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Hi, I’m Rin. Now, I will tell you my perfect birthday party.
Well, my birthday is on July 18th. This year, it was organized in my living room. There were about twenty-five people coming to my party, including my friends, my relatives and some kids in the neighbourhood. My party was simple. It wasn’t decorated with balloons and ribbons. I only arranged candies on the table with the big birthday cake in the middle. To start the party, we sang a birthday song. After that, I blew the candles. Then, I cut the birthday cake and shared it to everyone. We ate cake, candies and played hide-and-seek. Everyone looked happy. At the end of the party, all of us took lots of photos to keep those sweet moments. I also received many gifts from the guests. When it was dark, I said goodbye to them. That was the most wonderful party I’ve had in my life. Thanks for listening.
Hi, I’m Rin. Now, I will tell you my perfect birthday party.
Well, my birthday is on July 18th. This year, it was organized in my living room. There were about twenty-five people coming to my party, including my friends, my relatives and some kids in the neighbourhood. My party was simple. It wasn’t decorated with balloons and ribbons. I only arranged candies on the table with the big birthday cake in the middle. To start the party, we sang a birthday song. After that, I blew the candles. Then, I cut the birthday cake and shared it to everyone. We ate cake, candies and played hide-and-seek. Everyone looked happy. At the end of the party, all of us took lots of photos to keep those sweet moments. I also received many gifts from the guests. When it was dark, I said goodbye to them. That was the most wonderful party I’ve had in my life. Thanks for listening.