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Hello Chris,

How are you? I hope everything is going well. Thank you for your last letter. I am excited to come and stay with you for the weekend. It's gonna so much fun to go to a Science festival. We can improve our knowledge about Science and explore more about the world.

In answer to your first question, 'Can animals speak?' is a good idea because I love animals and I want to discover about the animal world. More than that, the communication of animals is so attractive attention to me.

Keeping up with your next question, I want to ask you that do we need to buy tickets before going to the festival? Is the festival sell your hometown specialties? Because I want to taste and enjoy food in your hometown

Finally, I cannot stay longer with you because I have a final exam in school. I am so much sorry about that.
To sum up I look forward to seeing you this weekend.

Best regards,
Chloe.
 
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Hello Chris,

How are you? I hope everything is going well. Thank you for your last letter. I am excited to come and stay with you for the weekend. It's gonna so much fun to go to a Science festival. We can improve our knowledge about Science and explore more about the world.

In answer to your first question, 'Can animals speak?' is a good idea => for me, I prefer "Can animals talk?" to "The power of the sun" because I love animals and I want to discover about the animal world. More than that, the communication of animals is so attractive attention to me.Are you curious about that?

Keeping up with your next question, I want to ask you that do we need to buy tickets before going to the festival? Is the festival sell your hometown specialties ? Because I want to taste and enjoy food in your hometown.And does the festival have a book about the festival information and science content it introduces? Because I want to understand some scientific knowledge.

Finally I really want to see all the things you want to show me but I cannot stay longer with you because I have a final exam in school.As you know, the final exam is very important. I am so much sorry about that.
To sum up I look forward to seeing you this weekend.

Best regards,
Chloe.
Một số ý kiến của em ,chị tham khảo ạ !
Có sai sót mong giúp đỡ ạ !
 
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