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"Train is a form of transport which has many advantages". Do you agree with this opinion? Why?

Mình làm bài này, cô nhận xét là các mẫu câu còn đơn giản, một số câu còn nghĩ gì viết nấy (tiếng Việt nghĩ sao thì viết sang TA như vậy, ko theo cấu trúc), nhưng mình viết chưa nhiều, đọc cũng ít nên không có mấy kinh nghiệm, ko biết thế nào là một mẫu câu hay, thế nào là chưa hay. Mong các bạn đọc và chỉ dùm mình lỗi chính tả, cấu trúc sai và chỗ nào dùng cấu trúc hoặc từ bị dở và sửa lại giúp mình cho hay hơn, cảm ơn.


There are many reason for me to say that “rail travel is an advantageous form of transport”.

First, It takes you a moderate price for long trips. Of course, trains’ ticket is cheaper than planes’ or ships’. By costing cheap, railway become the wonderful way to go around and visit your country. Getting on a train isn’t a luxurious dream even though you are poor. Then, in special occasion, you can be together with your family who live far apart from you.

Second, travelling by train is fast and safe. Its speed can attain to hundreds kilometer an hour and just run independently on a rail so you could feel secure about the safety.

Finally, Rail travel has many comfortable things. There are both seat cabin and sleeper cabin – two choice for you. The trains are like the mobile restaurant or hotel with many service such as selling foods, drinks and even souvenirs, and there are restroom too. During the trips, you have TVs to relax. Unlike a car, train’s carbin is large and long so you are allowed to go around as doing the exercise. Especially, you will never got travel sick like carsick or seasick, the air in the cabin not very different from the fresh air outside.

For these information I give, I believe that you will thinking about one time exploring by the train. With me, travelling by train is always the tiptop mean of transport. How about you? Why don’t you vote for this wonderful transport?
 
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thuong0504

There are many reason for me to say that “rail travel is an advantageous form of transport”.

-reason phải ở dạng số nhiều "reasons"

First, It takes you a moderate price for long trips. Of course, trains’ ticket is cheaper than planes’ or ships’. By costing cheap, railway become the wonderful way to go around and visit your country. Getting on a train isn’t a luxurious dream even though you are poor. Then, in special occasion, you can be together with your family who live far apart from you.

Second, travelling by train is fast and safe. Its speed can attain to hundreds kilometer an hour and just run independently on a rail so you could feel secure about the safety.

Finally, Rail travel has many comfortable things. There are both seat cabin and sleeper cabin – two choice for you. The trains are like the mobile restaurant or hotel with many service such as selling foods, drinks and even souvenirs, and there are restroom too. During the trips, you have TVs to relax. Unlike a car, train’s carbin is large and long so you are allowed to go around as doing the exercise. Especially, you will never got travel sick like carsick or seasick, the air in the cabin not very different from the fresh air outside.

For these information I give, I believe that you will thinking about one time exploring by the train. With me, travelling by train is always the tiptop mean of transport. How about you? Why don’t you vote for this wonderful transport?
 
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nltrieuxuyen27@yahoo.com.vn

There are many reasons for me to say that “rail travel is an advantageous form of transport”.


First, It takes you a moderate price for long trips. Of course, trains’ ticket is cheaper than planes’ or ships’. By costing cheap, railway become the wonderful way to go around and visit your country. Getting on a train isn’t a luxurious dream even though you are poor. Then, in special occasion, you can be together with your family who live far apart from you.

Second, travelling by train is fast and safe. Its speed can attain to hundred kilometers an hour and just run independently on a rail so you could feel secure about the safety.

Finally, Rail travel has many comfortable things. There are both seat cabin and sleeper cabin – two choices for you. The trains are like the mobile restaurant or hotel with many services such as selling foods, drinks and even souvenirs, and there are restroom too. During the trips, you have TVs to relax. Unlike a car, train’s carbin is large and long so you are allowed to go around like doing the exercise. Especially, you will never got travel sick like carsick or seasick, the air in the cabin not very different from the fresh air outside.

For these information I give, I believe that you will think about one time exploring by the train. With me, travelling by train is always the tiptop mean of transport. How about you? Why don’t you vote for this wonderful transport?

những chỗ bôi đen mình vẫn chưa hiểu, nên sữa ntn thì tốt? những chỗ đã sửa thì hợp lý chưa? Thanks
 
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thuong0504

There are many reasons for me to say that “rail travel is an advantageous form of transport”.


First, It takes you a moderate price for long trips. Of course, trains’ ticket is cheaper than planes’ or ships’. By costing cheap, railway become the wonderful way to go around and visit your country. Getting on a train isn’t a luxurious dream even though you are poor. Then, in special occasion, you can be together with your family who live far apart from you.

Second, travelling by train is fast and safe. Its speed can attain to hundred kilometers an hour and just run independently on a rail so you could feel secure about the safety.

Finally, Rail travel has many comfortable things. There are both seat cabin and sleeper cabin – two choices for you. The trains are like the mobile restaurant or hotel with many services such as selling foods, drinks and even souvenirs, and there are restroom too. During the trips, you have TVs to relax. Unlike a car, train’s carbin is large and long so you are allowed to go around like doing the exercise. Especially, you will never got travel sick like carsick or seasick, the air in the cabin not very different from the fresh air outside.

For these information I give, I believe that you will think about one time exploring by the train. With me, travelling by train is always the tiptop mean of transport. How about you? Why don’t you vote for this wonderful transport?

những chỗ bôi đen mình vẫn chưa hiểu, nên sữa ntn thì tốt? những chỗ đã sửa thì hợp lý chưa? Thanks

ừ, theo mình thì đúng rồi đấy! Còn một số chổ nữa, sai theo kiểu " nghĩ sao viết vậy" mà cô bạn nói ý!

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