Ielts writing task 2

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Art is considered as an important part of a society as well as an expression of its culture.Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?
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Art is considered as an important part of a society as well as an expression of its culture.Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?
@Hắc Trần Tuyết Nhi
@landghost
@Ngố Ngây Ngô
Câu này có 2 câu hỏi, mà vì đề không đề cập phải viết bài văn hay đoạn văn nên mình sẽ viết như sau:
Introduction: Giới thiệu chung đề bài
- Since humanity, art has always been used by humans to express their thoughts and feelings to others.
- There are many famous artists around the world, whose work achieves universal fame. On taking a closer look at their work, one can predict how society was then and what the artists were thinking about the community they are living in.
- Therefore, art plays an important part in the development of our society. The contribution of art to our community is enormous.
- Hence, I believe art should be taught to children so they can express themselves without hassle.
Idea #1: Art should be taught to children.
- As mentioned above, art is a useful tool for children to freely tell others about their thoughts.
+ Sometimes, words can't fully describe a whole problem they've been through. Some children are even too afraid to talk.
+ Drawing a picture describing their problems has been an effective method in parenting.
- In addition, art encourages creativity in children. They can draw whatever they want, and improve their creativity in the process.
- Drawing helps children relax.
+ When we draw something, we put our minds into it and eventually feel better.
+ Art is also used in treating children with mental problems. Art therapy is a prime example of this.
- However, we should note that teaching art to children doesn't mean that children will be good at drawing. It's more of their experience.
Idea #2: Art is good, but shouldn't be forced to concentrate on.
- Despite the benefits of introducing art to children, we shouldn't encourage children to concentrate on only art.
- We should bear in mind that every student is unique. One child may excel in one aspect, but surely another will be better at a different aspect.
- Forcing every student to focus on subjects they aren't interested in may bring about negative effects. They will grow up not knowing what to do with what they have learned.
- It's advisable to find and sort out students with their respective talents and concentrate on developing their talents.
Conclusion:
- The benefits of art are undeniable.
- It's recommended that children should be encouraged to learn Art.
- However, not every child is good at art. They should pursue their dreams and continue improving their talents.
 
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