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Đoạn 1:
As we know, living in a city has a number of drawbacks. firstly, there is the problem of traffic jams and traffic accidents because of the increase in popularity. secondly, the cost of living in a city is high. everything is expensive. it makes the life of many poor people more difficult. thirdly, the factories and vehicles produce smoke and exhaust so the air is very polluted. in conclusion, these factors contribute to making city life more difficult for its residents
doan 2:
Ha long Bay is one of the natural wonders of VN. it is situated in the northeast region of VN. I want to choose this place for my visit because it is a magical place. HLB was recognised by UNESCO. It has rich history and picturesque setting, HLB looks like a work of art. it has 1969 islands and many wonderful caverns such as Thien cung, dau go,.. i feel very happy when i visit hlb
Đoạn 1:
As we know, living in a city has a number of drawbacks. firstly, there is the problem of traffic jams and traffic accidents because of the increase in popularity. secondly, the cost of living in a city is high. everything is expensive. it makes the life of many poor people more difficult. thirdly, the factories and vehicles produce smoke and exhaust so the air is very polluted. in conclusion, these factors contribute to making city life more difficult for its residents
doan 2:
Ha long Bay is one of the natural wonders of VN. it is situated in the northeast region of VN. I want to choose this place for my visit because it is a magical place. HLB was recognised by UNESCO. It has rich history and picturesque setting, HLB looks like a work of art. it has 1969 islands and many wonderful caverns such as Thien cung, dau go,.. i feel very happy when i visit hlb
