENCES THE BEHAVIOR OF YOUNG PEOPLE?​

With the rapid development of science and technology, the television has becomes the part of our daily lives. People spend more time on watching film now than before. However, in my point of views, I believe that violence in our today society has increased due to TVs and Cinema.
And what are violence shown in films and on TV influences the behavior of young people? First of all, young people imitate what they see on TV because they think it’s cool and interesting actions. Because of this, young people’s behavior has changed they become annoyance with disgust with parents. Secondly, they find themselves in what they see on screen, they have models and follow them and increasingly learn more about violence. Then, the most serious problem that they copy actions they see on TV. Some individuals they actions like the characters on the films because they think the life is the virtual and when they die in the virtual world, they can come back to life so nowadays there are some cases of children die because of this problem. Next, children’s psychologies are still immature and unformed, they are unable to distinguish between right and wrong, as a result. It will be ok if they have a good parents can make them understand about what is the good or bad things about films. Finally, some kinds of programs have negative influence on adults as well.
And how to solve this problem, parents should spend more time taking care of their children and give them a disadvantages about violence to change children thinking about violence.
In conclusion, violence is a very serious problem with children nowadays so we need to tutorial in watching TVs to avoid movies with bad content.
New words:
violence: bạo lực /'vaiələns/
imitate: bắt chước, làm theo /imitate/
disgust: làm kinh tởm, làm phẫn nộ /dis'gʌst/
annoyance: (điều) khó chịu /ə'nɔiəns/

 

Hôm nay là mùng 1 Tết, thế nên mình đăng topic cho hợp xíu nhỉ ^^ Chúc mọi người năm mới vui vẻ >3

Festival​

In Vietnam, there are lots of festival such as: Mid - Autumn festival, boat racing festival, buffaloes fighting,...According to me, Tet is the festival I like best.
We know that, Tet is the biggest festival in Vietnam and many different countries like Korea, China,...But now, I am only talk about Tet in Vietnam.
Tet takes place from the 1th to the 3th of the first lunar month. In this time, the weather is so nice and warm which suitable for haning out. This festival is held around Vietnam with the crowded and busy atmosphere.
Before Tet, people often prepare a lot of things to welcom a new year. Most of families clean and decorate their houses by peach blossoms, apricot blossoms and many beautiful flowers. They also buy new clothes for their members family and raw materials to make banh chung, banh giay and five - fruit tray. That is the preparation and what do activities take place in Tet ?
Well, on the firsth day of the lunar year, all families in Vietnam will worship the ancestor to pray for a fortune year, have a reunion to talk about the last year and share the sadness, happiness with there family. Besides that, children is also recived lucky money from adult people such as their grandparents, parents, their aunt and ucle,..Old peole is wished to live longer,...On the secondth and the thirdth day, every family visit their relative’s house or go to the pagoda, the beach and mountains,...
To sum up, for me, Tet is not only a normal festival but also a happy time of every body because they can have a reunion or more things which connect with every members in family.

 

Sau mấy ngày nghỉ Tết thì tớ đã trở lại với một topic mới toanh rùi nè ^^ Năm mới vui vẻ nha!!!

DO YOU THINK MUSIC PLAY AN IMPORTANT ROLE IN PEOPLE’S LIFE?​

Today, the world is developing, people are usually busy , which lead to under a lot of pressure or in other words, that’s stressed. So how can we relax? I think it’s an easy question but difficult to answer. We have some choices like watching TV, do anything we like, go along the street,....For me, music or listening to music is the good way and plays an important role in our life.
Nowadays, we know that music is one of the popular entertainment for everyone. Some researchers say that listening to music has a lot of advantages. So what are they?
Let’s talk about the first, for the students, after having a pressure at school, we listen to music to relax. In this case, music is a best prescription for us because when we listen to music, all the tensions, stress,,, will be cleaned by a great melody.
Next, I and as well as everyone here have a habit that we often listen to music in moods. Sometimes, if someone listens to sad love music or a slow ballad, we can say that this person is having a bad mood. Of course, it’s only in some cases. Therefore, music also shows our good or bad mood.
Moreover, I think that listening to music is a good way to learn languages. The teenagers often listen to US - UK music, these songs not only relax but also are the tools of study vocabularies.
Some studies say that women who being pregnant with their son or daughter should listen to funny music because at this moment, fetus can hear and understand what the song about and forming the languages in their brainstorms.
As same as other people, I usually listen to music, moreover, my hobby is listening to music. And different from the teenagers, when I am sad, I will listen to K-pop music or another kinds of music but lively because I think lively melodies sastify my status, it also recovers from my energy to continue cope with challenges.
On the other hands, our country has a lot of beautiful arts, especially traditional music. Although the overseas music is popular in Vietnam, traditional music still develops with its way. Someone say that we should try to modernize traditional music. For me, this idea is not true but it’s also not false. We can administrate the sentences: Intergration without assimilation. Right, as I think, sometimes we should modernize traditional music but must keep their features.

 

Lại một topic nữa được hỗ trợ từ chị @The key of love nè, cảm ơn chị nhiều nha!!!

Should love when you are a student or not?​

A topic that has always been noticed by a lot of people: As a student still sitting in school, should there be male and female love? Why?

In today's post, I will comment on my opinion on this matter. In my opinion, depending on the person, there will be different thoughts. Some people will think so, but they also have to know the limits of how to behave. Because if 2 students love each other and see each other as motivation to try to study to be equal is very good. There are many proofs on the internet, many couples who are students in love still pass college but with extremely high scores, and are admired and respected by many people. They help each other in life and in school to grow together, a lot of people love from school to adulthood and then get married, so we should not keep thinking that love at school age will harmful...

But on the other hand, there are also many students who love and destroy their own future, not interested in studying but only about what the rest are doing, or where, with whom? Spending all day looking at the phone, waiting for text messages ... Because of that, the academic performance is reduced, so in this case there should be no lover while sitting in the school chair, it affects a lot. to the student's learning path.

Currently, I am a student so in my opinion that studying is still the most important thing, so take a lot of time for studying ... It is not late to grow up and love because at that time I have matured enough knowledge everything.

 

Sau mấy ngày không đăng bài thì hôm nay mình đã trở lại rồi nè^^ đây là topic của hôm nay!!!

Learning English:​

There is no doubt that English is the most popular language, and we use it to communicate with people from all over the world. So it is obvious that we – especially young people learn and be good at English. Unlike in the old days, we could only learn English through the radio books, television and in school. However, there are many more ways to learn English today, especially through the internet, smart phones and many English learning centers opened up.
In Viet Nam, learning English also starts at primary school or many parents let their children learn English from a young age. When we are fluent in English, we have a better chance of getting into a good position in industries that require staff to be fluent in the language such as aviation, travel, economics, computer,…
Moreover, English is my favorite subject and it is also the subject that I do well in, so my friends ask me about how to learn it properly. Many people will think that learning English is difficult, but what we need to do is get our own learning styles to find a suitable way to learn it effectively. With me that English is an international language. For me it is not only a communication tool, but it also opens new doors to the vast ocean. I think it helps me get closer to a variety of resources through books and materials I have read while studying.
Using the right vocabulary and sentence structure correctly requires a long process, but we can always invent new learning methods. I have discovered my own secret to learning it, and I have made tremendous progress since them. One of my hobbies is reading, and I choose to read English books to American history, culture, novels by great authors, and news in English, all of which helped me gain a lot of new words and general knowledge.
Instead of memorizing vocabulary in frustration, I listen to music, watch movies in English and try to translate the lyrics and subtitles. I also connect with a few international friends, and they are the best teacher in teaching me English. I can learn more slang, idioms, and things that ordinary teachers don’t teach their students. The difficulties in studying this subject and that is why I think each of us should be creative in learning English.

 

Lại đến với 1 topic mới nào!!! Đây là topic của ngày hôm nay, mọi người tham khảo:33

ENVIRONMENT​

Nowadays, our environment is getting polluted seriously. All of us have known that the changes from fresh to polluted of our environment have caused many terrible unusual problems around the world such as unidentified sickness, the atmosphere changed from low to high suddenly within even a day that make us uneasy and we also have four seasons a day: in the morning, it is spring, summer comes at noon, autumn arrives in the afternoon, winter is in the evening. Can our body be healthy in that situation?

Perhaps we usually watch the new on TV or listen to the radio and of course we have paid much attention to the information about the environment. Here are some things I myself have read from Viet Nam news.

In 2016, the Vietnamese people and the government suffered from the mass poisoning of fish off the coast of Viet Nam. In 2017, there were 16 storms. It is said that “After a storm comes a calm”. But now we have to know that: “After a storm comes an other storm”. Recently in the central of our country there was the 9th storm. After only a few days, there was a huge flood. Many houses were destroyed, vegetables and poultry were died. The people in our country have to get into difficulties.

For me, I think we should talk to do something in order give a hand to keep our environment clean, not to talk in other to talk. Actions speak louder than words. In conclusion, everyone should protect the environment cleaner.
New words:

• unidentified sickness: bệnh không xác định /ˌənīˈden(t)əˌfīd ˈsiknəs/
• destroy: phá hủy, hủy hoại /dəˈstroi/

 

Làm cái topic cuối rồi off nè, mọi người tham khảo nha!!!

DO YOU THINK MUSIC PLAY AN IMPORTANT ROLE IN PEOPLE’S LIFE?​

Today, the world is developing, people are usually busy , which lead to under a lot of pressure or in other words, that’s stressed. So how can we relax? I think it’s an easy question but difficult to answer. We have some choices like watching TV, do anything we like, go along the street,....For me, music or listening to music is the good way and plays an important role in our life.
Nowadays, we know that music is one of the popular entertainment for everyone. Some researchers say that listening to music has a lot of advantages. So what are they?
Let’s talk about the first, for the students, after having a pressure at school, we listen to music to relax. In this case, music is a best prescription for us because when we listen to music, all the tensions, stress,,, will be cleaned by a great melody.
Next, I and as well as everyone here have a habit that we often listen to music in moods. Sometimes, if someone listens to sad love music or a slow ballad, we can say that this person is having a bad mood. Of course, it’s only in some cases. Therefore, music also shows our good or bad mood.
Moreover, I think that listening to music is a good way to learn languages. The teenagers often listen to US - UK music, these songs not only relax but also are the tools of study vocabularies.
Some studies say that women who being pregnant with their son or daughter should listen to funny music because at this moment, fetus can hear and understand what the song about and forming the languages in their brainstorms.
As same as other people, I usually listen to music, moreover, my hobby is listening to music. And different from the teenagers, when I am sad, I will listen to K-pop music or another kinds of music but lively because I think lively melodies sastify my status, it also recovers from my energy to continue cope with challenges.
On the other hands, our country has a lot of beautiful arts, especially traditional music. Although the overseas music is popular in Vietnam, traditional music still develops with its way. Someone say that we should try to modernize traditional music. For me, this idea is not true but it’s also not false. We can administrate the sentences: Intergration without assimilation. Right, as I think, sometimes we should modernize traditional music but must keep their features.
New words:

• pressure: sức ép, áp lực /ˈpreSHər/
• researcher: nhà nghiên cứu /rəˈsərCHər/
• prescription: đơn thuốc /prəˈskripSH(ə)n/
• fetus: thai nhi /ˈfēdəs/
• tension: căng thẳng /ˈtenSHən/
• satisfy: thỏa mãn /ˈsadəsˌfī/
• modernize traditional music: hiện đại hóa âm nhạc truyền thống / ˈmädərˌnīz trəˈdiSH(ə)n(ə)l ˈmyo͞ozik /
• administrate: quản lý /ədˈminəˌstrāt/
• assimilation: đồng hóa /əˌsimiˈlāSH(ə)n/

 

Bài của mình hôm nay đây :3

People who have original ideas are of much greater value to society than those who are simply able to copy the ideas of others well. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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I certainly agree that people who come up with new ideas, in other words those who “invent” or “discover” things are terribly important to society as a whole. However, I also think there is a role in society for good imitators.

No one would deny that key individuals must be thanked for providing us with certain facilities that we use every day. Where, would we be, for example, without basic items such as the washing machine, the television and, more recently, the computer? These items are now used so regularly that we tend to take them for granted.

In fact, the society we live in today has become increasingly consumer-oriented, and while it may be possible to constantly update and improve consumer goods, not everyone where I live can afford the prices of these innovations. Furthermore not everyone lives in an area that has accessibility to the latest models on the market. For this reason, there is a value to be placed on being able to provide good copies of expensive items.

Having said that, certain innovations have a more serious impact on our lives than consumer goods and cannot easily be replicated. Vital medicines like penicillin and vaccines against dangerous diseases also exist because people made continual efforts to develop them. Scientific ideas such as these enable us to live longer and escape illness.

 

Mình có một số góp ý như này nha:
I certainly agree that people who come up with new ideas, in other words those who “invent” or “discover” things are terribly important to society as a whole. However, I also think there is a role in society for good imitators. No one would deny that key individuals must be thanked for providing us with certain facilities that we use every day. Where, would we be, for example, without basic items such as the washing machine, the television and, more recently, the computer? These items are now used so regularly that we tend to take them for granted. In fact, the society we live in today has become increasingly consumer-oriented, and while it may be possible to constantly update and improve consumer goods, not everyone where I live can afford the prices of these innovations. Furthermore not everyone lives in an area that has accessibility to the latest models on the market. For this reason, there is a value to be placed on being able to provide good copies of expensive items. Having said that, certain innovations have a more serious impact on our lives than consumer goods and cannot easily be replicated. Vital medicines like penicillin and vaccines against dangerous diseases also exist because people made continual efforts to develop them. Scientific ideas such as these enable us to live longer and escape illness.
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These items are now used so regularly that we tend to take them for granted.
=> These items are now using so regularly that we tend to take them for granted.
Not everyone có thể thay bằng no one cho ngắn gọn và hay hơn ạ.