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[ronaldover7]

Today,pollution is really a serious problem for the governments all over the world.It usually starts from factories,disasters,and especially citizens'awareness.Enviroment includes water , air, grass,....so that polluted air is really dangerous.Air is the first neccessity because we can't breath without it,water is also important because it protect us from disease and provide us with fish,seafood.To minimize the pollution,we have to allow some basical rules:
1.Teach the students and children how important the inviroment is.
2.Stop factories which pollute the air, water with poisonous liqid or gas
3.Plant more trees to get more oxigen for our life,also protect the village or tower from flood
4.Organize some club or competition to increase in citizen'awareness
5.Recycle and reuse materials with can be used at least twice
6.Do not waste the water in harmful things
P/s mình tự làm nên có sai sót nào bạn góp ý​

 

[freakie_fuckie]

Today,pollution is really (omit) a serious problem for the governments all over the world.It usually starts from factories,disasters,and especially citizens'awareness [1].Enviroment includes water , air, grass,....so that polluted air is really dangerous.Air is the first neccessity because we can not breath without it,water is also important because it protects us from diseases and provides us with fish and seafood.To minimize the pollution,we have to allow the following measures:
1.Teach the (unnecessary article) students and children how important the enviroment is.
2.Stop factories which contaminate the air and water with poisonousu liqid or gas.
3.Plant more trees to get more oxygen for our life and to protect the village or tower from floods.
4.Organize some clubsor competitions to increase in => (omit) citizen'awareness of the importance of curbing enviromental pollution
5.Recycle and reuse materials whichcan be used at least twice.
6.Do not waste the water in harmful things (I do not really get what you mean by this measure


[1] This sentence is not clear with some parts of it being quite awkward and "wishy washy". Step back and try to read that sentence again, you will see alot of funny expressional mistakes. For example, you can not say "environmental pollution starts from citizen awareness" as "citizen awareness" is not a cause leading to pollution. The lack of such thing does.

A better alternative would be: It is caused by toxic chemicals from factories , natural disasters and especially by the lack of citizen awareness of environmental issues/ the importance of protecting the environment.

I recommend you to check your spelling and grammar as well since there are a lot of typos, and mistakes related to the use of articles.

Have a nice day,