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Viết đoạn văn bằng Tiếng Anh nói về Tết

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  1. catherinee

    catherinee Guest

    "Điểm danh ngay - Nhận quà liền tay" chào đón HMforum quay trở lại


    Đề bài: viết đoạn văn nói về tết năm ngoái của bạn

    Mình viết đc 1 ít mọi ng xem , rồi sửa giúp mình nha
    mình ngu nhất cái này. Mà tiếng việt thì nhiều mà tiếng anh thì ngu k chịu đc:
    CÓ gì mọi ng bổ sung cho mình nha. Cho cả phần nội dung nữa.


    Everyyear there r many special occasions in VN, but TET holiday is considered the most significant event to vietnamese. In that time, all vietnamese family members try to come back their homes and get togheter.Last tet holiday, i also had a good time with my family.to prepare for tet, i n' my sister bought many things such as: new clothes, foods, fruits... We also bought much paints to repair my house. THe kumquat tree and peach flower are the most important things that can't lack in my family. after cleaning the house, my parents taught to make banh chung .it seemed so hard to me, but ...................

    Mới viết đến đó, mình đoán sai nhiều lắm, mà nội dung cũng lửng củng, mọi ng xem rùi viết vài câu cho đỡ nhàm chút :D , Còn phần đi chùa, chúc tết, ăn cơm nhưng chả nghĩ ra :|
     
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  2. ohna

    ohna Guest


    Everyyear => every year đẹp hơn ík! "Everyyear there r many special" cho hỏi r là gì? togheter=> together. "i n' my sister" ???...
    Vietnam has an extremely important holiday for people across the country! It is a day of Chinese New Year. People share together, gather together, give each other gifts, adults give children lucky money how brilliant each other good luck and best wishes for the year. Tet is a traditional holiday of our country Vietnam, which saw the light, cake represents the earth and the light represents the sun-shoes. All people are house cleaning, wipe the scanner to pick up the new spring home, no money like water, like turtles.
    hjhj tuj vik thế ik! hem bik dc hok! choa bình luận nghen! tks
     
  3. nhapanh

    nhapanh Guest


    Ngoài một số lỗi chính tả (Có thể do bạn gõ sai) thì mình comment cho bạn 1 số điều sau:
    - Những danh từ riêng bạn nhớ viết hoa chữ đầu: Vietnamese, Tet holiday
    - Bạn cũng không nên viết tắt trong bài. Chú ý, vân vân thì dùng ,etc. chứ không dùng dấu ...
    - Về ý tưởng, bài của bạn cũng khá ổn rồi ấy.
    - Ngữ pháp:
    1. bought much paints to repair my house --> bought many paintings to decorate my house. (paintings đếm được dùng many chứ không dùng much. repair :sửa)
    2. ........ that can't lack in my family--> that we can't lack in my family.
    3. my parents taught to make banh chung--> my parents taught me and my sister to make chung cake.

    - Đoạn đầu (Introduction) bạn viết thế là ok rồi, các đoạn sau bạn nên có dàn ý rõ ràng, rồi viết theo dàn ý là được. Văn miêu tả thường không quá khó đâu.
    Chúc bạn thành công.
     
  4. smily_244

    smily_244 Guest


    Đề bài: viết đoạn văn nói về tết năm ngoái của bạn


    Everyyear there are many special occasions in VN, but TET holiday is considered the most significant event to vietnamese. In that time, all vietnamese family members try to come back their homes and get togheter( get together cái j? chỗ này thiếu rùi bạn).Last tet holiday, i also had a good time with my family.to prepare for tet, i and my sister bought many things such as: new clothes, foods, fruits... We also bought much paints to repair my house. THe kumquat tree and peach flower are the most important things that can't lack in my family. after cleaning the house, my parents taught to make banh chung(Chung cake) .it seemed so hard to me, but ...................
     

  5. ô dia, mình thík cái này!:))
    There are a special festival in Vietnam, who know what is this? This is TET holiday. It's about in towards end of January to February. The conception in TET is all the thing is new, like: new clothe, new housepaint. Tet market is kerb before Tet from 25 Chạp month to 30 Chạp month.
    thế, bà con xem rồi góp ý cho mình nhé, THÂN! :)) B-) :))
     
  6. kuckutkute

    kuckutkute Guest


    ô dia, mình thík cái này!
    There are:there is nhe a special festival in Vietnam, who know what this is it? (what this is nhe) This is TET holiday. It's about in towards end of January to February. The conception in TET is all the thing isthings are new, like: new clothe(s), new housepaint. Tet market is kerb before Tet from 25 Chạpe chiu cai nay roi month to 30 Chạp month.
    thế, bà con xem rồi góp ý cho mình nhé, THÂN! co vai mistake the thoi
     

  7. cái chử đề này hay đấy , mình rất thích .
    Các bạn chữa cũng được đó:)>-:)>-:)>-
     

  8. Tet is grandest and mót important occasion in the year in vietnam. Last tet holiday I have 11 day-off from 19th to 20th january. And I think I shall never forget that holyday. The first day-off I spent all time to relax after along year.
    Then I cleaned up my room and helped my mother decorating our house with peach blosson, kumquat tree and other flower. Tet is indispenable Chung cake and last year I leart make it. On New year's Eva my family got together to watch firework talk about old year and hope have a happy new year. Next I went to pagodo to pray for a happy new year for me and my family. I also visited my grand parents, relatives àd my friend.
     
  9. vibinhvn

    vibinhvn Guest


    Tet is festival important in Viet nam, It bring so big special significance with Vietnamese people when there, all the people in family will gather together and share a lot of things fun or sad from there, all people will strengthen solidarity. I love Tet because when come Tet, I also have lucky money althought I'm a adults. Special, Tet days will eat many foods I liked :D

    Em mới lớp 9 nên trình độ english hợi bị kém ạ :D
     
  10. vibinhvn

    vibinhvn Guest


    :pTet is festival important in Viet nam, It bring so big special significance with Vietnamese people when there, all the people in family will gather together and share a lot of things fun or sad from there, all people will strengthen solidarity. I love Tet because when come Tet, I also have lucky money althought I'm a adults. Special, Tet days will eat many foods I liked :D ;)

    Em mới lớp 9 nên trình độ english hợi bị kém ạ :D
     
  11. nogo24

    nogo24 Guest


    tôi có cho cậu này
    Every year winter passed, carrying the cold of it, is bustling around preparing to welcome a fresh flowers next spring. And of course, the yellow apricot trees loaded with fresh flowers sunny Southern fibers with bright pink peach trees bring beauty cold tender for the domain are two indispensable.
    Did not know how now, beautiful golden apricot trees appeared before me at home. Just remember that brief, his grandfather brought it on when going out New Year market. Listen to your mother said, was to bring it about, it's really very small. Yet now, it was a beautiful apricot trees, charming. Radiating trunk branches each branch is a lot of fresh flowers. The petite flower buds are pink sapphire carrier shy, waiting to be uncovered. Each flower bud is a red flame, miracles brought to light last year.
    Every year the festival is bordered on two brothers with stripped leaves the airport tomorrow. Old leaves, young leaves, fallen leaves as many as sifting down, covering the whole tree. It looks like a green carpet. When stripped of all leaves, apricot trees are left bare body carrying a plate full of flower buds. nearly 29 festival, apricot trees start to grow leaves. The young leaves on the trees gradually grow tight. Foil and velvety.
    1st Year, apricot trees begin to flower. The shy bud any day now in full bloom, showing bright yellow sheet of it in the sun shimmering on New Year's. In mai petals spreading wide. Each flower has a green calyx caught at the bottom. Inh beautiful pistil, the stigma small orange yarn, mixed with yellow apricot flowers characteristic of creating beauty shimmering apricot trees. When the wind comes, apricot flowers sent away by the wind and slightly sweet fragrance of it. Ecstatic aroma, can not describe the appeal of it. And every time the wind through the surf, the gently flew off tomorrow with the wind, beautiful magical fairy paintings. When the wind settled that, the flowers come again fell to the ground, forming a carpet of gold as the sun cover.
    1st Year, three to play, choose a beautiful apricot branches into evidence at the altar grandmother. It's nothing more beautiful. It is through this that the lunar new apricot trees, the family has received many admiring eyes and admiration.
    I love this apricot tree cover IET, it has brought my family complete cosmetic beauty. It is also the beauty of the traditional homeland of Vietnam, home of the South.
     
  12. vuongchomo

    vuongchomo Guest


    Có ai làm cho mình 1 đoạn văn về tết ko
    3 phần nhak : trc tết
    trong tết
    sau tết
    xin tks các bạn
     
  13. nhannok5e

    nhannok5e Guest


    Now! Show me all your magic :) Phê rồi :))))))))))
     
  14. nhannok5e

    nhannok5e Guest


    Every year winter passed, carrying the cold of it, is bustling around preparing to welcome a fresh flowers next spring. And of course, the yellow apricot trees loaded with fresh flowers sunny Southern fibers with bright pink peach trees bring beauty cold tender for the domain are two indispensable.
    Did not know how now, beautiful golden apricot trees appeared before me at home. Just remember that brief, his grandfather brought it on when going out New Year market. Listen to your mother said, was to bring it about, it's really very small. Yet now, it was a beautiful apricot trees, charming. Radiating trunk branches each branch is a lot of fresh flowers. The petite flower buds are pink sapphire carrier shy, waiting to be uncovered. Each flower bud is a red flame, miracles brought to light last year.
    Every year the festival is bordered on two brothers with stripped leaves the airport tomorrow. Old leaves, young leaves, fallen leaves as many as sifting down, covering the whole tree. It looks like a green carpet. When stripped of all leaves, apricot trees are left bare body carrying a plate full of flower buds. nearly 29 festival, apricot trees start to grow leaves. The young leaves on the trees gradually grow tight. Foil and velvety.
    1st Year, apricot trees begin to flower. The shy bud any day now in full bloom, showing bright yellow sheet of it in the sun shimmering on New Year's. In mai petals spreading wide. Each flower has a green calyx caught at the bottom. Inh beautiful pistil, the stigma small orange yarn, mixed with yellow apricot flowers characteristic of creating beauty shimmering apricot trees. When the wind comes, apricot flowers sent away by the wind and slightly sweet fragrance of it. Ecstatic aroma, can not describe the appeal of it. And every time the wind through the surf, the gently flew off tomorrow with the wind, beautiful magical fairy paintings. When the wind settled that, the flowers come again fell to the ground, forming a carpet of gold as the sun cover.
    1st Year, three to play, choose a beautiful apricot branches into evidence at the altar grandmother. It's nothing more beautiful. It is through this that the lunar new apricot trees, the family has received many admiring eyes and admiration.
    I love this apricot tree cover IET, it has brought my family complete cosmetic beauty. It is also the beauty of the traditional homeland of Vietnam, home of the South. Mình hơi ngu Anh tí! Phê rồi :))))))
     

  15. ai có bài hùng biện tiếng anh về tình bạn k. Chỉ e với
     
  16. ledinhlocpt

    ledinhlocpt Guest


    trả lời

    TET in Vietnam was the big celebration for the country. In those days every village, the house, everyone off work and fun way to reunite. Tet there is a divinity and the opportunity to refresh everything. The day he finished the regular crops, the villagers made heaven and earth Thanksgiving. SPRING people share the joy of warm, giving each other gifts to wish one another a new year and everything is the custom and many other means.
    Vietnamese people celebrate Tet with TET is a sacred trust on reunification, a new day, that day is a day of thanksgiving and hope.
    Days of Being Together - SPRING is always on reunification of families. No matter who trade, work or attend school in the remote, they often try to save money and time to celebrate with the family. That's a wish that all people, as well as people who go far in the festival are expected to meet and hang out with family.
    SPRING is also the day to reunite with those who were lost. Dinner the night from 30, before midnight, Buddhist families were invited to burn incense to the deceased grandparents and their ancestors who died of fun to eat with the children SPRING grandchildren.
    SPRING day or they also perform rituals, to offer incense to the gods according to legend was blessed our family is more healthy, more money, more luck and happiness in past.
    SPRING is the birthday of everyone, everyone is more so an old saying is open your mouth when you met each other a happy age. Age adults continue to celebrate children and the elderly to wish the children to eat fast or large and well behaved, good student, while the tool is to live long and healthy children are so happy.
    Date of optimism and hope - Year old has brought bad luck and all the next year to bring about full faith and optimistic. If last year's pretty lucky, then good luck message will last through next year.
    New Year many people off fireworks to ward off bad luck that people go and dance and dragon dance dragon lion everywhere, most shops are lucky enough to receive prosperity.
    It is often said "three-day Tet" but actually air all month long TET. The TET celebrations spread from within the family, to relatives, to neighbors and to the village, where the first is the happy spring. People invite each other to really slave cried many temples or churches to ask for more blessings and fortune. The village used to hold art and dance for the village meeting attended. Then the contest competition was held in the courtyard of the communal house to entertain. Everyone have fun together, they live in harmony and unity. That's great sense of Tet in Vietna
     
  17. minhpbc

    minhpbc Guest


    Có ai có bài hoàn chỉnh ko gửi cho em giùm cái qua email: minhpbc12579@gmail.com.
    Em xin cảm ơn!:)
     
  18. trannrinn

    trannrinn Guest


    Bài về tết thì tham khảo sgk lớp 11 cũng rất được đấy.◤(¬‿¬)◥ (∪ ◡ ∪) (*^ -^*) (●*∩_∩*●)
     

  19. In Viet Nam,Tet is a traditional holiday.Last year,i was very happy.This is first time in Tet I have been in Bien Hoa.I was in my uncle's house.My family and my relatives gathered.My grand mother,my mother and my aunt cooked Chung Cake and traditional foods like meat storage vessel,melon soup.We have many fruits.In front of the house was two apricot trees,the marigolds.Everybody was happy,and we shared what we do in old year and plan in new year.On new year's Eve,we watched fireworks and said to everybody"Good you have a lucky year".I love Tet so much because I receive the lucky money.Although one day,I will grow up but I hope to receive lucky money from who people older than me.

    Mới học lớp 8 thôi,chỉ viết được zậy đừng chê mình nha.:)