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[phungnguyen2003]

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[minhloveftu]

Da Lat city is the provincial capital of Lam Dong Province, is located on the Lam Vien Plateau, Central Highlands, Vietnam. Since ancient times, this land which is the area of residence of the residents Lach, Chil and the Sre ethnic Coho. Late 19th century, when looking for a place to build a resort station for the French in Indochina, Governor Paul Doumer decided Lam Vien Plateau at the request of the doctor Alexandre Yersin, who explore arrived here in 1893. In the first half of the 20th century, from a deserted place, the French plan and build a beautiful city with villas, offices, hotels and schools, a tourist and educational center intercourse of Indochina. Through periods of ups and downs of the two wars with the difficult period of the 1970-1980 decade, Dalat is today a city of 211 thousand people, grade I under provincial urban center role politics, economy and culture of the province of Lam Dong.
With an elevation of 1500 meters above the sea and the mountains and surrounding forest flora populations, Dalat inherited a temperate mountain climate with cool year round. History of more than a century the city also left a valuable architectural heritage, is like a museum of 20th century European architecture. Natural resources and abundant human help Dalat became one of the famous tourist spots of Vietnam, each year attracts millions of tourists to visit and vacation. Da Lat is also a center of education and scientific research, a city of religious diversity in the presence of hundreds of temples, churches, monasteries ... a special rich agricultural area with vegetables and flowers. Thanks to the mild climate, beautiful natural scenery and rich architectural heritage, Da Lat is also known by many other names such as "foggy city", "city of", "The city of flowers "," Land of Sakura "or" Little Paris ".
Although it is a famous tourist city, but Da Lat city is a lack of cultural venues and diverse entertainment. Massive urbanization process that today's cities suffer many consequences. Many pine forests disappearing, replaced by the construction or agricultural areas. Do not be well protected, many of the city's sights and monuments fell into ruins, ruins. Unplanned growth of the recent decades that urban architecture Dalat suffered deformation and become trash bin. In the city, many villas with many of the buildings subject to the ravages of time without conservation, preservation.

 

[Tuyên Nghi]

Da Lat city is the provincial capital of Lam Dong Province, is located on the Lam Vien Plateau, Central Highlands, Vietnam. Since ancient times, this land which is the area of residence of the residents Lach, Chil and the Sre ethnic Coho. Late 19th century, when looking for a place to build a resort station for the French in Indochina, Governor Paul Doumer decided Lam Vien Plateau at the request of the doctor Alexandre Yersin, who explore arrived here in 1893. In the first half of the 20th century, from a deserted place, the French plan and build a beautiful city with villas, offices, hotels and schools, a tourist and educational center intercourse of Indochina. Through periods of ups and downs of the two wars with the difficult period of the 1970-1980 decade, Dalat is today a city of 211 thousand people, grade I under provincial urban center role politics, economy and culture of the province of Lam Dong.
With an elevation of 1500 meters above the sea and the mountains and surrounding forest flora populations, Dalat inherited a temperate mountain climate with cool year round. History of more than a century the city also left a valuable architectural heritage, is like a museum of 20th century European architecture. Natural resources and abundant human help Dalat became one of the famous tourist spots of Vietnam, each year attracts millions of tourists to visit and vacation. Da Lat is also a center of education and scientific research, a city of religious diversity in the presence of hundreds of temples, churches, monasteries ... a special rich agricultural area with vegetables and flowers. Thanks to the mild climate, beautiful natural scenery and rich architectural heritage, Da Lat is also known by many other names such as "foggy city", "city of", "The city of flowers "," Land of Sakura "or" Little Paris ".
Although it is a famous tourist city, but Da Lat city is a lack of cultural venues and diverse entertainment. Massive urbanization process that today's cities suffer many consequences. Many pine forests disappearing, replaced by the construction or agricultural areas. Do not be well protected, many of the city's sights and monuments fell into ruins, ruins. Unplanned growth of the recent decades that urban architecture Dalat suffered deformation and become trash bin. In the city, many villas with many of the buildings subject to the ravages of time without conservation, preservation.

Chủ đề là viết về những địa điểm nổi tiếng ở Đà Lạt, giá vé,... Bạn đi copy rồi dán lại cái Wiki về Đà Lạt làm gì?

As you know, Viet Nam is a great country with a lot of landscape such as Imperial City Hue, Da Nang City with a lot of funny entertainment, Nha Trang with many beautiful beaches. But among these landscape, Da Lat City is the most joyful place for us to have a vacation with families or friends.
Da Lat is famous for many colourful and different flowers. There are a lot of wonderful areas to explore and visit. If we go to Da Lat, the Valley of Love is one of the most well-known place we have to visit. This valley has many colourful flowers and all of them are decorated very beautifully. This is the best place for you to have a pinic and you can also ride horses, duck boats, have an excursion by Jeep cars and so on. Its price is very suitable and it's isn't too expensive. It only cost 100.000 VNĐ for the adults who is taller than 1m2 and 50.000 VNĐ for the children. And if you love exploring the history of Da Lat - Lam Dong, you should visit Lam Dong Museum. The museum of Lam Dong province is home to many traditional and historical local artifacts, especially those exhibiting cultural traditions of Lam Dong land. Not only stop at a museum, with the policy of diversifying activities to attract visitors and tourism in Dalat, it will gradually shape as a center of cultural activities. The ticket's price of this museum is 100.000 VNĐ for one person. Da Lat also has many lakes such as Xuan Huong Lake, Tuyen Lam Lake, Lament Lake, etc,... for you to visit. Each lake has their own beauty and you won't be disappointed when you come here. These are some famous place in Da Lat. I wish you would visit Da Lat City and had a good time here.

 

[Huyền Sheila]

Chủ đề là viết về những địa điểm nổi tiếng ở Đà Lạt, giá vé,... Bạn đi copy rồi dán lại cái Wiki về Đà Lạt làm gì?

As you know, Viet Nam is a great country with a lot of landscape such as Imperial City Hue, Da Nang City with a lot of funny entertainment, Nha Trang with many beautiful beaches. But among these landscape, Da Lat City is the most joyful place for us to have a vacation with families or friends.
Da Lat is famous for many colourful and different flowers. There are a lot of wonderful areas to explore and visit. If we go to Da Lat, the Valley of Love is one of the most well-known place we have to visit. This valley has many colourful flowers and all of them are decorated very beautifully. This is the best place for you to have a pinic and you can also ride horses, duck boats, have an excursion by Jeep cars and so on. Its price is very suitable and it's isn't too expensive. It only cost 100.000 VNĐ for the adults who is taller than 1m2 and 50.000 VNĐ for the children. And if you love exploring the history of Da Lat - Lam Dong, you should visit Lam Dong Museum. The museum of Lam Dong province is home to many traditional and historical local artifacts, especially those exhibiting cultural traditions of Lam Dong land. Not only stop at a museum, with the policy of diversifying activities to attract visitors and tourism in Dalat, it will gradually shape as a center of cultural activities. The ticket's price of this museum is 100.000 VNĐ for one person. Da Lat also has many lakes such as Xuan Huong Lake, Tuyen Lam Lake, Lament Lake, etc,... for you to visit. Each lake has their own beauty and you won't be disappointed when you come here. These are some famous place in Da Lat. I wish you would visit Da Lat City and had a good time here.

As you know, Viet Nam is a great country with a lot of landscape such as Imperial City Hue, Da Nang City with a lot of funny entertainment, Nha Trang with many beautiful beaches. But among these landscape, Da Lat City is the most joyful place for us to have a vacation with families or friends.
Da Lat is famous for many colourful and different flowers. There are a lot of wonderful areas to explore and visit. If we go to Da Lat, the Valley of Love is one of the most well-known place we have to visit. This valley has many colourful flowers and all of them are decorated very beautifully. This is the best place for you to have a picnic and you can also ride horses, duck boats, have an excursion by Jeep cars and so on. Its price is very suitable and it's isn't too expensive. It only costs 100.000 VNĐ for the adults who is taller than 1m2 and 50.000 VNĐ for the children. And if you love exploring the history of Da Lat - Lam Dong, you should visit Lam Dong Museum. The museum of Lam Dong province is home to many traditional and historical local artifacts, especially those exhibiting cultural traditions of Lam Dong land. Not only stop at a museum, with the policy of diversifying activities to attract visitors and tourism in Dalat, it will gradually shape as a center of cultural activities. The ticket's price of this museum is 100.000 VNĐ for one person. Da Lat also has many lakes such as Xuan Huong Lake, Tuyen Lam Lake, Lament Lake, etc,... for you to visit. Each lake has their own beauty and you won't be disappointed when you come here. These are some famous places in Da Lat. I wish you would visit Da Lat City and have a good time here.

 

[tuananh982]

Nối tiếp bài sửa trên:
Trong bài này vẫn còn sai rất nhiều lỗi số ít số nhiều và chia động từ, đáng chú ý nhất là "funny entertainment"
Thứ nhất dùng funny trong trường hợp này không phù hợp, funny là "buồn cười", không hề mang nghĩa theo hướng "vui chơi" ở đây có thể thay thế bằng enjoyable, đã vậy thay luôn cả cụm thành enjoyable activities sẽ phù hợp.
Một cái nữa là not only, but (also) vẫn quên mất but (also).
Đoạn cuối nếu đã dùng etc. thì "..." là thừa.
Một số đoạn chưa thật phù hợp:

Its price is very suitable and it's isn't too expensive.

Its price is affordable and suitable for everyone because ... (vế sau)

I wish you would visit Da Lat City and have a good time here.

Đoạn này không tự nhiên, cân nhắc sửa đổi

 

[Huyền Sheila]

Đoạn này không tự nhiên, cân nhắc sửa đổi

Câu cuối đổi thế này được không?
I would highly recommend you to visit Dalat. Maybe you will come home tired but you won't regret it.

 

[Tzuyu-chan]

There are several heritage and splendid sights in Vietnam. Especially, Da Nang is one of the most popular place for both Vietnamese and foreign tourist. Da Nang includes sea, Son Tra island, mountain and beautiful landscape. There are a lot of interesting places such as: Asia entertainment park, Ba Na hill, Hoi An ancient town, My Khe beach, museum of art as well as famous bridges. The city is well known for its fresh atmosphere, friendly people and security. The weather is glorious all the year and it brings this city many delicacies from sea and perfect living condition for people, specifically the elder. Visiting Da Nang, I am really impressed by Ba Na hill containing longest cable car from land to the top of the mountain. It is an unforgettable experience for visitors to observe breathtaking sight and picturesque scene. Beside, the beaches have long golden sand, deep blue sea in addition huge bunches of fresh coconut. Tourist has a chance to relax, enjoy the peace and nature, play aquatic sport. Moreover, the city has many big bridges like: Dragon bridge, Quay bridge and a large outdoor entertainment named Asia park. Additionally, there are a lot of delicious typical dishes such as: Quang noodle, xeo cake, pork pan-cake and others. Da Nang is preserved for its natural beauty; therefore, there is an increasing number of tourists come here. Consequently, it leads to polluted environment, natural damage and other social problem. However, the security of the city is good that there is no street robbery. Hence, Da Nang is voted to be one of the most worth-living cities in Vietnam. In the future, I hope Da Nang will develop and become more popular over the world.

Bản dịch
Có rất nhiều danh lam và cảnh đẹp ở VN. Đặc biệt, ĐN là một trong những thành phố nổi tiếng đối với người Việt lẫn người nước ngoài. ĐN bao gồm biển, bán đảo Sơn Trà, núi và nhiều cảnh đẹp. Có nhiều nơi thăm quan thú vị như: Công viên giải trí Châu Á, núi Bà Nà, phố cổ Hội An, biển Mỹ Khê, bảo tàn mỹ thuật cũng như các cây cầu nổi tiếng. Thành phố được biết đến với không khí trong lành, con người than thiện và an ninh chặt chẽ. Thời tiết ổn định trong cả năm và nó mang đến cho thành phố rất nhiều đặc sản từ biển và điều kiện sống lý tưởng cho mọi người, đặc biệt là ngừoi già. Du lịch ĐN, tôi thật sự bị thu hút bởi Bà Nà bao gồm cáp treo dài nhất từ đất liền tới đỉnh núi. Đó là trải nghiệm tuyệt vời với du khách để nhìn xuống cảnh ngộp thở và cảnh đẹp như tranh. Ngoài ra, biển có bãi cát vàng, nước trong xanh và những hang dừa lớn. Khách du lịch có cơ hội để giải lao, tận hưởng sự yên bình và thiện nhiên, chơi trò chơi dưới nước. Hơn nữa, Thành phố này còn có những cây cầu lớn như: cầu Rồng, cầu Quay và một khu vui chơi giải trí lớn. Ngoài ra, có rất nhiều món ngon như mì quảng, bánh xèo, bánh tráng thịt heo và nhiều món ngon khác. Đà Nẵng được biết đến với vẻ đẹp tự nhiên, thế nên ngày càng nhiều khách du lịch đến đây thăm quan. Điều này dẫn tới ô nhiễm môi trường, huỷ hại tự nhiên và các vấn đề xã hội khác. Tuy nhiên, an ninh của thành phố rất tốt mà không có một vụ trộm cắp nào. Bởi thế Đà Nẵng được bình chọn là một trong những thành phố đáng sống nhất VN. Trong tương lai, tôi mong Đà Nẵng sẽ phát triển và trở nên nổi tiếng toàn thế giới.
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