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thuong0504

As a student, everyone also likes getting good mark. Why? Because they make them happy and prominent...But for someone, in some case, getting good mark isn't only useful but also harmful.
For some students, good mark can make them proud of theirselves and then, they will try their best to continue to get great mark,...when they have good mark, they feel happy, and this is the reason why they are learning hard...
But for somebody, when they get good mark, they become foppish and then, their studying will become more and more worse.
Thus, i think that getting good mark can encourage someone who really know what is the meaning of great mark...
P.s: gấp quá làm vậy thôi nhé
 
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freakie_fuckie

As a student, everyone also likes getting good mark. Why? Because they make them happy and prominent...But for someone, in some case, getting good mark isn't only useful but also harmful.
For some students, good mark can make them proud of theirselves and then, they will try their best to continue to get great mark,...when they have good mark, they feel happy, and this is the reason why they are learning hard...
But for somebody, when they get good mark, they become foppish and then, their studying will become more and more worse.
Thus, i think that getting good mark can encourage someone who really know what is the meaning of great mark...
P.s: gấp quá làm vậy thôi nhé

Your written work is neither a short essay nor a paragraph, but a combination of jumble and inadequately-developed ideas. The arguments you cite do not response the given task. The rubric asks you whether or not you agree with the statement, not asks you for the reasons why some people like good mark. Besides, your essay also suffered from alot of expressional, grammatical and logical mistakes:

As a student, everyone also likes getting good mark => omit also
make them happy and prominent => Good attempt of using academic word, but in this case, it's wrong, "prominent" only use for celebrities or influential people.

getting good mark isn't only useful but also harmful => Logic mistake.


Generally, I think there is a necessity that you rewrite this.

Have a nice day,
 
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thuong0504

Your written work is neither a short essay nor a paragraph, but a combination of jumble and inadequately-developed ideas. The arguments you cite do not response the given task. The rubric asks you whether or not you agree with the statement, not asks you for the reasons why some people like good mark. Besides, your essay also suffered from alot of expressional, grammatical and logical mistakes:

As a student, everyone also likes getting good mark => omit also
make them happy and prominent => Good attempt of using academic word, but in this case, it's wrong, "prominent" only use for celebrities or influential people.

getting good mark isn't only useful but also harmful => Logic mistake.


Generally, I think there is a necessity that you rewrite this.

Have a nice day,
oh.....thank you so much for helping me find out my mistakes and express your ideas, thank so much! I will remember not to do them again
P.s: cái câu em nói trên có sai gì không biết, hì hì :D
 
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linhbebe99

đươc không

Các lớp khuyến khích học sinh học(Grades encourage to learn)

Nowadays probably great majority of schools use grades to track students’ performance, give them feedback and assure they meet the requirements to graduate. However, do the grades encourage students to learn? In my opinion they do since they encourage competition between students, assure similar level of knowledge among the graduates of schools and in many cases are clear indicators to job market.



Làm thế nào lớp là quan trọng đối với sinh viên?(How grades are important for student?)

I agree with the statement that students will be induced to study by grades in their schools . Almost academic programs must be have indicators to show a potential of students in each class and grades are usually use to tell that you pass or not. In addition, the total grades or GPAX can be used to submit to works or higher educations, especially in the high competing societies, so a lot of students have to interest when they learn.


cách tốt nhất để khuyến khích học sinh học(the best way of encouraging students to study)
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When it comes to this topic, there can be hectic debate since some people are in favor of grade system and they think that it stimulates students to study hard. According to their point of view, students can learn their weak points thanks to grades and also they enhance their self-courage by taking high marks. What is more, they think that students get bright career in line with their grades and they are chosen among many of their counterparts without any problems. However, others are in support of opposite opinion because they deem that grades dissuade students to learn overall knowledge. Furthermore, they are not evaluated in proportional with their endeavour and effort. That is why, some students lose their courage and become less volunteer to study and so forth. I am more tended to choose the former thought. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
 
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