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linhbebe99

my wisdom here ! ( Or is the area of tiger striped coat , missing teeth on the buffalo )

my wisdom here !

( Or is the area of tiger striped coat , missing teeth on the buffalo )




A tiger comes out from the woods , he saw a farmer and a buffalo farm is plowed under . Buffalo painstakingly go step by step , a long long time to whip ass whipped . Tiger was surprised too . By noon , open plow , near Buffalo Tiger went back to ask :

- Hey, you look so healthy , why did you let the beat so miserable ?

Buffalo Tiger replied softly in my ear :

- He is small , but people have wisdom , sir !

Tiger does not understand , asked curiously :

- What is wisdom ? How does it work ?

Buffaloes do not know how to explain , through tangerines had answered :

- Wisdom is wisdom , but there is something more ? Want to know the person to ask !

Tiger walked back to the farmer and asked :

- Where is your wisdom , show me a bit to get it?

British farmer thought for a moment and then said :

- Words of wisdom for me at home . For me to get to see him . Do you need , I 'll give you a few .

Tiger heard , so happy .

He attempted to farmers , remembered to do what Jacob said :

- But where I come from , he ate buffalo miss me?

Tigers are not known wondering how to answer the farmer said to him :

- Or do I take the trouble to temporarily forced into this tree for my peace of mind .

Tiger's consent , the farmer went to take the tiger rope tied tightly to a tree . Done he took straw fluid surrounding Tiger on fire and shouted :

- The Wisdom of us here ! My words of wisdom here !

So enjoy the Buffalo show , beef roll out the laughs , unfortunately maxilla and the stone , the teeth do not break .

But after fighting off the ropes , the new Tigers up three feet four legs ran into the woods last dared not look back .

Since then , the tiger was born on his long and have black stripes , which are remnants of the burn , and the buffalo does not have the teeth in the upper jaw .
MÌK NGHĨ LÀ NHƯ VẬY!

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hocmai.tienganh

my wisdom here !

( Or is the area of tiger striped coat , missing teeth on the buffalo )




A tiger comes out from the woods , he saw a farmer and a buffalo farm is plowed under . Buffalo painstakingly go step by step , a long long time to whip ass whipped . Tiger was surprised too . By noon , open plow , near Buffalo Tiger went back to ask :

- Hey, you look so healthy , why did you let the beat so miserable ?

Buffalo Tiger replied softly in my ear :

- He is small , but people have wisdom , sir !

Tiger does not understand , asked curiously :

- What is wisdom ? How does it work ?

Buffaloes do not know how to explain , through tangerines had answered :

- Wisdom is wisdom , but there is something more ? Want to know the person to ask !

Tiger walked back to the farmer and asked :

- Where is your wisdom , show me a bit to get it?

British farmer thought for a moment and then said :

- Words of wisdom for me at home . For me to get to see him . Do you need , I 'll give you a few .

Tiger heard , so happy .

He attempted to farmers , remembered to do what Jacob said :

- But where I come from , he ate buffalo miss me?

Tigers are not known wondering how to answer the farmer said to him :

- Or do I take the trouble to temporarily forced into this tree for my peace of mind .

Tiger's consent , the farmer went to take the tiger rope tied tightly to a tree . Done he took straw fluid surrounding Tiger on fire and shouted :

- The Wisdom of us here ! My words of wisdom here !

So enjoy the Buffalo show , beef roll out the laughs , unfortunately maxilla and the stone , the teeth do not break .

But after fighting off the ropes , the new Tigers up three feet four legs ran into the woods last dared not look back .

Since then , the tiger was born on his long and have black stripes , which are remnants of the burn , and the buffalo does not have the teeth in the upper jaw .
MÌK NGHĨ LÀ NHƯ VẬY!

Chú ý: Không dùng quá 3 icon

Cảm ơn về sự giúp đỡ của Linhbebe! :)
Tuy nhiên, Em cần chú ý hơn đến cách sử dụng và trật từ từ trong câu, cũng như thì của động từ. Nếu đã dùng thì quá khứ đơn để kế chuyên (và nên dùng thì này) thì từ đầu đến cuối các câu kể nên thống nhất một thì quá khứ đơn thôi. Trong 4 câu đầu đã thấy sự không thống nhất về thì, chưa kể đến việc "quên" không chia động từ ở ngôi thứ 3 số ít...

Thiết nghĩ, các T-Mod và Mod ngoài việc nhắc nhở về nội qui, qui định, hạn chế icon (thực sự là chị vẫn chưa hiểu lắm việc hạn chế icon để làm gì???)... thì cũng cần sửa bài cho các bạn. Nếu năng lực bản thân có hạn, chưa hẳn cao thì có thể search các vấn đề và kiến thức liên quan để đưa ra được câu trả lời xác đáng nhất.

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